Dear Mr. Apo, you article has drawn many comments.  Don't see much advocacy for your position.  In fact after reading the article some readers cannot discern a single coherent position that you espouse.  Lots of ideas but little correspondence with each other.  You have indicated that a second article is being published and that the contents will contain information on a multitude of subjects.  You have also mentioned a "new wave of foreign intervention".  Would it be possible to elaborate on your comment regarding foreign intervention and maybe just work on fully identifying and exposing this "new wave" of foreigners and how Mr. President Obama should take your specific knowledge and observations into consideration as to whether the Papahanaumokuakea National Marine Monument should be expanded.  Thank you very much.