When you use negative stereotypes like snowflakes, (interestingly enough easy interpreted as a bash on the feminine), then you show your own clear emotional bias, which  will immediately discredit whatever you say after that.    

I'm sure you want to be a 'strong' conservative, maybe that's who your language plays up to?  If your purpose is to persuade independents or even conservative Democrats, they you might start writing in with more maturity/civility.