Nah, the bishop's perspective is superior to yours--always trying to "improve" on Christ's simple yet profound message of salvation and abundant life... as the bishop clearly states:

"That's what we must try to do: love one another after the example of Jesus and at his command. That's how you and I will give witness in this world to Jesus, to God who is love. That's how we can celebrate this feast of the Holy Trinity — rejoicing that God has shared with us God's very life."

What is it with your incessant need to "correct" others, even in this piece where the author simply yet poignantly admonishes us to bear witness to Jesus through His life and love?  Apart from your SPRS disorder which we have already identified, what lurks beneath this unquenchable, hyper-critical spirit?