What is the link between your first paragraph and the second?
Para 1 is about diocesan synods; para 2 seems to be about thoughts expressed in general.
If part 2 weren't expressed in the context of part 1, then your comment is empty.

Which is why the comment by ATF to which you are replying is more positive: suggesting that para 2  type comments should be made in para 1 type synods.