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Dec 19, 2008 | 1:10 AM EST

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


little lost and style didn't really do it for me. Ending song was pretty sweet


Rated 3 / 5 stars

bit weird

weird but kool ps. wit the hell is the black and white dude smilin at?


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Heres my take on it.

gonna give you a 5/5 on creativity and being extremely clever.
6/10 on the animation.
If there was a message it was too deep for me to understand, usually doesn't happen. The story was also too deep for me to comprehend fully. (like i said, you guys are clever.) If the ending with water was some sort of relieving humor, that was nice to do.
IF i had to guess, He saw something that he was afraid of and he became paranoid about it. His world was nice and beautiful until the day he saw the person within the darkness. The person in the darkness had been within his mind so deeply it destroyed his imagination. Once waking from a nightmare, Jitters( I believe is his name) Encounters a darkroom and is absolutely terrified of what is within the darkness. Within the bowls of the darkroom was only a gentle being with water.

I could be dead on or completely off. The part that was the hardest to understand was the nightmare scene with the moon and sun.
Does the sun destroy the moon because in reality the sun over powers the moon? if so what relevance was it between Jitters and the stranger? Was the stranger overpowering his happiness?

AS you can see I'm fascinated by this piece of work. so please reply with an answer!

Great plot + + +
Interesting story +
Music was perfect! ++
Animation could have been better - - - -
(The animation, to me, didn't feel right for the story that was being told.)

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Twist responds:

I absolutely love your interpretation of the events, although the sun holds a much greater relevence to whats going on. I don't want to tell you, but I will point something out:

Pay attention to the protagonist before dawn in his dream, and note what makes the other boy different from him (and his cat, for that matter). The opening text about the protagonist is important.

The paranoia felt by the protagonist is explained to have a cause in the movie, one that even physically manifests itself.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not great..

Not great, but not bad. It's definitely got promise. I'll be looking for more of your work in the future!


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

what :S

its was kinda cool but i had no idea what was going on :S