Reviews for Intruder
royai lover21 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Ayla-tan chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
LOL! Really good

Tch, irresponsible of you, Roy. *shakes head* You can't take a latern with you if you want to sneak upon an intruder in the dark...

Why do I get the strong feeling that Riza didn't really need Roy's help?

...Somehow, I feel sorry for the intruder...did he survive...?

Ouch...she used a bat- that's tough...must really hurt.

I think that intruder will think twice before he tries to intrude a house inhabiting a WOMAN/Young girl again XD
Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Heeheehee, so cute! Hahaha, I can imagine totally imagine them like that.
Deniece chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
That made me smile but there are stlill question unanswered. Who was the burglar? Why did Riza get Roy if she was able to knock him off by herself? What did they do with the lying body after...? Oh, maye that's where Roy comes to use... to pull the stranger out of te house? Anyway, nice oneshot, t serves as an image of Riza's strong spirit :)
Kari Nago chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
it's little OOC., but not that much.,it doesn't bother me anyway., they're still young at this story, right?

nice comic dialogue between roy and riza.,i think it would be better if you created it in paragraph form, that way it would look like it is nicely constructed.,

nice work, anyways :)