Reviews for Su Kaolla With a license to thrill
The 10th Wand chapter 7 . 11/17/2012
well crap thats the end for now. great story and definitively fun to read.
The 10th Wand chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
pftt I love that tiger.
The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
poor poor Keitaro...the lucky bastard...or not so lucky
T3Ko chapter 7 . 11/2/2009
Great story. Thanks,
asda chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
lol I thought you were talking about Type-Moon in your summary
Drifter950 chapter 7 . 7/3/2009
This goes well beyond humor into hilarious.

Sadly, 02-12-06 is quite bit past what most hope to see an update. Going to stick it in my story alert anyway.

Thanks for a "very" fun read!

May the MUSE always be with you!

Vermilion-ZERO chapter 7 . 6/28/2009
here's hoping this continues...
Scorpion1985 chapter 5 . 4/14/2009
"Naru snorted dismissively, shaking his head."

Don't you mean her head?

son-in-law, nephew, Daughter

They know they're names why not use them?

"Son-in-law is an honourable man."

The spelling is Honorable not honourable.

Of course, she hadn't counted upon the fact that Keitaro was no ordinary man. His inhuman constitution and a supercharged immune system, ensured that he had survived countless incidents that would have killed a lesser man. His immune system swiftly identified the harmful substance as it entered his body through his hands and instantly started working on breaking it down into something less harmful.

Ok that was funny i will have to admit.

"Worshipping you, my dear. You are quite lovely, do you know that?" Keitaro inquired. "I'm sorry, but you're so damn beautiful that I just can't control myself." he added, kissing her neck again, taking a whiff of her recently washed hair. "M, strawberries... My favourite..." he murmured into one of her ears as Miss Cashdollar found herself increasingly flustered, hoping that the poison would start to work it's magic sooner rather then later!

Keitaro? and by the way you spelled worshiping and favorite wrong.

"Oh, don't fret. I'll do you later if you want." the Queen said, completely focused on Kitsune for now, clinging to the younger girl and rubbing her cheek against Kitsunes in a very Kaolla-like manner. Of course, Kaolla usually settled for rubbing cheeks together, not cheeks and breasts while simultaneously caressing ones butt-cheeks. "Or if you guys are feeling adventurous, I wouldn't mind a three-some."

What... The...Hell?

by the way for got the ' in Kitsune's
Scorpion1985 chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
"He could certainly understand why Kaolla wasn't interested in marrying her adoptive brother."

wouldn't the word adopted be better than adoptive?

"You're my husband. I see no reason to pretend before you any longer. At least not in private." Kaolla replied and looked uncomfortable for a few moments. "I'm intelligent, Keitaro. Very much so. But I'm also still a child, there are so many more things I want to do then spend my days being poked and prodded at, whenever I'm not studying. I've seen what happens to other kids who share my situation and I've never wanted that to happen to me. So, I've played it down. I do well in school, very well in fact, but not as well as I could. I always make sure to make a few errors, not to answer the questions as well as I really can and the few times someone has sat me down with an IQ test, I've done the same." Kaolla explained with a pained expression.

Yes she is Intelligent but she is childish it's not an act even Ken Akamatsu said she was really childish and its not an act.

This one flaw will probably change the whole story line.
K and S chapter 7 . 4/8/2009
This is crazy!

I mean it in a good way ;D

Love the creativity, plot twists and random bursts of, well... randomness!

only one thing however...

Scorpion1985 chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
A couple things this time:

Whats up with all the "R Us references?

10,0,0 yen is about 100,0 American dollars.

Like in the Manga there would be specially trained guards to prevent Keitaro from jumping out.

Keitaro would not hide from his newly wed wife even if it was Kaolla Su (which i would enjoy (laugh)).

Most people wouldn't really care to know about the tiger.

Wouldn't the king be angry that his wife is pulling her son-in-law into her cleavage?

("I tried last night, but he got away." she added with a slightly disappointed frown. I wouldn't have ran, what a fag XD)

Like her carpet? her mom? you're a sick SICK person.(even though the brunette is not her true mom.)


I hate the jealous rage the other girls have it really brings my piss to a boil.


What an ass-hole tiger.
Scorpion1985 chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
You stated "Kami, how did i manage to wind up in this mess?"

The flaw in this statement is in Shinto they believe that everything has its own Kami, so you should have stated

"Kami of ?, how did I manage to wind up in this mess?"

Another thing why was a tiger talking and drinking bourbon?

Another thing is Keitaro is not the type of person to Drink alcohol on his wedding day no matter who it's with, he has a little more respect than that.
SS5Gokurulez chapter 3 . 7/9/2008
I think Naru, Motoko, and Sarah are psychos.
RandomDude chapter 7 . 12/25/2007
RandonDude chapter 7 . 6/26/2007

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