Reviews for Illuminati
Shawna chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
Great chapter. Great cliff-hanger! Great everything! Keep writing please!
Shawna chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Great first chapter. Keep writing please!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
I DARE u to Google "illuminati" and read what comes up
csp4 chapter 14 . 5/17/2010
Great story! I feel like I have beat up emotionally. Thanks
csp4 chapter 10 . 5/17/2010
Thank God! I was having an anxiety attack.
FreaKiki chapter 14 . 8/25/2009
I have to be honnest, i dont like the ending. How could she put him though this when he had already gone though so much? And having Marcus trying to be with her is wrong because if i understand it correctly the Illuminati is passed down from generation to generation and he and Marishka started it so he is like her distant grandfather! The ending just didnt have enogh of the happily ever after that i thought they deserved after going though so much. Sorry, it was really really good, just not my style...
FreaKiki chapter 13 . 8/25/2009
OH Man! How could you kill Alice? First you make her in to a sort of villian and now you kill her! I cant believe this! And you kill Jake too. Man this chapter was so painful but not in a teary way but in a heart wrenching kind of way. I'm glad that Bella and Edward are finally together and that all of the mysteries are clean up, well kind of all of them. I'm guessing the reason Alice was there is because she had a vision and tried to help, but why didnt she tell anyone? Or is that how the Cullens knew to come?
FreaKiki chapter 12 . 8/25/2009
I love that they got to spend the day together. It was so cute and romantic... and then it got ruined. Well i cant wait to see what happens!
FreaKiki chapter 11 . 8/25/2009
I dont know how much more of this i can take! Its killing me. I'm glad they can be together in the closest way but thats not enough! I cant believe Jake got in the shower with her and then told everyone against her wishes. Well i guess i can considering hes forcing her to marry him. I hope Edward saves her!
FreaKiki chapter 10 . 8/25/2009
OMG! I swear! These chapters hurt so much! I cant believe everything thats happend. It hurts to not have them together. I kinda feel bad for Jake because he really does love her but as Edward said, they're destined. I'm glad they were finally together.
FreaKiki chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Oh. My. Gosh... I think that was the most painful thing i've ever read. I had to stop and take a breather to calm myself down so many time because i was crying so hard i could barly breathe. It felt like my heart was breaking as i read the interaction between Bella and Edward when she was leaving. And i dont hate Jacob because i know that he loves her but i dont like him right now because he knows shes in pain and if he really truely loved her he would want her to be happy and painfree. And then this new girl... wow. i cant believe that the Cullens stayed but for Edward to be with this new girl... How come Bella hasnt told Jacob what she is yet? Is she ever going to. He's gonna notice when she doesnt change at all.
FreaKiki chapter 8 . 8/25/2009
Well i can see why you enjoyed writting this. Oh man, how could this have happened. You nailed Bella to a T because she totally would have done this. I'm so upset because you are totally making me hate Jacob Black right now! I'm upset about it all. I hate what Marcus said! He knew this was going to happen. I wonder if Alice lied and helped him! They knew this would be the only way from the beginning. It was always the plan. Is she going to tell Jacob what she is now? What will he do when he finds out? Well now i have to go dry my eyes and fix my make up from all of the crying i've been doing over this...
FreaKiki chapter 7 . 8/25/2009
Wow, and now i hate Marcus! How could he do that to her, after all it did to his wife, the woman he loved and possible mother of his child! Oh, love the fact that she might be able to have kids still. I felt so bad about the dream and just everything. Poor Edward and Bella. But i dont want Jacob killed! I dont want anyone killed. oh well i guess i'll just have to see what happens...
FreaKiki chapter 6 . 8/24/2009
O, Jacob! I feel so bad that Billy died! How can he not know that shes a Vampire now. i guess its part of her being a Varacolaci i guess. I like the direction this story is taking but i hate that they gave her a gun! Why? I mean she cant use it and she doesnt really need to. Jacob would never hurt her or allow her to be hurt! I know that Ring is inportant but i cant figure out why. PE was interesting. I feel bad that Edward had to loose. I'm glad things are getting better between the family again. Cant wait to find out what happens and what Jacob does when he finds out what she is.
FreaKiki chapter 5 . 8/24/2009
Poor Alice. I feel kinda bad. I wish that she had been forced or tricked or something. I know she feels have no idea how happy i am so see not only Bella and Edward getting better but also Carlisle and Esme! I loved the scene with Marcus and Bella. He is so cute! And the ring! I wonder how its supposed to protect her. What is up with Jacob showing up at their school but not even looking at them? Cant wait to find out! Again, now that i know when this was REALLY published everything makes so much more sence!
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