Reviews for Picnic
Polar Bear chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
That's kinda cute and I could imagine them doing it back and forth until Cowley tells them to stop it!
lemonpiefirefly chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Nice tit-for-tat there eventually. In theory I am fine with ants, and I know some places in the world have the innocuous sort you speak of here, but I had to suppress a little horror at this story because the ants we have in Texas are usually fireants (the kind that get on you outside seem almost exclusively so) and they don't crawl on something alive without swarming and stinging the crud out of said unfortunate victim (been there many times). So, with a little editing of self-imagined horror, quite enjoyable story.
Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I just adore this one, Allie!:)
finnhere2 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
OOOOH! I can't stop giggling! Loving this! :D)