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Old 09-02-2012, 04:35 PM   #1146
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

The new chapter is up guys. This is just a "foreplay" chapter. The main dish is about to come in two more days. Tell me your thoughts.

Chapter four: The battle begins!

The scene shows the arena from the point where the last chapter ended. Gabriel is looking at every combatant, analyzing them.

Gabriel: Then...let's begin!!!
Instantly everyone clears the battle spot except Livontes and Nirriti.
Livontes: Archangel Gabriel...what are the rules?
Gabriel smiles menacing: There are no rules young Livontes.
Nirriti: That works for me.
Livontes: Same here. Well then shall we?
Nirriti smiles: Of course. I'm sorry for what i am about to do to you, Livontes.
Livontes: I am not.*
The opponents are standing still looking at eachother. Slowly Livontes starts taking out the blade from his back.
Nirriti thinking: So he is going to make the first move afterall. I have to counter his first attack. That way i can use the momentum to strike and end this in a single shot.
Livontes stops halfway, but his hands remains on the sword. He smiles.
Livontes thinking: He is waiting for me to move. He thinks that he can counter-attack. I have to move very fast if i want to trick him.
Nirriti: What are you waiting for, Livontes?
Livontes: I'm just curious.
Nirriti: About?
Livontes: About how you will respond to my attack.
Nirriti: Well, you will find your answer if you decide to attack, don't you think?
Livontes: Indeed. I will find an answer...
Livontes hits the ground with his right foot, very subtle. At the same moment he starts dashing towards Nirriti, still holding his blade. Nirriti take a battle stance and waits to counter. Livontes finally takes out his sword and just before he gets into the striking zone, in front of Nirriti's feet, a giant earth spike emerges, aiming for the angel's chest. Nirriti barely has time to jump and dodge it. Livontes smiles and charges his blade with purple energy, as Nirriti is in air.
Nirriti thinking: Shit! He was aiming for this! I'm in mid-air, i cannot dodge so easily here!*
Livontes makes a swing and releases from the tip of his blade a powerful wave like shot towards his opponent. Nirriti points his hands forward and projects a dense black energy shield. The impact it's impressive, as the dust gets raised up, even though the angel was in the air. As the dust clears up, the panel shows Nirriti unscathed. He landed safely on the ground.*
Nirriti: Clever. Just before you dashed towards me, you used your energies to control the earth and you tried to impale me with that spike. Knowing that i would dodge it by jumping, you were already prepared with that energy assault.
Livontes smiles: Hey, i had to give it a shot.*
Nirriti: Don't tell me that it's all that you have.
Livontes: Not a chance. That was only to test you.
Nirriti: So that's how it is. Well, i don't like tests. I'm sorry if i'm moving to the real battle and skip this unnecesary blows.
Instantly Nirriti appears above Livontes and releases from his fingertip a dark ray. A moment before the ray strikes he appears in front of Livontes, preparing to slash the angel with a black energy blade.
Livontes thinking: Dammit...a two timed attack!
Livontes acts immediatly. He grabs Nirriti's right hand and uses his body as a stepping stone, by pushing with his legs in Nirriti's torso. He jumps several meters away.
Livontes thinking: So i'm faster than him. That's good to know.
Nirriti suddenly appears behind Livontes.
Nirriti: Don't you think that you're faster than me, boy!
The scene shows only the blood as it's spilled. Nirriti managed to slash Livontes's chest with his dark energy sword. The angel is holding his chest. He looks at his hand. It's dirty with blood. His own blood.
Livontes thinking: Dammit! He managed to get a shot on me! And it's a nasty injure. I barely escaped death!
Nirriti as he is walking towards Livontes: You let your guard down for a mere second. You were deceived for a moment. And you almost payed with your life. You won't be so lucky next time.
Livontes thinking: He is right...i have to end this...and fast...
Nirriti: Are you thinking about ending this? You won't have a chance.
Livontes smiles: Maybe i will.
Instantly Nirriti releases another dark beam at Livontes. The latter creates a dense purple shield and manages to block the attack. Nirriti makes use of the momentum once again and appears exactly behind Livontes wielding a dark blade. Livontes turns around and allows Nirriti to impale him in the chest. As he coughs blood, he also starts smiling.
Nirriti: I don't see what's so funny.*
Livontes suddenly grabs Nirriti's hand and holds him tight.
Livontes: I was aiming for this actually.
Nirriti releases a shout, and using his left hand creates another blade. He slashes Livontes's chest once again, but the angel still holds him.
Livontes almost dead: Heaven's power! Inside burst!!!
Livontes releases from his body a giant purple sphere that envelopes him and Nirriti. Just after the sphere enveloped them, it explodes creating a giant blast. Flames and dust are everywhere. Soon, the dust clears up and the scene shows the two angels in the same position. They are both heavily burnt. Livontes finally releases Nirriti's hand and falls on his knees. He has two major cuts on his chest and he is missing his left arm. He coughs some blood and manages to take one final look at Nirriti before crashing completely. He is lyong on the ground, smiling and looking at the sky. The other angel has a shocked expression, as he simply falls down on his back. Nirriti is uncouncious. Instantly Gabriel appears next to them. He checks both of them and declares:
Gabriel: Winner of the first round!!! LIVONTEEEESSS!!!!
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

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