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Review:Charlotte McPherson says:
I have to say, that left me speechless, this chapter pulls at my heart strings and brings out how cruel and devastating love can be and that people are better off without it

Author's Response: Dearest, Charlotte,

Let's talk a bit...
First, it is a wonderful compliment that you give me as a writer that this tragic chapter left you speechless and that it 'pulled at your heartstrings'... I think it is lovely because it shows that you have a heart. And your last bit tells me that you are guarding it very carefully.

I too, guarded my heart with thick walls and a determination to never fall in love and I remember actually saying that if I ever have a chance at love or money, I'd choose money (I grew up poor). But Charlotte, in time, I actually HAD the choice! Never had I thought it would actually happen to me, but I had the choice of being with someone that my heart loved and didn't want to live without or being with someone who told me I'd never have to work a day in my life. Can you believe it? Ultimately, I chose wisely and went to be with the one my heart and soul loved and I KNOW that I made the right choice. Every day I wake up and I feel blessed and loved and it is wonderful.

Unfortunately, hearts can be broken. Trust me when I say that I know what that feels like as well, but I can also say that people are not better off without it. So, I'll leave you with wishing you love beyond measure and that someday your walls will come down and you will experience what bliss really is. It is worth it. Do guard your heart and be careful, but do not keep it closed forever.

Much love to you,
Dark Whisper

P.S. This story does move on and gets 'less sad' eventually.

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