First, the students writing a poor foundation, the relative strong enough language skills and many students of the language is not refined, the same passage, went to his mouth to change their taste, and had a very simple thing but that he had spent a lot of textual representation of a long out. not only a waste of pen force, but also weakened the quality of articles for example, we wrote, 'After moving to think,' some students by their families for what they do to see his family for their love, showing family is precious, but when writing case, the necessary and not necessary to write out all there is no screening, no refining, people do not feel refined, there is not enough intensity.