A headline is the first line of an email and functions like a title. Only about 15% of emails are ever opened, so writing a great headline is extremely important for keeping the attention of that 15% and compelling them to keep reading. In fact, in most email accounts, you can read the first line of an email in the field next to the subject, so headlines are not only a reason to keep reading an email, they are a reason to open one in the first place.  Use active verbs and nouns to grab attention, as well as bolding, centering, and a larger font. Make the headline short and to the point, making the purpose of your email clear from the get-go. Compel the reader to think that reading this email will be useful, timely, and very relevant to their lives. Answer the question the reader wants to know: What’s in it for me?  Your subject line can tease the reader, be a call to action, be a current events subject, or be about a local place or event if your organization is strictly community-based. A good headline example is, “New York City Challenges State Natural Gas Regulations in Court” Get to the point right off the bat. Readers don’t want to be wondering what your email is about halfway through, which is a reason they might delete the email without making any donation. Be very clear in this paragraph what you want the reader to do and why you are sending this email.  In this first paragraph, you should ask the reader for their donation. Although in person you might want to break it to them gently that you want money, emails demand your “ask” right at the beginning. Make this request easy to see, such as in bold or larger font.  In your “ask,” tell readers what their money will do. If a small amount will do something if not everything, tell them. For example, if $50 will feed 100 children, you might get more responses than saying that you need $1,000 to build a hut. Tell them it’s ok to say no. Statistics shows that more people give when they feel freedom to make the choice about giving, rather than feeling pressured to do so.   Explain and describe your cause in this first paragraph so that it’s clear that you want the money in order to do something, not just get money for the sake of having money. Microcontent is all the short phrases and subheadings that decorate an email. You want to use your microcontent to highlight your main points so that readers who like to scan through the email before reading feel compelled to read the text.  Microcontent includes headings, subheadings, the subject line, and links and buttons. Use active verbs, descriptive adverbs, and nouns. Your goal is to get them to read the actual text. A good heading might look like this: “Donate $50 to Save a Dolphin” Make them bold or larger text so that they stand out. They tend to appear at the beginning of paragraphs or new sections. Write simple subheadings. You may or may not have subheadings, but they are useful to include when you feel that a heading is too short. Follow the same principles—short, actionable, bold. Telling a story with your email is more engaging to readers. The body of your email will contain this story. Remember that stories have a beginning, middle, and end. You may want to use an emotionally charged story to compel readers to join your cause financially, one that has actually happened within your organization or as a result of your activity. Craft the body of your email in short, to-the-point paragraphs. This is because readers are worn down by the sheer amount of emails they receive. Limiting the length of your email makes you stand out.  Bring in only one or two main points. Be very concise, no matter how many edits and revisions the email needs to go through in order to achieve this. Don’t include the history of why you’re asking for money. The uses that you give in the opening paragraph and your story in the body paragraphs are sufficient to explain why you need money. It may be tempting to add tons of links to your email, but this can become a distraction and easily derail the reader from your main message — to get a donation. An easy way to provide the curious reader with information without adding many distracting links is to have all relevant information on your website, then include a link to your website only. For instance, if there is research proving your statements are true, instead of linking directly to a long, complicated study for the reader to get lost in, have a link to that study on your website (and make sure the option to donate is prominent on your website). You may want to add one or two images to emphasize your point, but this is not necessary. In fact, colors and images can make emails feel like spam. Try to insert images only at the top or bottom, and restrict their use to when you feel an image is absolutely necessary for communicating your point or eliciting sympathy.  A useful image might be a subject of your charity experiencing the effects of donations, like an impoverished little girl receiving new clothes for the first time. Inserting your logo in an unobtrusive location, like a bottom corner, can be an exception to this rule, as it provides instant reader recognition. The final portion of an email is the call to action, and making it stand out allows readers to scan it before they read all the reasons why they should donate. This serves to inform readers why you’re emailing them so that they stay engaged. Be clear about how to make the donation.  If a reader doesn’t know why they’re reading an email, they are much more likely to discard an email. Make sure this final “ask” stands out from the rest of the email, and be very clear about what you are asking for.  Make it have its own paragraph, be in bold or larger/different font, and contain a brightly-colored link or donate button. If readers have to click the button or link, tell them to do so. If they have to reply to the email for further instructions, tell them to do this is no uncertain terms: “Click the button to save a monkey right now!” or “Hit your reply button this very instant and type the phrase ‘donation information’ into the body.” It makes more sense to readers to be able to click a link right then, and you will likely get more donations this way, so try to provide a link or button to your organization. Set up a website or online donation page so that readers can contribute online. This is what readers expect from a donation email anyway. If your email is long, it’s not easy to scan. Keeping paragraphs and headings short will ensure that your email gets a proper scan before the reader decides to continue reading or not.
اكتب عنوانًا قويًا. قل كل شيء منذ الفقرة الأولى من الرسالة وتحدث حول الموضوع مباشرة. استخدم خاصية المحتوى المصغر بذكاء. ابتكر قصة من وراء الرسالة. اكتب فقرات قصيرة لمتن الرسالة. أضف الروابط والأزرار عند الحاجة، لكن دون الابتعاد عن الغرض الأساسي من الرسالة. استخدم الصور ضمن الرسالة بذكاء. اكتب فعل أمر تحفيزي للمشاركة. اكتب رسالتك بشكل مختصر وقصير.