Essay: Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does

With the development of the economy, people become more and more rich. They start to pay attention to mental requirement like happiness. While I accept that job can offer happiness to some people, I believe that living environment is more important than job for most of us.
Admittedly, job can bring us happiness. People can receive a sense of values and respected from job. If people receive respect from others, they will feel achievement and self-confidence. In addition, job can provide money to us. 
However, people should concern more about their living environment than job. First, for most of us, job is only a tool to maintain our lives. Few people can feel happiness from their job because they have to continue to work more than 30 years. For example, Workers in the FOXCONN factory, which is the main manufacture of APPLE Company, just repeat one action more than 8 hours every day. These labor works cannot provide workers with a lot of happiness because they feel tired and frustrated after long hour work. 
Second, beautiful environment is one of basic physiological needs, which are the most fundamental requirements for people. Without beautiful environment, people are not able to feel happiness and will fell anxiety. Nowadays, the fast development of economy is gradually destroying our environment very quickly. Factories released a huge amount of wasters into river and soil. In order to build city and factory, people destroy huge forests. In China, some residents who live in nearby some toxic factories became sick because these factories release a lot of toxic water and wasters into environment around people. Even though local residents benefits from an increasing number of jobs which are provided by those factories, they cannot feel happiness from high-paying job yet because most of them suffer from cancer or other diseases.
In conclusion, it is far better to protect our living environment rather than focus on job or work since the goal people is for good livers.
Argumentative components: living environment is more important than job for most of us
job can bring us happiness
People can receive a sense of values and respected from job
If people receive respect from others, they will feel achievement and self-confidence
job can provide money to us
people should concern more about their living environment than job
for most of us, job is only a tool to maintain our lives
Few people can feel happiness from their job
they have to continue to work more than 30 years
Workers in the FOXCONN factory, which is the main manufacture of APPLE Company, just repeat one action more than 8 hours every day
These labor works cannot provide workers with a lot of happiness
they feel tired and frustrated after long hour work
beautiful environment is one of basic physiological needs, which are the most fundamental requirements for people
Without beautiful environment, people are not able to feel happiness and will fell anxiety
Nowadays, the fast development of economy is gradually destroying our environment very quickly
Factories released a huge amount of wasters into river and soil
In order to build city and factory, people destroy huge forests
In China, some residents who live in nearby some toxic factories became sick
these factories release a lot of toxic water and wasters into environment around people
local residents benefits from an increasing number of jobs which are provided by those factories
they cannot feel happiness from high-paying job
most of them suffer from cancer or other diseases
it is far better to protect our living environment rather than focus on job or work
the goal people is for good livers
Major claims:
living environment is more important than job for most of us
it is far better to protect our living environment rather than focus on job or work

Claims:
living environment is more important than job for most of us
job can bring us happiness
job can provide money to us
people should concern more about their living environment than job
beautiful environment is one of basic physiological needs, which are the most fundamental requirements for people
it is far better to protect our living environment rather than focus on job or work
the goal people is for good livers

Premises:
People can receive a sense of values and respected from job
If people receive respect from others, they will feel achievement and self-confidence
for most of us, job is only a tool to maintain our lives
Few people can feel happiness from their job
they have to continue to work more than 30 years
Workers in the FOXCONN factory, which is the main manufacture of APPLE Company, just repeat one action more than 8 hours every day
These labor works cannot provide workers with a lot of happiness
they feel tired and frustrated after long hour work
Without beautiful environment, people are not able to feel happiness and will fell anxiety
Nowadays, the fast development of economy is gradually destroying our environment very quickly
Factories released a huge amount of wasters into river and soil
In order to build city and factory, people destroy huge forests
In China, some residents who live in nearby some toxic factories became sick
these factories release a lot of toxic water and wasters into environment around people
local residents benefits from an increasing number of jobs which are provided by those factories
they cannot feel happiness from high-paying job
most of them suffer from cancer or other diseases