Essay: Technology inspires children's creativity instead of weakening it

Technology accelerates human's evolving pace. With advanced technology, many things that seemed impossible in the past, have become realities. For example, people in the past never dreamed of talking to anyone whenever they wanted or see someone overseas on a computer screen, both of these can be achieved with cellphone and internet. However, some people point that technology has made children less creative. I don't deny that technology may have some negative effects on children, but I think technology makes children even more creative.
First, technology inspires children to create new things. Children are curious about everything around them, so when they come across a high-tech product like a cellphone, they will be obsessed with its mysterious functions and eager to know how it works. For example, Bill Gates was attracted by the original huge computer, then he did everything he could to understand how it worked. After he had figured out all the stuff, he then began to promote the computer. In the end, he successfully invented a computer that was easy to use and lightweight. Therefore, instead of interfering children's creativity, technology actually encourages children to learn and to create.
Second, technology widen children's knowledge. In the past, children were only able to see things from one perspective. However, with highly advanced technology, children are able to get information from foreign countries and even communicate with foreign friends. Therefore, they will be able to learn about different cultures and different ways of thinking. Knowledge is the base of creativity. The diverse knowledge that children gained from different parts of the world, inspires children and encourage them to create new things.
Admittedly, technology may have negative effects on children. Technology has made life too easy for most children. In comfortable conditions, children may be satisfied with the world around them and refuse to make a change. Nonetheless, with the development of technology, increasingly more young people become obsessed with high-tech products. They kept researching new technology and became successful at a very young age. 
Argumentative components: technology makes children even more creative
technology may have some negative effects on children
technology may have negative effects on children
Technology has made life too easy for most children
In comfortable conditions, children may be satisfied with the world around them and refuse to make a change
technology inspires children to create new things
technology widen children's knowledge
when they come across a high-tech product like a cellphone, they will be obsessed with its mysterious functions and eager to know how it works
Children are curious about everything around them
Bill Gates was attracted by the original huge computer, then he did everything he could to understand how it worked
After he had figured out all the stuff, he then began to promote the computer
In the end, he successfully invented a computer that was easy to use and lightweight
instead of interfering children's creativity, technology actually encourages children to learn and to create
In the past, children were only able to see things from one perspective
they will be able to learn about different cultures and different ways of thinking
with highly advanced technology, children are able to get information from foreign countries and even communicate with foreign friends
Knowledge is the base of creativity
The diverse knowledge that children gained from different parts of the world, inspires children and encourage them to create new things
They kept researching new technology and became successful at a very young age
with the development of technology, increasingly more young people become obsessed with high-tech products
Major claims:
technology makes children even more creative
They kept researching new technology and became successful at a very young age

Claims:
technology makes children even more creative
technology may have some negative effects on children
technology may have negative effects on children
instead of interfering children's creativity, technology actually encourages children to learn and to create
The diverse knowledge that children gained from different parts of the world, inspires children and encourage them to create new things
They kept researching new technology and became successful at a very young age

Premises:
Technology has made life too easy for most children
In comfortable conditions, children may be satisfied with the world around them and refuse to make a change
technology inspires children to create new things
technology widen children's knowledge
when they come across a high-tech product like a cellphone, they will be obsessed with its mysterious functions and eager to know how it works
Children are curious about everything around them
Bill Gates was attracted by the original huge computer, then he did everything he could to understand how it worked
After he had figured out all the stuff, he then began to promote the computer
In the end, he successfully invented a computer that was easy to use and lightweight
In the past, children were only able to see things from one perspective
they will be able to learn about different cultures and different ways of thinking
with highly advanced technology, children are able to get information from foreign countries and even communicate with foreign friends
Knowledge is the base of creativity
with the development of technology, increasingly more young people become obsessed with high-tech products