Essay: Luck vs hard work

There are many instances that luck has brought people things that they never could even imagine. However, I do not see any rational in believing in luck to reach one's goals. Therefore I strongly agree with the argument that it is one's hard work that helps him reach his target.
First, if you depend only on luck for all your accomplishments, you are taking a great risk. Luck is something intangible and no one can guarantee that it would ever come your way. If it doesn't work, it would be a great disappointment. Instead if you strive hard to achieve what you want, then your hard work would take you at least closer to your final goal. In my personal experience, all my accomplishments were backed by my hard work, not my luck. And I never did encounter any disappointments of missing my goals.
Secondly, if you believe that hard work is the key to success, it would make you a visionary person. In other words, those who believe in hard work are clear about their goals and know about their final destination. They carefully organize the process of achieving their targets and continue to evaluate their progress until they reach the final goal. If you believe in luck, you would be clueless about where you are heading. For example, a friend of mine, who had severe financial constraints, had the habit of buying lottery tickets thinking that one day he would win a lottery. He was living in an illusion that he can solve his financial issues with this lottery. However, up to this day his luck has not appeared and problems have got further worsened. 
Thirdly, if you work hard, luck too might shine on you and take you some more steps further ahead from your actual target. For example, my boss worked tirelessly for his promotion. He looked at every aspect that he needed to qualify for the promotion. He realized that having a master's degree would be a great credential for him to outperform his competitors. Although he had many commitments at home and work, he somehow managed to complete this degree before he was eligible to apply. At the end he was not only able to get the promotion amidst a stiff competition but also got nominated for a foreign scholarship since he had more credentials than other officers in his capacity. 
Although it is good to be lucky, depending on luck for everything is not good. Hence I strongly believe in hard working that would not easily disappoint you as luck sometimes does.
Argumentative components: it is one's hard work that helps him reach his target
I do not see any rational in believing in luck to reach one's goals
it is good to be lucky
depending on luck for everything is not good
I strongly believe in hard working that would not easily disappoint you as luck sometimes does
if you depend only on luck for all your accomplishments, you are taking a great risk
Luck is something intangible and no one can guarantee that it would ever come your way
If it doesn't work, it would be a great disappointment
all my accomplishments were backed by my hard work, not my luck
I never did encounter any disappointments of missing my goals
if you strive hard to achieve what you want, then your hard work would take you at least closer to your final goal
those who believe in hard work are clear about their goals and know about their final destination
They carefully organize the process of achieving their targets and continue to evaluate their progress until they reach the final goal
If you believe in luck, you would be clueless about where you are heading
a friend of mine, who had severe financial constraints, had the habit of buying lottery tickets thinking that one day he would win a lottery
He was living in an illusion that he can solve his financial issues with this lottery
up to this day his luck has not appeared and problems have got further worsened
if you work hard, luck too might shine on you and take you some more steps further ahead from your actual target
my boss worked tirelessly for his promotion
He looked at every aspect that he needed to qualify for the promotion
He realized that having a master's degree would be a great credential for him to outperform his competitors
he had many commitments at home and work, he somehow managed to complete this degree before he was eligible to apply
At the end he was not only able to get the promotion amidst a stiff competition but also got nominated for a foreign scholarship
he had more credentials than other officers in his capacity
Major claims:
it is one's hard work that helps him reach his target
I strongly believe in hard working that would not easily disappoint you as luck sometimes does

Claims:
it is one's hard work that helps him reach his target
I do not see any rational in believing in luck to reach one's goals
depending on luck for everything is not good
I strongly believe in hard working that would not easily disappoint you as luck sometimes does
if you depend only on luck for all your accomplishments, you are taking a great risk
all my accomplishments were backed by my hard work, not my luck
those who believe in hard work are clear about their goals and know about their final destination
if you work hard, luck too might shine on you and take you some more steps further ahead from your actual target

Premises:
it is good to be lucky
Luck is something intangible and no one can guarantee that it would ever come your way
If it doesn't work, it would be a great disappointment
I never did encounter any disappointments of missing my goals
if you strive hard to achieve what you want, then your hard work would take you at least closer to your final goal
They carefully organize the process of achieving their targets and continue to evaluate their progress until they reach the final goal
If you believe in luck, you would be clueless about where you are heading
a friend of mine, who had severe financial constraints, had the habit of buying lottery tickets thinking that one day he would win a lottery
He was living in an illusion that he can solve his financial issues with this lottery
up to this day his luck has not appeared and problems have got further worsened
my boss worked tirelessly for his promotion
He looked at every aspect that he needed to qualify for the promotion
He realized that having a master's degree would be a great credential for him to outperform his competitors
he had many commitments at home and work, he somehow managed to complete this degree before he was eligible to apply
At the end he was not only able to get the promotion amidst a stiff competition but also got nominated for a foreign scholarship
he had more credentials than other officers in his capacity