Essay: High sum of money of modern artist

The amount of money people earning sometimes is unfair. In a field of art, modern artist may receive high salary for their masterpiece creation while labors should be break their bone for years to get similar amount of money. Although some people view that government should be take a responsibility for this unfair situation, critics against such view. I agree that in this occasion the government is not granted to hand in.
Proficiency brings perfectness in terms of art work. It is true while the modern artists who implement their creative thinking onto high value creation are paid with immense sum by the art collector. Also, the high sum which modern artists receive is related to the quality instead of the quantity and their rare talent. For example, a 15 centimeter Buddha temple made by hand is granted times in comparison with factory production. On the other hand, modern artists also devote themselves find a unique concept in which ordinary people cannot do, such making impossible become possible. Pieter Padang, Minion creator, has brilliant idea to alter part of song lyric "I swear" become "underwear" when the Minion sing in Despicable Me. He granted huge sums for such idea.
Striking contrast, labor working in the merchandise factory receive coin of dollar even they make a hundred of 15 cm Buddha temples a day. In any case, a musician playing "I swear" several times receives different earnings that Padang got because the musician re-plays the song without any creation. Moreover, government cannot equalize the price of creation of modern artist because there is no certain parameter to value it, art value is about taste.
Having said that the huge sums of modern artists receives related to their struggle in the field of art, while the term of struggle might different with other field of job. I agree that government cannot take steps to make the salary between modern artists and other job similar because art price is about taste.
Argumentative components: in this occasion the government is not granted to hand in
government cannot take steps to make the salary between modern artists and other job similar
art price is about taste
the modern artists who implement their creative thinking onto high value creation are paid with immense sum by the art collector
the high sum which modern artists receive is related to the quality instead of the quantity and their rare talent
a 15 centimeter Buddha temple made by hand is granted times in comparison with factory production
modern artists also devote themselves find a unique concept in which ordinary people cannot do, such making impossible become possible
Pieter Padang, Minion creator, has brilliant idea to alter part of song lyric "I swear" become "underwear" when the Minion sing in Despicable Me
He granted huge sums for such idea
Proficiency brings perfectness in terms of art work
the musician re-plays the song without any creation
a musician playing "I swear" several times receives different earnings that Padang got
government cannot equalize the price of creation of modern artist
there is no certain parameter to value it
art value is about taste
labor working in the merchandise factory receive coin of dollar even they make a hundred of 15 cm Buddha temples a day
the huge sums of modern artists receives related to their struggle in the field of art, while the term of struggle might different with other field of job
Major claims:
in this occasion the government is not granted to hand in
government cannot take steps to make the salary between modern artists and other job similar

Claims:
in this occasion the government is not granted to hand in
government cannot take steps to make the salary between modern artists and other job similar
art price is about taste
Proficiency brings perfectness in terms of art work
government cannot equalize the price of creation of modern artist
the huge sums of modern artists receives related to their struggle in the field of art, while the term of struggle might different with other field of job

Premises:
the modern artists who implement their creative thinking onto high value creation are paid with immense sum by the art collector
the high sum which modern artists receive is related to the quality instead of the quantity and their rare talent
a 15 centimeter Buddha temple made by hand is granted times in comparison with factory production
modern artists also devote themselves find a unique concept in which ordinary people cannot do, such making impossible become possible
Pieter Padang, Minion creator, has brilliant idea to alter part of song lyric "I swear" become "underwear" when the Minion sing in Despicable Me
He granted huge sums for such idea
the musician re-plays the song without any creation
a musician playing "I swear" several times receives different earnings that Padang got
there is no certain parameter to value it
art value is about taste
labor working in the merchandise factory receive coin of dollar even they make a hundred of 15 cm Buddha temples a day