: i think you should refer to everyone as 'them' and make it 'appeals to them'.
'... and then during a few minutes at ease'. i really don't understand this part of the sentence. do you mean it can be 'forgotten within few minutes' after it is read ? or do you mean it is so easy to read that it only takes few minutes ?
'... written to be thought on' : i would use 'thought of' but i'm not sure.
'... they want tell something' : you just forgot 'to', should be 'they want to tell' ; also you could say 'they are meant to tell', since it is hard to 