it’s my first story and i’m glad you like it.. usually i just tell him a spontaneous story before he goes to bed when i ran out of story books. and was raised from the dead. stand up pouches are very good choice for chocolate packaging. the thief had apparently gotten caught in the trap itself when looking for an easy meal. fortunately we were all looking for very similar things and we quickly headed up to the downhill tracks. more folks should do this really. 