over deliver is your best bet.
you have included too much information for them to process. it’s too hard to figure out what they need to do. it gives them a headache just to look at it. it appears that you are trying to throw information at them and may be hiding something in all that copy they don’t want to read, so they throw it away.
how to fix it: use less copy with bullet points for a quick scan. be specific in your call to action on what you want them to do and why they should do it. use fewer images and make sure that they work with not 