at the beginning of the paper. i suggest a method for golf course maintenance that i believe works best among the newest developments in golf course maintenance.
q. does the paper address the requirements of the assignment?
a. i have followed the instructor's assignment description for this class project.
q. what purpose does this paper serve?
a. my paper provides a review of recent golf course maintenance method. my purpose is to both inform and persuade.
q. have you clearly expressed the purpose in your paper?
a. no. i review golf course maintenance research and suggest one method that is better than others, but i do not directly state that i am trying to persuade the 