part of a fictional story. take harry potter for instance. in order to understand him and enjoy him, you have to form a clear picture of his world in your mind. you enjoy him because the author has the ability to paint the picture so clearly that you can dive into that world by reading the words.
if the reader can lose him or herself in your world, you are winning. you just may have what it takes to become a successful fiction writer. even more important though is that you must lose yourself as a writer in your imaginary world. if you do not see what you write, it will 