obvious when somebody does that and it gives an overall negative impression of the essay.
you are supposed to have knowledge and be discussing things happening around the world, so it is better if you can come up with things that people can relate to and know are true and happening.
my question is related to task achievement. in opinion essay, where one is being asked to choose either agree or disagree side, what if they whole essay is written in agree or disagree.
i mean to say is do i need to touch both sides of the arguments, although i have chosen one side in an introduction. should i need to add 