It is common for feedback on student writing to focus on the need to engage more critically with the source material. Typical comments from tutors are: âtoo descriptiveâ, or ânot enough critical analysisâ. This Study Guide gives ideas for how to improve the level of critical analysis you demonstrate in your writing.ou can also use paragraphs to push yourself to include critical writing alongside descriptive writing or referencing, by considering each paragraph almost as an essay in miniature. Within each paragraph you would: 1  introduce the point you want to make; 2  make the point, with supporting evidence;
Baby I Need Your Loving by The Four Tops. The Motown songwriting team of Holland-Dozier-Holland wrote this. After seeing The Four Tops perform at a club in Detroit, Brian Holland invited them to the Motown studios, where they spent the rest of the night recording the song.
BIOGRAPHYRandy VanWarmer exploded onto the music scene in 1979 with his hit song Just When I Needed You Most.. Released on the Bearsville label, it peaked at #4 on the Billboard Hot 100 and crossed over to the country charts.