2) Strong topic and concluding sentences. Your topic sentences should: 1) state the main idea of the paragraph AND function as a mini-thesis. 2) connect the new paragraph to the previous one (transitioning is usually a matter of using one word-- however, similarly, furthermore--or a short phrase--in contrast to). Your concluding sentences should: 1) offer a summary of the paragraph (its meaning; your point).
The camera at the bald-eagle nest near Codorus State Park at Hanover has begun livestreaming its fourth season of round-the-clock video to viewers worldwide. The video is available through the website of the Pennsylvania Game Commission, which partners in the project with HDOnTap, Comcast Business and Codorus State Park.
Owls breed before eagles do, so they try to move in before the eagles get there. Great Horned Owls and mice also nest in the lower parts of a big nest made by eagles -- even when the eagles are using it! Because of their size, adult Bald Eagles have very few predators.ald eagles also have a long, heavy yellow bill which is curved for tearing prey. Young eagles are mostly dark. They do not get the white head and tail until they are full grown. Bald Eagles live near water, including lakes, rivers, marshes, bays, and oceans.