Robert,  Attached is the draft review for Steve.
Please review and make  changes/corrections as you believe are necessary.
I could use the help, this  is a tough one.
Please let me know your views on the tone and message as  well.
I will give him  the actual review when i get back from Asia.
Thanks,

Steve Horn

Robert, Attached is the draft review for Steve.
Please review and make changes/corrections as you believe are necessary.
I could use the help, this is a tough one.
Please let me know your views on the tone and message as well.
I will give him the actual review when i get back from Asia.
Thanks,
thanks views tone message believe necessary let know use help tough make changes attached asia draft review steve actual