Brent & Peggy,  Memo complete with exception of last paragraph write-up of your promotions.
Sally made a beginning stab at it, but would like you to read over your  segment and make any corrections or additions that you see fit (Peggy, in  your case, can you fill in the blank).
When these are received back from  you, I will call her (if it's this afternoon), and final copy will be  distributed.
Thanks for your help.
Patti x39106

Promotions Memo edit
Brent & Peggy, Memo complete with exception of last paragraph write-up of your promotions.
Sally made a beginning stab at it, but would like you to read over your segment and make any corrections or additions that you see fit (Peggy, in your case, can you fill in the blank).
When these are received back from you, I will call her (if it's this afternoon), and final copy will be distributed.
Thanks for your help.
Patti x00000
segment make corrections memo complete exception x00000 blank received brent beginning stab thanks help final copy distributed fit write promotions sally