Mark H. has asked me to prepare an outline of an "acceptable" regulatory  framework for OTC energy derivatives that we could use as a fallback position  next year.
Here is a draft I've come up with.
Any suggestions?

Fallback Regulatory Position
Mark H. has asked me to prepare an outline of an "acceptable" regulatory framework for OTC energy derivatives that we could use as a fallback position next year.
Here is a draft I've come up with.
Any suggestions?
suggestions year draft use fallback position acceptable energy ve come mark asked prepare regulatory framework otc outline