I've incorporated my final comments into the attached draft (not red-lined).
Below are a couple of additional notes.
Footnote 4 does not appear at the bottom of the page where the actual footnote resides; it appears on the following page.
This may clear up when all the formatting is completed or it may be something that needs to be fixed.
Also, there is a line drawn above the footnote that should not be there.
I added language under #2 on page 3.
Our rationale in the second paragraph needed a lead-in, which I added to the end of the first paragraph.
For footnote 5, I deleted the text, which was from an earlier note of mine.
I changed the footnote to reference the new paragraph number instead of a page number in the NOPR.
The quote is in paragraph 7 of the NOPR.
Please revise the footnote to use the proper verbiage.
Thanks,

Final Draft of NOPR Comments
I've incorporated my final comments into the attached draft (not red-lined).
Below are a couple of additional notes.
Footnote <NUMBER> does not appear at the bottom of the page where the actual footnote resides; it appears on the following page.
This may clear up when all the formatting is completed or it may be something that needs to be fixed.
Also, there is a line drawn above the footnote that should not be there.
I added language under #<NUMBER> on page <NUMBER>.
Our rationale in the second paragraph needed a lead-in, which I added to the end of the first paragraph.
For footnote <NUMBER>, I deleted the text, which was from an earlier note of mine.
I changed the footnote to reference the new paragraph number instead of a page number in the NOPR.
The quote is in paragraph <NUMBER> of the NOPR.
Please revise the footnote to use the proper verbiage.
Thanks,
language number instead page clear formatting resides appears following footnote added red lined couple use proper verbiage thanks draft nopr quote paragraph