Please review the attached hypos and give me comments.
How do I make 2 and 3  better?
What other hypos should I add?
Maybe one geared more toward Alberta?
Mark

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Please review the attached hypos and give me comments.
How do I make <NUMBER> and <NUMBER> better?
What other hypos should I add?
Maybe one geared more toward Alberta?
Mark
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