Michael,  Sorry for the delay, but I finally have a revised version of your contract from our legal department.
Although we have made what appear to be substantial revisions, I believe the key aspects of the agreement remain intact and the revised contract adheres to industry standards.
Please let me know what you think.

Revised Contract
Michael, Sorry for the delay, but I finally have a revised version of your contract from our legal department.
Although we have made what appear to be substantial revisions, I believe the key aspects of the agreement remain intact and the revised contract adheres to industry standards.
Please let me know what you think.
sorry delay finally aspects remain intact adheres industry standards department appear revised contract version michael know think legal