I have attached two drafts of the response to the California Power Exchange's  November 11, 1999.
The shorter response is the letter I recommend we send.
The longer version has a little more substance.
Please give me your input by  5:00 p.m. Thursday.

California Power Exchange
I have attached two drafts of the response to the California Power Exchange's November <NUMBER>, <NUMBER>.
The shorter response is the letter I recommend we send.
The longer version has a little more substance.
Please give me your input by <NUMBER>:<NUMBER> p.m. Thursday.
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