As promised.
Call me when you want to disucss.
FYI - The letter is very  "lawyerly"; I'm not sure this is the right approach though.
Let me know if  you think this tone will do more harm than good.
Paragraphs for you to  consider are in brackets.

TVA letter, re Southern Interconect
As promised.
Call me when you want to disucss.
FYI - The letter is very "lawyerly"; I'm not sure this is the right approach though.
Let me know if you think this tone will do more harm than good.
Paragraphs for you to consider are in brackets.
let know promised lawyerly sure right paragraphs consider brackets good disucss fyi letter think tone harm