The attached document shows my proposed changes to Universal's agreement in  redlining.
I tried not to over-lawyer or make this overly complicated, but  in my view this needed a lot of basic cleanup.
Many of my changes are simply  to make the language more accurate (for example, in the use of defined  terms).
In a couple of places, I have questions:  1) In the second opening paragraph,  I don't know whether it is possible to attach the Proposal as an exhibit; if  not, ignore my change.
2) Section 4.a.
-- their provision for an adjustment

Universal agreement
The attached document shows my proposed changes to Universal's agreement in redlining.
I tried not to over-lawyer or make this overly complicated, but in my view this needed a lot of basic cleanup.
Many of my changes are simply to make the language more accurate (for example, in the use of defined terms).
In a couple of places, I have questions: <NUMBER>) In the second opening paragraph, I don't know whether it is possible to attach the Proposal as an exhibit; if not, ignore my change.
<NUMBER>) Section <NUMBER>.a.
-- their provision for an adjustment
make overly complicated change number know attach proposal exhibit example use defined universal agreement redlining tried lawyer view needed lot second opening paragraph terms couple places