David,  Please change the date on the draft so that we won't confuse it with the  prior drafts.
I would delete "specifically" from 2.10 (c), and add "or later ratify such  transaction" (or something to that effect), just in case they later learn and  accept the transaction.
In 2.10 (x), add to "due to an inability to pay, or other credit reason".
In  (y), add "or a contractual defense to payment" [could be force majeure, etc]  Again in 2.10, third sentence from the end "any interest, penalties,  attorneys fees and court costspayable by the Hub Shipper...;  3.3  Delete "prior" before "approval", and add "or ratification" in the  redlined section on refunds.
Thanks,

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David, Please change the date on the draft so that we won't confuse it with the prior drafts.
I would delete "specifically" from <NUMBER> (c), and add "or later ratify such transaction" (or something to that effect), just in case they later learn and accept the transaction.
In <NUMBER> (x), add to "due to an inability to pay, or other credit reason".
In (y), add "or a contractual defense to payment" [could be force majeure, etc] Again in <NUMBER>, third sentence from the end "any interest, penalties, attorneys fees and court costspayable by the Hub Shipper...; <NUMBER> Delete "prior" before "approval", and add "or ratification" in the redlined section on refunds.
Thanks,
majeure number transaction effect change date hub shipper confuse prior drafts approval add attorneys fees redlined section inability pay credit specifically