Bill,  Please make any changes to the attached letter that you deem necessary.
I may have included too much detail, but I'll let you decide what's important.
Thanks for all your help,

Four Season's Resort Letter
Bill, Please make any changes to the attached letter that you deem necessary.
I may have included too much detail, but I'll let you decide what's important.
Thanks for all your help,
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