Ross/Jackie,  Here's my list of comments to the most recent draft.
It is subject to  internal review, but this gives you an idea.
Could we have a telephone  conference to knock out as many of these as possible?
Thanks,

Response to most recent draft
Ross/Jackie, Here's my list of comments to the most recent draft.
It is subject to internal review, but this gives you an idea.
Could we have a telephone conference to knock out as many of these as possible?
Thanks,
telephone conference knock possible thanks gives idea internal list comments recent draft subject ross jackie