He said that 'your thought shall be at peace' should be 'your will shall be at peace' and 'it shall be said' should be 'it shall be proposed', and also questioned the arrogant form of expression using nouns at the end of sentences, and the use of abbreviated names without due respect.
「尊意安かるべく候」は「御心安かるべく候」、「申し宣ぶべく候」は「申し入るべく候」とあるべきとし、ほかにも体言止めの横柄な言い回しや敬念を欠いた略称の使用に疑問を投げかけた。