|Reviews for The Prettiest Thing|
| kayla chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
well people are just stupid. are you too dumb to read a long chapter or something? jeesh. keep it up. love the writing
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
i have slways loved this story and im loving it more every time i read it. great job kate!
| hellokiara chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
I love this story. Correct me if I'm wrong but have you rewritten it? I'm just going to try and say this without sounding like a complete perv but chapter 17 was hot. Literally the best love making scene I've ever read. Everything was really descriptive. Brett and Ella's chemistry is really strong and please do not dumb down your writing for anyone. I adore your ability to write long chapters. Update soon.
| LondonLi chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
Great new chapter! I'm a big fan of the possibility of Cory & Kyle so I love the mentioning of them. I'm glad that overall, everyone was happy this chapter; except Lyla. I hope Andy comes to prove himself to her soon! Sounds like she needs the extra reaasurance. I'm kind of appalled that you have readers complaining about the length of your chapters. Next they'll be complaining about the fact you use good punctuation and grammar! I'm glad you're sensitive to your readers, but the fact that you consistently and quickly post novel-quality work on an amateur site for free should make everyone increadibly thankful, not critical! Sorry for the rant; I can't believe the flack good writers get these days! Great new update. Thanks for consistent quality.
| Andrea chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
Omg.. noo! i like long chapters!... TwT... shorts... are.. just shorts XD.. btw i love ur history.. and i hate monty XD
| Jeanne chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
OH MY GOD! I love this story so much, xD. Personally, I love the longness of the chapters and your writing style. So proud of Brett and Ella and Joy and Trevor. xD Poor Andy, what happened to them?
| shy green rock chapter 17 . 2/6/2009
Is Joy going to be now living with the Scotts?
I can't believe they did it! By them I mean Ella and Brett! So how long have they exactly been going out for? About 5-6 months?
| Ro chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
I have just read all the chapters (over two days) and I think it's a great all round story, lots going on, so feels more real-life than the typical story. There are a few spelling etc issues, but really they are left in the background as the story progresses well, with good rounded characters (although perhaps 'Ella' is a little flawless?). I hope to continue reading it!
On another note I think the fact your chapters are longer than the average on this site adds to this story, making it more like a book rather than an online story.
| hippi926840 chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
thats pretty weird.
i actually love long chapters!
more stuff goes on so I don't feel that impatient for the next one.
anyways, whatever you choose to do, your writing is great so keep it up!
| Naoise chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
Oh I like the long chapters! But it's your decision and I will continue to read TPT because it is one of my favourites of your stories. Regardless of how long the chapters are.
This was a sweet chapter. I liked the Trevor/Joy bits. AWW! I also loved Brett and Ella driving to Prom. I could picture them sitting beside each other in the evening in his truck. It's a nice scene! I swear this story could be a movie.
And Ella's dress sounded lovely!
| JustLikeMe91 chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
I absolutely love this story and its long chapters. You shouldn't shorten it; they were perfectly fine before.
Are you planning on posting a sequel for it when it's over?
| citygrl chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
aw, i love the long chapters. it makes everything more interesting. i do hope you won't start making them too much shorter!
and i adore this story. there's just something about work:)
| nicash228822 chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
This chapter made me feel bad for Andy. Lyra should have talked to him in person about the annulment. I hope we find out what is wrong with her soon.
Monty needs to leave Ella and Brett alone and get on with his own life. I have a bad feeling that he will cause some major drama between E&B soon.
Short chapters or long chapters I'll be reading them. Thanks for the update, can't wait to read more!
| goodbyemylover chapter 18 . 2/6/2009
Why would anyone say you chapters are TOO long?
I LOVELOVELOVE this story, and i LOVE the fact that you make the chapters long!
And this was the most adorable chapter ever with trevor and joy, I think i'm in love with a fictional character named trevor actually hahaha. You really develop your characters well, and that is a very difficult thing to do, especially when you have more than one protagonist.
I'm so glad you update quickly, you are my hero, haha.
Keep up the awesome work and never dumb anything down for anyone! you just keep on keeping on ]
| SiobhanO chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
this is so good so far! im excited to read the rest :)