Chapter 18 is out and dumping

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its turning in Undead Unluck?

kino

Unremarkable

AXED, Ichinose >>>

Axe soon

Author is on the ropes. So MC spent enough days to train and have 56 fights, but never visited dining hall before? Basic continuity going to shit in 18 chapters is a very axe sign

Meh

Yeah, I thought things seemed to be going oddly slow last chapter but this is just not it.

Deadman wonderland rip off. Boring. MC would more interesting as deadpool constantly dying and going mad cus of the pain.

Major stumble, Author isn't down yet but he'll have to recover from this.

Technically it's fine to train, but I think what he should have done was to talk more about Mortsafe and its history.

i dont read alot of comics or manga so i dont know if this has been done before but its pretty cool to see a regeneration hero that uses strategy and not brute force everything.

imagine unironically using the training OPM used as a joke in 2010.

what a fucking shit show this has become.

Still better than that melodrama shitstain of a story that forces some twist in every chapter

What would you have done instead? If I were the one writing this I'd probably have nixed Mortsafe and make it more of an adventure instead.

>planks x 50

That's not how planks work, is it?

Well I hope it lasts longer than Ginka and gluna. You could kind of tell that series was going to just end way before the author wanted it to when the pacing suddenly went off the rails.

no idea what you're talking about, but deflecting criticism means you're a coping faggot

Mmmmm....I'm getting a bad feeling. Healing factor is one thing, but blood control? Bit of a Hail Mary here. Also 100 hasn't really done much for a while.



Think it won't get past the summer

Training isn't the problem, it's the power.

Shooting blood and controlling it calls to mind Deadman Wonderland and to a lesser extent Undead Unluck. Also going from 

>I still feel the pain.

to 

>The pain won't stop me.

In a single chapter is kinda dumb.

100 is totally fine with thi/ss/ituation

these. what the fuck is this "training"? 

this feels like the author never intended for this story to be a generic battle shonen and just came up with spark and this atrocious chapter because the editor told him.

It not training, it's for the MC to realize how to utilize his power. You can see that his training do jackshit and the thing that acually give him an edge is realize there are other way to use his power from the cook

Welp, how many times have we seen this happen? A manga starts with an interesting concept, luring in readers who are tired of generic battle shonen; then devolves into generic battle shonen, trapping the readers who had been hooked by the original concept and hope it'll come back.

If I had to say what went wrong it's probably that it 'could' become battle shonen and that the writer needs much more polish to push a real non-generic series.

>trapping the readers who had been hooked by the original concept and hope it'll come back.

lmao, what a retarded logic. even more people will drop this now.
