{"action":"created","issue":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/142","repository_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot","labels_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/142/labels{/name}","comments_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/142/comments","events_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/142/events","html_url":"https://github.com/w3c/wot/pull/142","id":154222312,"number":142,"title":"Proposal for introcution text (by Dave)","user":{"login":"mkovatsc","id":664090,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/664090?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc","html_url":"https://github.com/mkovatsc","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/mkovatsc/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"labels":[{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/labels/IG%20Re-charter","name":"IG Re-charter","color":"b60205"}],"state":"open","locked":false,"assignee":null,"milestone":null,"comments":1,"created_at":"2016-05-11T11:38:08Z","updated_at":"2016-05-11T11:53:54Z","closed_at":null,"pull_request":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/pulls/142","html_url":"https://github.com/w3c/wot/pull/142","diff_url":"https://github.com/w3c/wot/pull/142.diff","patch_url":"https://github.com/w3c/wot/pull/142.patch"},"body":"I created a PR based on Dave's mail to the list (https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wot-ig/2016May/0019.html)"},"comment":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/comments/218437444","html_url":"https://github.com/w3c/wot/pull/142#issuecomment-218437444","issue_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/w3c/wot/issues/142","id":218437444,"user":{"login":"sebastiankb","id":13832739,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/13832739?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb","html_url":"https://github.com/sebastiankb","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/sebastiankb/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"created_at":"2016-05-11T11:53:54Z","updated_at":"2016-05-11T11:53:54Z","body":"Copy of my comment (see mail https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wot-ig/2016May/0029.html)\r\n\r\n---\r\nI think, the first paragraph is quite good. However, paragraph 2 and 3 already quite technical. For someone not touched by our former discussions and working assumptions it is quite hard to follow (e.g., “This URI can be dereferenced to access the thing's description, which can include its relationship to other things.”). \r\n\r\nMaybe, the text in the introduction should be more generic such as that we are looking for technology building blocks for the application layer that forms WoT. \r\n---\r\n\r\nBased on Dave's respond (https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wot-ig/2016May/0030.html) I will make a proposal for some changes in paragraph 2 and 3\r\n\r\n"}}