QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Details related to subnormal vs optimal levels of Immunoglobulins May 2010 Newsletter p 1516
ANS: Details related to sub-normal vs. optimal levels of Immunoglobulins, May 2010 Newsletter, p. 15-16

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: There i a need for new visibility and openness in the otherwise closed city
ANS: There i a need for new visibility and openness in the otherwise closed "city".

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Our neighbors Denmark and Norway have a few though not as many as Sweden
ANS: Our neighbors Denmark and Norway have a few, though not as many as Sweden.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The performance comes to Copenhagen in March of 2016
ANS:
The performance comes to Copenhagen in March of 2016.