QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some provinces also have own models of subsides
ANS: Some provinces also have own models of subsides.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: For your money worthy you should buy original Slim Weight Patch Plus only from its official site
ANS: For your money worthy, you should buy original Slim Weight Patch Plus only from its official site.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Download one in the language you need You can easily modify this map file to force KBang show names in your preferred language
ANS: Download one in the language you need. You can easily modify this map file to force KBang show names in your preferred language.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If you want to know in advance what turns me off I dont like being made fun of or insulted
ANS:
If you want to know in advance what turns me off: I don't like being made fun of or insulted.