QUES: It is also necessary count with a variety of fakes and authors of not very reliable claims

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CORRECTED: It is also necessary count with a variety of fakes and authors of not very reliable claims.


QUES: Tourist agency  Recommended accommodation in Novi Vinodolski Croatia

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CORRECTED: Tourist agency - Recommended accommodation in Novi Vinodolski, Croatia


QUES: When a company or business is doing well its stocks become a hot cake in the market and investors want to buy into it creating demand which drives up the stock values

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When a company or business is doing well, its stocks become a hot cake in the market and investors want to buy into it, creating demand which drives up the stock values.