Ques: Check rates and availability for Bare Hill Holiday Village Then proceed to booking
Fix the punctuation.
Ans: Check rates and availability for Bare Hill Holiday Village. Then proceed to booking.
Ques: For dining at the hotels restaurant prebooking is essential
Fix the punctuation.
Ans: For dining at the hotel's restaurant, prebooking is essential.
Ques: With the successful return from this voyage around the world in December 1980 even Londons famous Tower Bridge was opened fully
Fix the punctuation.

Ans: With the successful return from this voyage around the world in December 1980 even London's famous Tower Bridge was opened fully.