Add punctuation: Collect fruit in order to get a high score
A: Collect fruit in order to get a high score.

Add punctuation: In seconds you will learn exactly what type of FACT file you have the software program associated with your file the publisher who created it its security safety status and a variety of other useful information
A: In seconds, you will learn exactly what type of FACT file you have, the software program associated with your file, the publisher who created it, its security safety status, and a variety of other useful information.

Add punctuation: He insists on pulling me back to that evil red stuff but then we have to cross a patch of mud and the path is right beside us just waiting for me to run as fast as I can on it which is great  but the old man gets sulky again
A:
He insists on pulling me back to that evil red stuff, but then we have to cross a patch of mud, and the path is right beside us just waiting for me to run as fast as I can on it, which is great - but the old man gets sulky again.