Problem: The war was called the American Revolution.
OPTIONS:
- After a few years, the States decided to return to England.
- The war was called the American Revolution.

A: Many years ago, the United States was not a country. Instead, the people who lived there were part of England. They decided they wanted to be their own country. There was a long war, but ultimately they prevailed. The war was called the American Revolution.


Problem: After counting the cars, we went back home.
OPTIONS:
- After counting the cars, we went back home.
- We then sat down and began to count the cars,

A: Megan and I walked home from school near a busy street. I saw three blue cars pass by in a row. We decided to count the blue cars. Megan and I sat on the curb all afternoon. After counting the cars, we went back home.


Problem: They set up a space in the garage for him to practice.
OPTIONS:
- Pretty soon, Tim's parents hated the sound of the trumpet.
- They set up a space in the garage for him to practice.

A:
Tim always wanted to play the drums. His parents bought him a set for Christmas. He would play them all the time. It was way too loud and upset his parents. They set up a space in the garage for him to practice.