[Q]: Would the following sentence, by the strictest standards, be considered correct? John read the book loudly.
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[A]: acceptable


[Q]: Would the following sentence, by the strictest standards, be considered correct? John came in.
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[A]: acceptable


[Q]: Would the following sentence, by the strictest standards, be considered correct? This your, this girl in the red coat will put a picture of Bill on your desk before tomorrow.
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[A]:
unacceptable