QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Dramatic on its own but within the context of a an entire PC purchase a nicetohave
ANS: Dramatic on its own, but within the context of a an entire PC purchase, a nice-to-have.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Tip Incorrect VCP file association errors can be a symptom of other underlying issues within your Windows operating system
ANS: Tip: Incorrect VCP file association errors can be a symptom of other underlying issues within your Windows operating system.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This allows the intelligence of Windows to decide the correct software application to open your EDT file
ANS: This allows the intelligence of Windows to decide the correct software application to open your EDT file.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Along with a lot of other families they participate in the annual bird hunt where they have to spot and photograph the rarest bird Victor does not have that many friends and is always loses but he wants to win this year because his worst competitor Daniel has broken his leg
ANS:
Along with a lot of other families, they participate in the annual bird hunt, where they have to spot and photograph the rarest bird. Victor does not have that many friends and is always loses, but he wants to win this year because his worst competitor, Daniel, has broken his leg.