Did I ? No , I haven't yet. No , just
No. OK , well why don't you do that and then make comments on what you want me to change ?
No , no. I 'm not saying that you should change anything. I I 'm  what I 'm  what I 'm   I 'm trying to spark a discussion hopefully among people who have read it so that  that you can   you can , uh , decide on something.
Mm - hmm.