His skill in presenting the reported speech in a racy, colloquial style despite the exigencies of a very demanding metre is also demonstrated in, for example, "The Magpie's Advice" and "The Dawn". He wrote other poems in which an alter ego criticises Dafydd's attitudes and way of life: "The Magpie's Advice", "His Penis", "The Girls of Llanbadarn", and "The Poet and the Grey Friar".
His ability to present reported speech in a lively, casual style despite the constraints of a strict meter is illustrated in works such as "The Magpie's Advice" and "The Dawn". He composed other poems where an alternate persona criticizes Dafydd's views and lifestyle: "The Magpie's Advice", "His Penis", "The Girls of Llanbadarn", and "The Poet and the Grey Friar".