His skill in presenting the reported speech in a racy, colloquial style despite the exigencies of a very demanding metre is also demonstrated in, for example, "The Magpie's Advice" and "The Dawn". He wrote other poems in which an alter ego criticises Dafydd's attitudes and way of life: "The Magpie's Advice", "His Penis", "The Girls of Llanbadarn", and "The Poet and the Grey Friar".
He showcases his talent for presenting reported speech in a dynamic, colloquial manner even when adhering to a demanding meter. This skill is evident in poems like "The Magpie's Advice" and "The Dawn". Additionally, he wrote verses where an alternate self critiques Dafydd's perspectives and lifestyle: "The Magpie's Advice", "His Penis", "The Girls of Llanbadarn", and "The Poet and the Grey Friar".