The conversation between human and AI assistant.
[|Human|] Analyze the given poem and rewrite it with a new title and an altered tone.
[|AI|] Title: "Redemption"

With newfound purpose, I face the unknown,
Chasing the dreams I have yet to call my own.

My journey now an upward climb,
Words empower as I strive for the sublime.
[|Human|] 
Analyze the given poem and rewrite it with a new title and an altered tone.