Once you complete a first draft, read over the story or read it out loud. Focus on areas that do not feel fast-paced or engaging enough. Cut down on long scenes. Or, think about how a longer scene benefits the overall story, adding to the suspense. Sometimes, readers may be aware of the answer or ending to the dramatic question upfront. But they may be willing to read the story until the end because the lead up to the ending is engaging and suspenseful. They care enough about the characters and the story to read about the events that lead to the climactic event. Before giving your story to anyone to read, proofread it carefully. Catch spelling and grammatical errors. This way, your reader will be able to focus on the story, instead of getting distracted by misspellings or misplaced commas. Print out your story and comb through it carefully. Let others read your story. This can give you a good sense of how others react to what you’ve written. Ask for feedback on specifics about the story, such as:  Characters: Are the characters believable? Do they engage in action that is realistic? Continuity: Does the story make sense? Does it follow a logical order? Grammar and mechanics: Is the language readable? Are there run-on sentences, misused words, etc.? Dialogue: Are conversations between characters realistic? Was there enough (or too much) dialogue? Pacing: Does the story move along at a good pace? Do you get bored in certain areas? Do you think too much happens too quickly in other areas? Plot: Does the plot make sense? Does the character’s objective make sense? Remember, this is your story. It’s full of your own ideas, and you don’t need to take anyone else’s suggestions. Sometimes, people who critique the written work of others may try to put their own stamp on the work. If the suggestions are good ones, then incorporate them. But if the suggestions don’t seem to make sense for your story, discard them. You might find it helpful to take some time away from your story before you try to revise it. Put it aside...

How would you rephrase that briefly using Indonesian?
Perbaiki cerita. Koreksi cerita Anda. Minta saran. Ubah bagian-bagian yang memang harus diubah.