为你的描写打一版以上的草稿。 记住，描写应该和故事一同推进。 坚持写作。

I'm interested in that, but I only have a few mins. Can you give me at most the first 500 characters of a detailed explanation in English about that?
Your first draft will not be perfect. In fact, it probably won't be very good. That's okay! Rewrite it multiple times.   Try to avoid adverbs. These pesky little words are often used when telling instead of showing. Your writing will be stronger if you find other ways of showing the emotion, or description, that the adverb is telling. Examples of adverbs: lovely, slowly, quickly, angrily, pleasantly. Read your description out loud. Hearing your writing out loud will help you understand the rhyth