Dyson: The proposal paper to add solar panels to the new outdoor university seating in order to charge electronic devices includes a section at the end encouraging student participation by logging opinions online in relation to the proposal  This is a vital step in the proposal' s content  Myers: The proposal to add solar panels to the new outdoor seating does not necessarily need student participation at the end  Our audience is not the students, but the administration committee that approves space and funding for the project
We should instead appeal directly to the administrators to act in the name of progress and technology
Proposal audience should not be called upon to respond to an ethical or moral obligation; this is considered inappropriate and unprofessional in the art of proposal writing.