text: Ida: Hey! I need a little bit of your help. :D I was in Hamburg for almost 5 months and I wanted to post a short text for all my friends and peoplewho made me feel better in a new place. It will be public so I dont want to make grammar or vocabulary mistakes :P I'd be thankful if you saw it and improve it as a native speaker :)
  Nancy: Hey! Of course - no problem :D Just send me what you wrote and I'll look through it ;)
  Nancy: How are you btw?
  Ida: Its time to say good bye! During my Hamburg experience I had fun, I worked hard and I took a lot of walks in the harbour. I also realised that #Fischbrotchen and milkshake are not a perfect match. But most of all - I met incredible, inspiring and freindly people who gave me the best memories. Thanks for everyone, who made me smile! + special thanks for my sister who survived 5 months with me and my Netflix obsession.
  Ida: Thanks a lot: Here it is (some cheesy jokes included, but I didnt want to sound too pompous XD )
  Ida: I'm fine, tomorrow I'm leaving Germany ;) But i miss France actually :D What about you? Still studying in Bordeaux? ;)
  Nancy: Hey, I couldn't answer you straight away - here are my corrections:
  Nancy: It's time to say... It's = it is; Its = possessive form of it, meaning "of it". 2 examples  - 'The building was missing its windows.' and 'it's a lovely day outside!'
  Nancy: "Goodbye", not "good bye" ;)
  Nancy: This is such a petty thing for me to correct, but here goes - "During my Hamburg experience , I had fun..." (what can I say? Commas are important too :P )
  Nancy: I took a lot of walks *on* the harbour - just like you would say: "I took a walk on the beach" not "in the beach"
  Nancy: Milkshakes - plural (especially since you next write: milkshakes *are* not "is")
  Nancy: Thanks everyone who made me smile - the "for" isn't needed, if anything, "thanks to everyone" is preferred. And *a* special thanks *to* my sister - again, "to" not "for"
  Nancy: And that's about it :P Hopefully this makes sense ;) But other than some really minor mistakes, I would say that you're in pretty good shape language-wise 
  Ida: I had a great teacher ;) 
  Ida: Thank you very much! <3 Even in French I double-check what I write if it goes public XD
  Nancy: You're very welcome :) To answer your earlier question, I'm doing okay - it's been a bit bsy at the moment, but nothing I can't handle :P WHat have you been doing in Germany?
  Ida: I did an internship at About You! Do you know this company? It's pretty new in Europe. So I was taking care of the french market
  Ida: Do you have exam session? o.O
  Nancy: That's great Ida! I haven't heard of it, but it sounds like you learned a lot and had fun :)
  Nancy: Unfortunately, yes :/ First exam's next week! (yikes!)
  Ida: Good luck! You'll do great! 
  Nancy: Thanks :) So, what's next on the cards for you after you return to Bordeaux?
  Ida: About you is an online shop,just like Zalando XD So i bought thousends of new clothes
  Ida: Next semester ill focus on my uni. I have to make 2 semesters i one - so 17 exams in June... :O
  Nancy: Oh gosh! Good luck with that!! (But think of all the shopping you can do afterwards ;) )
target: Nancy helped Ida with her leaving message to her friends who helped her settle in Hamburg. Ida did an internship at About You and will return to Bordeaux soon. 