"When describing the setting, don't focus just on the sights, sounds, and smells, but how the character interacts with them.
"Loko u tsaleriwe SMS a wu nge swi koti ku twa ndlela leyi munhu wa kona a titwaka ha yona, rito ra yena ni ku vona ndlela leyi munhu wa kona a a languteka ha yona loko a tsala.