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I'm not sure what to do atm.
A little backstory so you just see my situation, I live in a small town, half an hour with bus to get into the city, I'm commuting from this small town into the bigger city and then from there to a larger one for school, almost 3 hours in total every day goes into sitting on busses and trains, it's annoying but it's doable I guess.
Because of the fact that the town I'm living in has about a thousand citizens you kind of know who everyone is and even though it might not be on a personal level when someone new is on the bus you notice.
so this dude, maybe 7ft tall and not very slim to put it nicely was getting on my bus way home from school. the clock was about 8:00 pm and the wintery forest was completely dark, and he just stood at one of the more isolated bus stops in the forest because we have those in Sweden.
It looked so off already but when he got on and the bus driver just waved at him telling him to get on because the little card accepter thingy was broken.
he had a weird look in his eyes and me, who is very easily scared got a bit uneasy.
he sat down on the parallel row to me and looked out of the window, I couldn't stop looking at him.
When we got to my stop and I got off I saw in the corner of my eye how the creepy man got off with me, I've never seen him before and I may have been overreacting but I took up my phone and called a friend to talk to, she made me laugh and forgot about the man because I just thought he had gone away up to his house until I slipped on the ice and fell, I dropped my phone behind me in some way and I turned around to get it and the man just stood there, he was right behind me, maybe two meters (6ft ish) away, he didn't walk he just stood there.
I got terrified and I took up my phone and ran off, I know those sounds stupid but I really got scared this time.
I ran all the way home with my friend still on the line.
finally home i just peeked through the window and saw where i dropped my phone in the
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