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Oh... OH! Guess my edits aren't worth mentioning in the description!

No, it's fine, it's fine, I'll show myself out!


*sniff* :raritycry:

J-Just... a footnote... if you don't mind, that is... :fluttershyouch:

Edit: "wonderfly".


... You did that just to piss me off, didn't you?


Edit: "wonderfly".






Fine start, wonderful writing. Another smashing success! Only one problem: Not nearly enough wonderflys! We need more stories with these graceful yet peppery insects.

4184851 Ikr? Shim, get on making ideas for Wonderflys!



A jar of ether to preserve their beauty and rarity for the coming ages?

…And so It begins.
Ah, misunderstandings and mixed messages…stories just wouldn't be the same without them.

4184892 It wouldn't be realistic if the two just went at it like rabbits...

And if PINKIE wasn't oblivious to things... she'd probably be a changeling. Just saying. :pinkiecrazy:

Hm…Commencing investigation:
-Two personalities; Pinkie and Pinkamena, both inhibiting the same body. Only Pinkamena seems to be aware of this fact.
-Both personalities are infatuated with "me".
-Pinkie's childish naiveté leaves her unsure of how to act on feelings she probably doesn't fully understand. On the other hand, Pinkamena is fully aware of what she feels, and is perfectly willing to act upon her desires in order to get what she wants…which in this case, is sex.
Conclusion: This is going to lead to a lot of awkward situations in the coming days.

4184986 Oh, Oh-ho-ho... and you can bet Pinkie's nature will lead her to try UNDERSTANDING feelings she doesn't know.

So multiply the awkwardness by a factor of ten. :pinkiehappy:

This is going to be an odd ride. Pinkamena, the mature version of her alterego, and Pinkie, the childlike innocence that resides inside of her. I expect to see some awkward situations, but more than that I would like to see Pinkie, the childlike side, come to realize the feelings bubbling up inside of her. Doing so would force a drastic change in her. It would cause Pinkamena to no longer be required to exist. She would merge with Pinkie, leaving a hyper, happy, and mature version behind.

Such a being unleashed upon Equestria... that would be fun, and in some cases perhaps even nightmare fuel.

4185162 Search your long description, YOU KNOW IT TO BE TRUE!!!

(aaand done with Star Wars. Back to relevant comments! :rainbowwild:)

4185110 Oh... there will be plenty of the best and worst of both worlds being unleashed in future chapters, rest assured.

I didn't wait this long to edit one of Reaper's stories just to have this be a flash in the pan, it will consume all of Equestria. :pinkiecrazy: (or at least gain several likes & favorites... same thing, really)

This is gonna be good.

Hey, you posted it! And grats on getting featured, at number 2 no less! :yay: I still need to read show stopper. :twilightsheepish: But I added this story to my read later pile too. :scootangel:

4185761 Hey, I know it was featured in less than an hour! I was so happy!

It's okay, you've been busy and working your fingers to the bones. So it's to be expected.

It was getting very heartwarming and bubbly at first but when Pinkiemina came out and hands down wanted to bang, I was like...

4185913 Yep expect more from Pinkamena in the future!:pinkiecrazy:


I can think of 2 outcomes for this "Merging of personalities" theory.

The first outcome is very appealing…in many, many ways.
The second...outcome*curls up in a corner shivering in terror*

Well, ya got me hooked, mate :twilightsmile:
Ya'll got a fan in waitin' :ajsmug:

I await the next chapter with much gusto! o_O


4186245 Much more hopefully soon.

Huzzah! I'll be watching out! -_O Ignore the hidden cameras everywhere! :pinkiecrazy:

4186252 Hope you can handle naked male ass all over the place.

Not to be the worry wart in the purely fictatious room, (Believe me, I LOVE this Fic. Pinkie/Pinkamena 4evur :pinkiecrazy:) but I noticed QUITE a few issues that my OCD drove me crazy on. Particularly instances like:

The mare gasped. “What!? But if you can’t afford to buy a house, how will you be able to live here?!”
You shrugged and sighed aloud. “That’s sort of why I can’t live he-” She cut you off by shoving her hand over your mouth looking like she’s lost in thought.

If she is in fact a 'Mare' , then how does she possess hands, hm? It makes it hard to decide whether this is Human X Pony, Human X Anthro, or Human X Humananized.

Again, just a pet peeve, but yeah.

Pinkies -> :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesick::pinkiesmile:

Wow this is fucking good! I feel like there aren't enough fics out there that focus on how tiring it must be for Pinkie to always be there for everyone. Trying to be entertaining and happy 24/7 has to be absolutely exhausting even for someone with as much energy as Pinkie.
I'll admit I was not expecting the surprise Pinkamena molestation, though in hindsight I should have seen it coming. :pinkiecrazy:
Another thing I want to say is, this story has perfect story flow, doesn't move too fast, but it's also not slow enough to make the readers lose interest. So many stories that have good roots just end up messing up because of a crappy story flow, but this is probably the closest I've seen to perfect in a while. :rainbowkiss:
Anyways I can't wait for more! :twilightsmile:



I'm liking what I see so far.

~Skeeter The Lurker

4187027 Well, Hands and hooves are usual a good sign of Anthro. Plus the tags. But nevertheless, I will make it clearer in future chapters. :pinkiehappy:

4187242 Never was one for the bland clopfic that's just, "Lets bang!" anyway. Romantic stories are far more enjoyable.

4187521 Finally, I finally got a comment from Skeeter...


4187539 Lol Hopefully I will please you greatly!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

4187802 Pony and anthro both have tails.

4187864 Well that's what makes her a mare as opposed to a human.

What makes her anthro as opposed to a pony, is hands and feet. :pinkiesmile:

4187874 No feet. They never have feet in my fictions. That why I never mention feet and only hooves. :P

I always knew the collars in that cover pic were sending some sort of message...

4188555 Oh? And what message is that?:pinkiehappy:

4188603 Not exactly sure, but I think it involves how babies are made. :yay:

mfw reading comment::rainbowderp:
mfw after::rainbowlaugh:

4187880 Well we've gotta get some nice hoof-play, somewhere, then! :pinkiesad2:

4188624 Ah ha ha ha ha, there's no STORK in this story! Ha ha ha ha ha... We'll consider it, though. :raritywink:

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