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Review:bookdark_weasley says:
Good story, apart from a couple of typos and grammatical errors.

The only bone I have to pick so far is that the marshmallows would eventually run out, because food is one of the five exceptions to Gamp's law of elemental transfiguration. It clearly says so in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. That means that food can't be conjured up.

But I still love the story, so far. As soon as I saw the title, I knew it was a must read. You have a great idea of all the characters.

By the way, where did Audrey come from? I have seen quite a few stories where Percy is with Audrey, is it what J.K Rowling thought would happen to Percy?

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