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Review:Owlpost68 says:
This was a really fun read, there were just a couple things that caught my eye though (lol other than Tristen) You had said that he just arrived in town, when I was under the impression that his family had lived there since the Peverells (canon wise) so maybe that he'd been away for work and had come back?

Also when you had mentioned substituting Newt eyes for Frog eyes, I think you might have gotten something mixed up there. oops, no I was wrong lol. It was just kinda confusing lol.

Other than those things, this was a wonderful read :) I'd always been interested with this couple, and I'm glad it was a simple one-shot, but had it's complexity to it :) I thought it was a really great balance. Also, for a first, first person fic, I couldn't really find any faults, it flowed nicely :)

Great job! I'm glad this happened to be my 700th review :)

Author's Response: Hmm. I actually never got that impression - I assumed that there were descendants of the Peverells who lived in the village on and off, but not that the Potters had just stayed there since the time of the Peverells. Interesting - I'll look into it! :)

Thank you for mentioning the newt/frog eyes - I'll go back and try to reword it a bit to make it clearer!

I'm really glad you liked this as a one-shot; most people seem to really want me to continue it, and I was starting to be worried it couldn't properly stand on its own!

Thank you for the review! :)

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