View Full Version : The Phantom: The Emporor's Servant

Renegade Angel
09-23-2005, 04:01 PM
Hey guys, just continue from the other thread.

Renegade Angel
09-23-2005, 04:10 PM
Kaitlyn ran over to Gus. Good. He was still warm and he was still breathing. Barely... She kissed Gus again and tears trickled down her face. His helmet was destroyed from the Jedi Scream and his suit was torn at his chest. Gus's eyes slowly opened and she gave a shreak of joy. Gus sat up an kissed her one more time. They sat kissing for what seamed like a minute or two. Gus stood up and thanked her.

09-24-2005, 07:01 AM
(this was my last post on the other one, i hadn't realised this had been made)

"HALT!" he yelled
"Stu! Gus! run-" Jax yelled
"You will not escape" Rezillo said in a voive of hatred
Jax withdrew his lightsaber and ignited it.
"I'll make you pay!"
Jax and Rezillo started fighting....


"Ready your weapons!" cried the commander
"This is it!"
They could hear the rev of speeders and Ships.
"FIRE!" yelled a voice
Kenny took the shot...

09-24-2005, 07:18 AM
Oh Element Skater, i left some posts which had a situation with Stu and Gus in the other thread just to let you know

09-24-2005, 07:24 AM
this is my previous post...

Stu heard footsteps coming closer and then...
"Stu! Gus! run!"
"Jax?" Stu said, then the door closed and sealed..
"Crud!" Stu said, he looked around and seen a dark jedi, dead next to gus.Stu seen his Laser-Sword.(He doesnt know its a lightsaber.) Stu picked it up and seen a Ventilation shaft across the room.He Got up in tremendous pain and ignited the sword, he cut a hole in the vent and climbed in..

Its Amazing that This 5-Part Seris came from a good old story about Viper Squadron :)

09-24-2005, 07:29 AM
"Theres one thing i need to know"
"what is that jax?"
"I've already explaned it to you Jax!"
Rezillo's face flickered.
"and why me?"
"You have no chance of winning!"
"Goodbye Jax"
Rezillo kicked him and Jax fell...

09-24-2005, 07:44 AM
Stu Felt Like a had just been stabbed by rancors teeth, the pain was immense, Stu knew immediatly that something bad had happened.
"i've got to get out of here!." stu said, he backed up and climbed out of the vent. He stabbed the door with his weapon, he just found out that the weapon was what he thought it was-A lightsaber!

Stu climbed out through the door, the pain of his arm was numbing, he seen a mysterious figure at the end of a walkway,he felt the persons darkness, he then knew that the figure was the person who had done something to Jax. Stu ran towards the figure, his arm not bothering him anymore-He wanted Vengance For what had happend to his friend...

09-24-2005, 07:57 AM
Jax's mind was racing, everything was white. If this was death it wasn't so bad. But was this death? jax opened his eyes. The white light came from below....from the core. He was still alive. He was a small ledge. A very small ledge. It was amazing that he had managed to land on it. He glanced over the ledge. He could not see the bottom. He knew he must be close because the heat was over powering. He gasped for air. His lightsaber had gone, probably fallen into the core. He looked up. He could see the opening, from where he was it was the size of a postage stamp. He knew he had to get out. To the side there was a ladder but it did not go all the way to the top. Jax imagined it was there from when the ship was being built. Jax glung to the ladder which was hot. He managed to hitch him self up. The ladder groaned. He climbed as fast as he could. A part of the ladder below gave way. He could see another ledge. he clambered onto it. He rested for a bit then he continued. He continued until the ladder stopped. There was no other way out.
He got to his feet, People seemed to think he was a jedi...maybe he could jump?
He focused and jumped. Nothing happened. He did it again and still nothing happened. He stood there....he felt something...he jumped...He flew up to the opening. He stumbled and tripped forwards. His face hit the cold metal and he breathed the air. He stood up. Rezillo had gone. He had to find him, he had to find a weapon. He ran out of the room, the door was open and Rezillo had gone. Jax ran into the room where Gus had been. He had gone too. But he had left behind a lightsaber. Jax ignited it, it was green. Jax turned it off then pocketed it. He could no longer sense Stu or Gus, maybe they had run? or maybe not. Jax made his way to the bridge where he would face his old friend one last time...

09-24-2005, 08:05 AM
Stu Charged At the figure but it moved out the way, Stu looked at where it once was, it was gone. he walked to where Gus and his partner were, they were gone.
"What The Hell is goin on here!" Stu said, Everyone was gone and he didnt know where they went, but suddenly he heard footsteps towards the bridge.
"Jax! is that you!" Stu yelled, hoping for his friend to answer him....

09-24-2005, 08:09 AM
Jax stopped.
He turned sure enough he was there.
"You're ok! Do you know where Gus went? or....Rezillo?"
Jax had a pain in his chest
"Stu, my friend, i must do this alone, please i nee you to get out of here, get to your ship and here take this"
Jax handed him a comm liink, this will keep you in touch with me.
"Please, this is my fight"

09-24-2005, 08:27 AM
Stu took the Com-Link...
"Very well good Luck my friend, if you need this take it."
Stu Rolled the dark jedi's lightsaber to him.
"i found this by a Dark jedi that Gus had killed,i'm sorry that i cant throw it to you but well..." Stu pointed to his arm.
"Well im outta here, good luck Jax."
Stu ran down to the hangar bay and flew his damaged ship back to 'The Ghost town'. He Re-grouped with his friends-Alan and Adrian.
"Guys im back get to the hangar now."
"I'll tell you but first dock at base then get to the medical unit, i'll meet you there."
Adrian:"Why the medical unit?"
"Well lets just say that im in a sling to say the least." Laughing friendly*
Alan:"Very well."
Stu walked to the medical bay and lay down on the bed.
*Alan and Adrian Walk in*
Adrian:"Oh My God Stu! your arm! What happend?"
"Told you that i was in a sling."
"Medical Droid, can you create me a new forearm."
4-LOM:"Very well master Zandar."
Stu Went to get his new Robotic arm fited.....

09-24-2005, 10:52 AM
Jax picked up the lightsaber.
He watched Stu go. When he was out of sight Jax continued to the bridge.
He reached the bridge door and walked in.
The bridge was full of people. Officers, dark jedi and at the main control pannel was Rezillo.
An officer looked at him.
Everyone turned. Rezillo looked shocked.
"Surprised to see me?"
"you...But how? no matter" Rezillo looked at the dark jedi and nodded.
They jumped up and ignited their lightsabers
Jax got both of his out and ignited them and smiled
"Bring it on"
Jax jumped and kicked on in the head
Rezillo circled the fight and spoke to jax
"You have learned well..."
Jax stabbed a Draak Jedi
"...but you will not win"
Jax took out the last dark jedi and turned to Rezillo
Rezillo got his lightsaber and ignited both ends
"It's double bladed" He said at the look on Jax's face
Rezillo kicked a storm troopers helmet at Jax and again they began to fight
Jax was beter this time. He jumped and dodged. Rezillo seemed shocked.
"how did you...?"
Rezillo slashed at Jax but jax jumped onto some controls. When Rezillo's slash made contact with it they sparked and Rezillo cried out in anger.
Jax jumped and flipped over Rezillo's head and kicked his lightsaber out of his hands.
"Jax wait" he said as jax's blade almost touched his throat
"It's me....your friend Rezillo!"
Jax stood over him
"I Rezillo I knew is dead" Jax said simply
Jax raised his blade but Rezillo used the force to get his lightsaber back.he ignited it but Jax sliced it in half.
"what are you?"
"Im a jedi" Jax said
Jax kicked Rezillo backwards
Rezillo grabed a dark jedi's lightsaber and a imperial pilots helmet and smiled.
He threw the lightsaber at the glass and it cracked. He put the pilot helmet on and got out a harpoon. He let go and shot the harpoon at the wall. He was sucked out. The emergency cover was applied and Jax could breath aagin but Rezillo Had gone.
Jax ran to the hanger but before he got to His B-wing he remembered something. he took a seismic charge he got from Stu's firespray ship. He ran back to the bridge and put the timer on, it was set to 7 minutes. On the way to his ship he saw Gus.
"Gus theres a bomb on here get out!"
Jax jumped into his B-wing and spead out. He saw a ship in the distance. It was Rezillo's firespray.
"Im coming to get you" Jax said softly, and spead off after Rezillo.....

Renegade Angel
09-24-2005, 12:17 PM
Jax didn't understand... gus had no energy at all left in his body. He would die anyways. a lose-lose situation... No. Gus ahd these things happen before, and he still made it. but it was getting hard for him to breath.... Kaitlyn picked him up and carried him to her ship. it was stil working... barely. She put him in the back and took off.
"GOOOOO!" She yelled through the com.
"Yes, mam" replied a captain.

09-24-2005, 10:10 PM
Alan:"Sure thing Aid."
Adrian Flew off into the battle..
"Ok, Time to help destroy the imperial remnant."

09-25-2005, 11:58 PM
Stu Came out of the operating room...
"Good as new."
"Alan, Wheres Adrian?"
Alan:"Aid flew off into the battle.He Did not return."
"Oh No."
Alan:"Wait here comes Captain Jackson."
Captain:"I have some bad news for you Admiral Zandar, Your second, Adrian Hansen Has been K.I.A(Killed In Action.)
"He always was a battle-monger.
Captain:"Well its just you two now, do you want any extra reinforcments?"
"We'll See about that."
Stu and Alan Walked off into the bridge.....

09-26-2005, 08:29 AM
Stu Thought about adding some more recruits into Green Squadron, but then He and Alan were good enough to do it by themselfs.
"Hmm... how about we recruit 3 new perople then?" Stu asked Alan.
Alan:"Its up to you man."
"Right, lets go."

Stu and Alan walked up to captain Jackson..
"I'll take three recruits ok." Stu said.
Captain:"Sure, I'll show you the recruits."
"Lets go then."
The Captain showed Stu 8 recruits, but stu picked the 3 he fancied....

Recruit 1.
Name: Fierro Montiero.
Faction:Rebel Alliance.(duh)
Class:Pilot but is also skilled in hacking.
Bio: Fierro is a great pilot but started off as a Hacker for the rebel Alliance.

Recruit 2.
Name:Nicole Baxter.
Faction:Rebel Alliance.
Class:Pilot but is also Skilled in Stealth.
Bio: Sneaky yet trustworthy, Nicole can dogfight imperials easily in her own ship-A special B-Wing.

And the final recruit Stu fancied quite a bit...
Recruit 3.
Name: Rachel Polson.
Age: 14.
Faction: Rebel Alliance.
Class: Pilot, but is also good in Hand-To-Hand combat.
Bio: Rachel was found by the Alliance during a Cantina brawl.

Stu walked up to the three recruits....
"Ladies and gentleman, I am the Squad commander, Admiral Stuart Zandar, But you may call me Stu. i hope you all know the situation so get ready."
Recruits:"Yes sir."
Stu walked up to Rachel..
"Rachel i know this is quick but would you like to be my Second in control?"
Rach:"Whats with the quickness?"
"i dont know but maybe its because i already sorta like you."
Rachel thought that Stu was perving on her...
*Rachel Slaps Stu in the face."
"Oww,What was that for?"
Rach:"Dont be Dumb Stu, i know that your trying to get me in bed!"
"Rachel what Makes you think that."
Rach:"Ok-Ok maybe you were'nt but dont try it because if you do you'll have a boot print on your crotch."
Stu backed off a little bit..
Rach:"I'm sorry but im just a little edgy about this."
"i can understand that, so just relax and if you need backup we'll help you ok, we're a team."
Rach:"Very well, sorry about the slap."
"heh its ok."
"Everyone Get ready!"
Green squadron got ready to fly out into the battle.....

09-26-2005, 12:07 PM
while jax tailed Rezillo Don was in trouble, don does also not know that Jax escaped the explosion...
"Damn it!"
Blue Squadron had lost most of their pilots only a few remained.
"Don what do we do?" Dave asked in panic
"Keep a steady head!" Don yelled back
Over intercomm: "we need reinforcments now!"
"copy that blue leader we are sending out green group now!"
Carlson was being tailed by a Tie. His Y-wing was in the path of it's fire power but before it took it's shot Dave shot it down.
"Thanks Dave"
"No problem Carlson"
"Blue leader this is "the nemesis" (a carrier) we are approaching your position we have fresh troups and pilots we will release them immediatly!"
"Thank you commander"
Don dodged Tie fire and barrel rolled as he attacked a star destroyer. Explosions rippled along it, it's shield had given way and it was heavily damaged. The star destroyers bridge was in flames and the star destroyer crashed into another causing a vast explosion. even so the imperials still out numbered them. The rebel defences were giving way, the rebel cruisers had desighned vast energy shields to protect them nothing could get it, but things could go out. If a ship needed to return they had to be granted access. Don's ship was already damaged from his and Jax's attack on a star destroyers insides and now it was worse one of the wings was dmaged badly and the cockpit controls were reading fuel low.
"Command this is Blue Group requesting permission to come back for refueling"
"Permission granted, wait a few moments we are releasing Yellow Group now they will cover your re-entry"
"thank you command"
As Don and the remaining blue group fighters were close to the shields a swarm of ties follwowed them. There was a special re-entry point, if the whol shield went down the rebel cruisers were doomed but a small patch was clearly marked where they could re-enter. Don could see yellow group speeding towards them on the other side of the shield they were also follwowed by Orange group and were in custom D-wings"
As yellow and Orange group left the protection of the shield they opened fire on the ties. This gave blue group a chance to get in. once they were in they made their way to the "ghost town" and docked. As they got out of their ships for a breather they met Stu.
Don looked at him
"Where's Jax?" he demanded...

The trooper fell to the floor. All at once both sides opened fire. The ebel fort rained down death from above. The imeperials were in disaray explosives, napalm everything the rebels had was was thrown at them. An AT-St took a hit and exploded in a burst of flames. Rebel snow speeders were trying to deal with at AT-At and Y wings were bombing the paths to the fort. When more imperial drop ships arrived the Y wings attacked them. A few were take out but some got past.Those that dis get past released their troops and they were bombarded by missiles and napalm. The soliders hit the floor either dead or being burnt alive. the ground batlle had begun...

Renegade Angel
09-26-2005, 03:58 PM
(( Sheesh! Racheals over reactive...))

Kaitlyn opened fire on a horde of TIEs. She wondered where they were... When they escaped the explosion, a Star Destoryer went into hyperspace, and they got too close. They had been sucked in and had no idea where they were.
"Oh great" said Kaitlyn
"Stranded with Imperials..."
"Hang on," Gus started "These guys have to make a jump back to Normal SPace sooner or later..."
"Good Idea"
Tehy finished off the ties and headed for the Star Destroyer. Perfect. it was entering Slipspace, about to make a jump.
Suddenly, a flash of white filled the viewscreen and they appeared in the middle of a space battle.
"Where's Jax?" asked Gus

09-26-2005, 04:19 PM
(well what do you expect? women...can't live with them can't live without them :D )

Jax tailed Rezillo to the planet below (this planet dosn't seam to have a name but oh well, from now on...planet X...lets be original) Jax landed a few feet away from Rezillo. Jax jumped out and stopped rezillo from running. In the distance they could hear explosions. Jax got out his lightsabers and ignited them, Rezillo got out his duel lightsaber.
"another one ay? scared that i might win if you have a single bladed lightsaber?"
"ha this just gives me...err...more killing oppurtunity. You do know they are harder to master right?"
"yeah what ever"
Rezillo made the first move he ran at jax and tried to slash at him. Jax jumped onto his B wing, rezillo looked at the B wing and then at Jax.
"Im surprised this peice of junk still works"
"You'd be surprised, this baby has saved my life many times"
"hmmm....i seem to remember you also flying that tin can too..the A wing"
"thats custom built, the fastest fighter in the fleet"
"that's nothing to boast about"
Rezillo then looked at the big V-4 written on the body and viper on the wings.
"you named it after your position in viper squadron?" and there was something in his voice that made Jax lower his blade
"Rezillo...you were my best friend...why?" Jax said with a seriousness Rezillo could not ignore
Rezillo looked up at him almost tearful
"Jax...I...Never...i don't want to kill....DAMN YOU SCUM!" and to jax surprise Rezillo dropped to his knees and threw his lightsaber to the ground. He broke down in front of him. Jax put his weapons down. He ran to his friend. Rezillo was crying, he grabbed Jax's arm.
"Jax...Forgive me!"
"I...Rezillo...I...you...yes my friend"
"Thank you...Boss"
They imbraced
They returned to The rebel cruiser the ghost town. As they docked a few pilots ran over to them. As Jax got out Don ran to him
"Jax you're ok! what happened? the explosion, i thought you'd....REZILLO?"
Rezillo exited his firespray...he looked a real mess.
A few pilots stared
Rezillo looked around as if he was home
"I'll explain later" Jax said to Don
Jax took Rezillo to a medical unit where he was drugged so he would sleep. while he slept his brain waves were monitored. Meanwhile Jax filled the captain in...
"So he's been alive for all these years?"
"no longer the only survivor of Viper Squadron now then Jax" said th captain winking at him
"No sir"
Jax felt calmer than he had been in a long time, he no longer felt hate or anger. He was happy behind describing it, he had rezillo back. Jax went back to the medi unit where Rezillo was changing into a yellow jump suit.
"I have something to show you" Jax said smiling
They entered a seperate hanger and there was Rezillo's old B wing
"you got the Shark back up?"
(long story, i wrote a story ages ago at trhe beging of the r/p viper squadron and yeah just a story of how Jax got into viper and stuff, if it wasnt sooooo long i would post it. but anyway, the Shark is Rezillo's old B wing, the one he used in viper squadron's last mission was a normal one)
The V-2 gleamed on the wings and body.
Rezillo Turned to Jax with tears in is eyes
"thank you my friend" They hugged again
Jax got a ladder up and glambered up to the cock pit where he threw Rezillo's old helmet down. Jax turned to go but Rezillo stopped him
"one more time? for viper squadron?"
Jax smiled
"For Viper Squadron"
Jax got into his B wing and they took off to take on the imperials one more time....

09-26-2005, 04:27 PM
They all cheered.
"but jax i can't give orders to you...you are higher ranking than me"
another cheer...
They all raced into battle...

Renegade Angel
09-26-2005, 05:03 PM
Kaitlyn turned around.
"What? Viper?"
"No time to explain!"

09-27-2005, 07:39 AM
"Green Squadron, Lets get moving!" Stu ordered.
Green Squadron Flew out into the battle...
"Green Squadron report-in"
"G-1 Standing by."(Stu.)
"G-2 Standing by."(Alan).
"G-3 Standing by."(Fierro.)
"G-4 Standing by."(Nicole.)
"G-5 Standing by."(Rachel.)
Nicole:"Fair Enough."
Alan:"Just Like the good old days."


09-27-2005, 01:37 PM
"I assure you Gus im quite alive" said Rezillo
Jax smiled
"Don't worry Gus I''l Explain Later right now we are gunna finish this once and for all!"
Viper Squadron moved into attack. They worked as a seem less team covering each other as they attacked. Carlson and Jat looped over some Tie fighters that were trailing them and blasted them out of space. Jax Dived, Rezillo followed. Don and Dave headed to the bridge. They fired and the bridge rippled as it's shields were tested. The star destroyer was weak and was going to go quickly. Jax and Rezillo opened fire on the engines and the shield and the engines gave way. The Star Destroyers ground to a halt. Carlon and Jay shot at the bridge and explosions rippled along it. All at once the members of viper sqaudron fired a torpedo at the birdge and the star destroyer's bridge exploded. The body of the star destroyer floated helplessly and exploded. they clebrated the small victory but little did they know what was in store....

Renegade Angel
09-27-2005, 03:38 PM
(( Wow... I looked through the Original Phantom thread, and our RPG skills have improved greatly! We used to make one line posts about the story, and it was horrible grammar, but now... Amazing! ))

Gus did a barrel roll.
"Watch it!" yelled Kait
"Sorry!" Gus yelled back.
He did another barrel roll and shot down a TIE fighter.
An X-Wing pulled up beside them. It was Kaitlyn's... Her droid was using Auto Pilot on the ship. She put on her pilot's helmet and acyivated the oxygen dupply on her suit. She opened the Cockpit and jumped into her's.
"Ok Jax, now is our chance!''
"Im listening in on the Imperial's communications chatter, they're in complete dissaray, They weren't expecting this big of a fleet!" Reported Kaitlyn.
"Good, Lets go now!" Said Vince ((Vince is another recruit from Gold Squad ))
"Hang on, Vince."
I destroyed two more fighters and yelled over the comm.
"All Rebels, protect the Viper Squadron, we're moving in!"
I glance over and couldn't find Kaitlyn.
"AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!" came a voice from the comm.
He looked behind him. Kaitlyn's ship was doing barrel rolls and flips. She dodged rockets and laser shots from the destroyers.
No.... A torpedo hit her wing and she started to go down.
"KAITLYN!!!!!" Gus dove down after her.

09-27-2005, 03:46 PM
"Damn it! this is exactly why we should not fall in love!" Jax yelled, Jax followed suit and dived to save her. He managaed to knock her away from a star destroyer but he narowly missed it himself. He had to duck as a Tie fighter chased him. He went towards Rezillo who was ready he blasted at the tie. It exploded.
"Gus is she ok?"
The intercom was full of static.
"what the?"
The imperials were falling back
"what's going on? the imperials never retreat!"
The imperials fell back but did not eneter hyper space. They were waiting for somethign...but what?

Renegade Angel
09-27-2005, 03:51 PM
(( We should fall in love? Did you type something wrong or do you like Kait? ))

"The Weapon....."
Gus rememberd his years as an Imperial. They mentioned a weapon so powerful, it could destroy an entire Galaxy.
"RETREAT!!!" Gus yelled over the intercom
"A bomb!" It was too late, Rebel fighters started attacking.... The Imperials would defeat them once and for all....
He ignored these thoughts and jumped into Kaitlyn's ship. She looked... dead... Her face was scratched and bloody... Someone tried to hi-jack her ship... the contriol panel was demolished.
He graabed her around the waist and pulled her into his ship. He need to stop the Imperials, and fast.
"Retreat! The Imperials have an ''ultimate weapon"... A bomb... a huge, warp bomb."

(( if this isn't what you were planning on, just make the other thing come intot he story too. ))

09-27-2005, 04:01 PM

Jax stared, a weapon? then he remembered
the message he received on planet x.
They all fell back.
Jax raced after him but suddenly a star destroyer emerged from a riff in space. Jax froze. the ship...it was....it made the emeperprs servant look tiny. It was massive.
"the emperors slave" said Rezillo stunned


Renegade Angel
09-27-2005, 04:11 PM
(( K, Cool ))
Gus raced towards the Emporer's Slave, he knew that bomb on board would kill them all. He ran up alongside it, dodging turret shots and rockets. He had to be careful, he didn't want Kaitlyn to be killed because he was stuid enought to take on a Mile long Star Destroyer. He dropped a rocket on it. It left a small amunt of damage on the shields. Thsi would take too long, he had to retreat. He sped towards Jax, dodging shots. He stopped alongside Viper Squad.
"Listen Jax, We have to do something quick, that bomb will ex-"
He stopped. He just realized Kaitlyn was awake, in the Co-Pilot's seat.
"Hi" She said
"HI!? What happened to you back there!?"
She resorted to one thing. She kissed him on th elips and he stopped talking. It was like her weapon, she kissed him and he shut up. His heart raced and his cheeks blushed.
"Jax, What's the plan?"

09-27-2005, 04:22 PM
Jax, thought.
"To be honest Gus i have no idea, This is beyonf anything i've ever handled"
"jax we have to get onbaord and deactivate the bomb" said Rezillo
Jax thought again
"Ok Gus, Stu, Viper squadron, follow me, Orange and Red Leader cover our approach we are going in"
Jax raced off towards the emperors slave. It had so many hangers...
"That one" said rezillo
"that will get us closest to the bridge and the emperors chambers"
They dodge turret fire. The ray shiled over the hanger was on but Jax knew how to deal with that he shot at the generator it exploded. The shield went down and the metal shield was coming out Jax and the other managed to get in.
"Jay hack into the controls and make sure that ray shield goes back up, i dont want to have to run around while we look for a way out"
Jax jumped out of his B wing and got out is lightsabers he threw one to rezillo who ignited it and they defelcted shots back at the strom troopers.
"Got it!" jay yelled
The metal shield slid back and the ray shield replaced it
"ok guys lets split up, me, Rezillo, Gus and Kaitilyn will look for the emperor"
"and the officer in charge of weapons, without him there will be not more bombs like this" said Rezillo
"right, Ok so me and rezillo will go after the emperors and Gus and Kaitalyn will go after the officer and the others go to the bridge and find where the bomb is, we will meet you there, Stu you still got that inter comm i gave you?" Jax said as he turned to leave

Renegade Angel
09-27-2005, 04:27 PM
Gus ignited his saber while Kaitlyn took out an old blade with strange markings. He recognized it immediatly. The blade of a jedi in training.
"You're a-"
Kaitlyn nodded.
"Lets go"
We heade towards the door but more troops arrived. Kaitlyn and I chucked grenades until the last soldier was killed. They advanced down the hallway. The lights were flickering and the ship was creaking. Kaitlyn immediatky was frightened and grabbed Gus's hand. He turned his head and smiled at her.
"Its okay, We'll make it."

09-28-2005, 05:56 AM
"Guys, Follow Rachels orders, im goin to help out Viper Squadron."
Stu Flew down into the hangar with gus and Jax...
"Stu you still got that inter comm i gave you?" Asked Jax
"Yeah i do." Stu replied.
A stormtrooper raced around a corner a stu fired at it.
"Lets do what we gotta do." Stu said to them...

09-28-2005, 01:10 PM
"right...let's go" Jax gritted his teeth and him and rezillo left. They walked in silence for a while until they came across a guard. He was dressed in a red robe, Jax recognised his as one of the emperors guards. He gripped an electro-stick that was buzzing softly. Jax and rezillo ignited their sabers. They stood there for a moment the guard seemed to be considering them. and then he attacked, jax blocked his attack and rezillo went for the kill. The guard hit the floor lifeless.
Jax looked at Rezillo.
"did we have to kill him?"
"Yes...sorry i have to get used to not being....lets get moving"
Rezillo lead the way. They came to a stop outside a chamber.
"This is it, i expected more guards than this"
They entered
The room was large and dark.
"I've been expecting you" i horse voice said
The sith lord swivled in his chair
"Rezillo, you will die for your treason...and jax you will become my servant"
"never" Jax said softly
The dark lord smiled. Rezillo face was passive, he showed no emotion.
"lets go!"
They ignited their sabers and moved forwards. The sith lord got up and ignited his lightsaber and laughed madly...

Renegade Angel
09-28-2005, 03:35 PM
Gus and Kaitlyn ran into the room. The emporor was cackling and jax and rezillo got into battle position. I picked up a red saber off the ground and handed it to Kailtyn. we got into Jedi Ofeense stance and stood beside Jax and Rezillo. Kaitlyn was tense. she wouldn't do too well if she was this tense. The emporor withdrew a red saber and ignited it. He jumped into the air and immediatly dashed at Kaitlyn. He grabbed he arm and kicked her stomach. She felw backwards and hit the wall, grimacing in pain. "Kaitlyn!" Gus had to do it. he had to Force ascream. But he'd kill Jax, Rezillo, and Kaitlyn if he didn't grab them. He continiued to attack, still thinking up a plan. The emperor force pushed him ontot he floor, and Gus finally realized what he had to do.
"Guys, Run!"If he succeded, he'd drain himself of nearly all energy, but if he didn't, they'd all die. another lose-lose situation. Or was it?

09-28-2005, 03:43 PM
Rezillo looked at Gus. and smiled. He force pushed him out throught the door way. He then turned to Kaitilyn. he force pushed her into Gus and he closed the door and sealed it.
"No more distractions"
Jax stared at Rezillo. Rezillo turned on him.
"sorry my friend"
Rezillo force pushed Jax into a wall. He was knocked out.
"This is my fight, and mine alone"
Rezillo stepped up to face the emperor....

Kenny walked into the hanger on the "lawrence arm" He looked around. The pilots were milling around waiting.
"what are you doing?" he asked one
"waiting for the all clear"
"oh..." Kenny walked over to his A wing
"Permission to go out and scout sir
"certainly not"
Kenny looked down at the floor. how long would they have to wait?

(im gunna do some posts using Rezillo later)

Renegade Angel
09-28-2005, 03:57 PM

09-28-2005, 04:08 PM
Rezillo stared at the emperor.
"yes...I have!"
"Gus kenobi"
"Him? But I have years of training!"
"Not if i can help it"
"thats just it...YOU CAN'T!"
"very good..."
"You'll find im full of surprises"
"I do know...i did teach you"
The emperor yawned
"that is very cliche"
"maybe...but it's true"

Renegade Angel
09-28-2005, 04:21 PM


09-28-2005, 04:25 PM
Rezillo dodged.
"Gus, you will not stand in my way. If i have to kill you I will"
Rezillo rolled.
"Gus, what Is your problem? Im trying to end this war!"
Rezillo walked towards him
"But if you decide to stand in my way, I will cut you down"
Rezillo looked Gus in the eye
"Gus...please don't stand in my way"

Renegade Angel
09-28-2005, 04:28 PM
"Good Luck"

09-29-2005, 04:10 AM
Rezillo turned back to the emperor.
"maybe your faith in his is misplaced"
"maybe your doubt of the boy is misplaced"
"your over confidence will be your downfall"
"your faith in your friends is yours"
Rezillo Lightsabers were ignited and pointed directly at the emperor. The emperor looked at him and smiled
He jumped up and slahsed. Rezillo dodged it and struck at the emperor. He emperor blocked it. Rezillo used his other saber to attack but the emeror kicked his hand and his blue saber went flying. Jax was hit the fave with it. He stired. the saber was lying there. Jax picked it up. waiting..

09-29-2005, 08:42 AM
Stu seen his friends run off into a battle, he would have followed them but he did not have a lightsaber yet ,so Stu ran off down the other way, blasting any Stormtroopers that were near him, He picked up 4 Remote Mines..
"Hmm where is the ships main control room?" Stu said to himself.
Stu looked at his comm-link..
"Gus,Jax,Rezillo,Kaitlyn, if you hear me finish what you gotta do quickly because im making my way to the main control room, Im going to Blow the ship up!"
Stu ran past the Main Hangar.. he planted A Det-Pack on the rooms generator, He ran down to the engine bay and killed all the troopers, Picking up 2 more Det-Packs and planting them on the engine's control panel.
Stu began the walk to the main control room....

09-29-2005, 11:56 AM
The emperors smiled
"so...that's yuor plan"
"Stu? don't be idiotic if you blow the ship the warp bomb will blow with it!"
"ahhh...so you know about the bomb too. Very good"
"yeah and our guys are working to defuse it"
"do what you like the bomb is just here as an excuse to get Gus on here. I made it so he sensed the bomb"
"you...? But Gus..."
"at this moment he is ploting mine and your downfall, he will be no match for me but he can kill you easily. and even if he does kill me, his journy to the dark side wil be complete!"
The emperor laughed again and then used the force to take Rezillos remaining lightsaber. He force pushed Rezillo tot he floor near Jax. He walked closer. Rezillo could not move. The emperor raised his lightsaber
"goodbye my old aprentice..."
Jax threw the lightsaber to rezillo who caught it, ignited it and plunged it into the emperors chest. An ear splitting scream emitted from the emperor. He collapsed...dead. Rezillo was shaking.
"Are you ok?" asked Jax
"I've been better" Rezillo answered.
Rezillo walked over to the emperor's coarpse and withdrew his lightsaber. and used the force to summon Jax's and threw it to him.
"Sorry about knockin you out...but i had to"
"I know"
They looked at each other
"Jax...i will be dead soon"
"what? why?"
"Gus will kill me"
"no...he...can't...I dont believe it"
But this was a lie. Jax had known that Gus was strange from the day he had met him. Gus had gone missing for months, almost a year and then just returned...but so had Rezillo. Rezillo had been gone for over 3 years but his absence had been explained....Gus's had not. Jax looked at Rezillo.
"I will not let him kill you" he said simply

Renegade Angel
09-29-2005, 07:53 PM
It was then Gus realized he had been tricked. the meperor had wanted him here... but why? No... It couldn't.... H eknew why... But it didn't matter, Gus no longer senesed the darkness that he felt when he boarded the ship. The emperor was dead. He was still angry at Rezillo and he knew Jax wouldn't allow Gus to kill him. But he had to... No... He couldn't! He... he... He couldn't stop his destiny, the future couldn't be changed.... but no, maybe he was wrong... or maybe he was right. whatever he was, he knew he was sick and tired. his stomach ached and his forehead was burning... a fever perhaps. Kaitlyn. He realized she was sick, and when they kissed... Gus sighed and turned around, Rezillo knew where Kaitlyn was, maybe he and Jax could help him. He walked on down the hall, not noticing that he was being watched.

09-29-2005, 09:28 PM
Stu's Comm-Link buzzed....
Jax:"Stu? don't be idiotic if you blow the ship the warp bomb will blow with it!"
"Fine then."
Stu disabled the Det-Packs..
"im going to the bridge anyway."
Stu ran down to the bridge, and killed the officers."
Stu launched all but one of the escape pods..
"Jax,How long are your guys going to be defusing that bomb? because we need to destroy this thing once its defused."
Stu ran down to his ship..
"R7, Fly it back to the 'Ghost Town'. i'm taking the escape pod,i have some un-finished business."

09-30-2005, 03:09 AM
*over comm link* "Jax,How long are your guys going to be defusing that bomb? because we need to destroy this thing once its defused."
"Stu we've finished our business with the emperor, im just waiting for a signal from don saying him and Jay have defused it"
at that moment Don radiod through
"Jax this bomb...it's tech is beyond anything i've ever seen before not even Jay can crack it...wait...somethings happening....it's coutning down....the-"
The comm went dead.
"we have to find them" Jax said to Rezillo who nodded.

09-30-2005, 05:39 AM
Stu heard a message on the radio...
Stu called on the comm-link...
R7 returned and drove over to Stu...
"Lets go R7."


09-30-2005, 10:56 AM
(no it's cool i think it makes it more interesting)

"copy that Stu we're heading down there now"
something stired...
It was not Kaitilyn, it was the emperor
"you....Jax....you will become...his....and...he will...finish you both! his...hatred....she will not....survive....he will kill you..." his head hit the floor
"who will not survive?"
"I assumed he means Kaitilyn..."
"Come on we've got to go and fins Don!" Rezillo said impatiently
"o..k...lets go!"

Renegade Angel
09-30-2005, 03:35 PM
He geard footsteps. rezillo and Jax. He walked toward the soun donly to find the body of a woman. with red hair... and... and... Kailtyn!
The footsteps. Rezillo. That son of a bitch killed her. Gus fell to his knees, crying. He picked up the saber and ignited it, still bawling. he but the tip of the blade against his chest, he was about to shove it in when he heard more ffotsteps and Rezillo an dJax appeared in front of him.

09-30-2005, 04:06 PM
Jax stopped and stared down at Gus. Rezillo looked away...
"Gus, I'm sorry...the emperor...he..."
Jax looked at Rezillo for some sought of support but found none
"we're both....Gus, we have to find the bomb"
Gus's saber was ignited, out of the corner of his eye Jax could see Rezillo gripping his...ready for a fight that Jax knew would come...

Renegade Angel
09-30-2005, 06:20 PM
"You... You killed her." Gus thrashed at Rezillo and missed. he slashed at him agian and hit his face. a small drop of blood trickled down his face. "Damnit! DIE!" Gus used his Force Grip, but Rezillo escaped and backed away.

10-01-2005, 05:25 AM
Rezillo ignited his saber.
"I didn't touch her...if you had been paying attention she had been losing strength and the will to live ever since the encounter on the emperors servant"
Rezillo's face was slashed, blood trickled down it. He put a hand to it.
"Gus don't make me kill you"
Gus slashed again.
Rezillo blocked. Gus then used force grip but Rezillo got out of it and backed away.
"So be it Gus"
Rezillo started to attack
"Guys somethings...happening...the bomb....IT'S GUNNA EXPLODE!"
The ship jolted and loud explosion ripped the emperors slave in half the ship lurched and they all hit the wall the world turned upside down and all was black....

10-01-2005, 05:26 AM
(incase you don't understand the warp bomb has just gone off. The bomb has caused the emperors slave to be flung into a another dimension (back in time). We are all still alive and you will see where the story goes from here)

10-01-2005, 07:03 AM
Stu found Don & Jay....
"Guys we gotta get out of H-EERRREE!!----"
The bomb exploded and everything around Stu turned all dark...
Stu awoke next to his Astro Droid R7..
"R7, we need to get back to the ship."
On the way Stu found Kaitlyn lying on the floor..
Stu picked up Kaitlyn and took her to his ship...
"Dont worry Kaitlyn you'll be alright."
Stu flew out of the hangar and seen the Rip in space..
"Oh S***!"
Stu got out his inter-comm...
"Jax,Gus, The bombs threw us into another dimension,The rip in space is still there i'm going back and i advise you to do the same also, Gus I've found Kaitlyn,Her Vitals are Dangerously low, im going to take her back and i'll try my best to revive her. i hope you guys can fly back through the Rip back into our dimension. Good Luck."
Stu put his Ship Into full thrust and flew into the rip......

(Also you guys could do whatever but im tryin to get my character through so i can help get you guys back and try and help Kaitlyn out.)

10-01-2005, 07:12 AM
Jax stirred
"what happened?" he asked as Rezillo got up
"This ship was built to with stand almost everything, when the bomb went off it must have jumped dimensions" Rezillo stood up
"Gus is still out" Jax said
"Leave him here, he needs time to cool off"
"I suppose"
Rezillo walked to the viewing window and gasped
"what is it?"
Rezillo turned
"we havn't changed dimension....we've changed time!"
Jax looked sure enough there was the emperors servant and it exploded
"Rezillo we can change eveything!"
"how do you mean?"
"we can stop the bomb from going off"
"Jax, we don't even know if it took out....wait what am i saying of coarse it did. it would have taken out eveything"
"And we can stop Kaitilyn from....you know"
"It will be dangerous Jax...if we run into out other selves we will create a rip in the time-space continuem with could cause the universe to implode"
"o..k well we'll just have to make sure it dosn't happen"
They felt guilty about leaving Gus so they took him to a transort and put it on auto-pilot so it would follow them. They waited. Sure enough The Emperors Slave appeared. They saw fighters board it.
"It's time"
They got into their ships and went into space. The first thing they saw was the rip they had made.
"If we do this right things in our time should be right and we can go back through there"
"got it, Lets go"
They raced off to the emperors slave to change history....

Renegade Angel
10-01-2005, 08:45 AM
Gus opened his eyes. He realized he was beside the3 Star Destroyer they had borded. the Emporor's Slave, But he also saw the Emporor's Servant in the distance.
"I told them them be careful." Gus had known this would happen. which meant... he could still save her! He turnedt eh ship's auto-pilot off and swereved tot he destroye hangar. He got out and saw his crashed ship sitting there. He ran down the halls.... and there she was. he couldn't stop here yet, it'd ruin the point of this. he had to find out who killed her. he quietly followed her through the halls. He once a gain had the feeling of being watched.

10-01-2005, 09:17 AM
Stu had a feeling that things will change shortly but he knew that Jax and Gus were going to do something that would change what they had just been through,He looked at the unconcius Kaitlyn...
"Kaitlyn, you'll be ok."

(Just before i go on with this i would like to know if i can take control of the Kaitlyn thats with Stu, i will just have a conversation or two involving the two of them)

Renegade Angel
10-01-2005, 09:31 AM
( If you'd like to, sure, just don't do anything ''rash'' to the story. )

Hmm... Gus thought. If stu had found the unconciouss Kaitlyn, then this must be the Kaitlyn before she died. A dark jedi jumped out of a system of air vents. This must've been what happened. "Where is he?" siad the dark jedi sharply. "Like I'd tell you." Just like her. The jedi lunged and missed Kaitlyn. Gus cut on and Kaitlyn gasped. He sliced the Dark Jedi in half and kicked the corpse intot he generator shaft.
Gus had been wrong. The future could be changed.

10-01-2005, 11:18 AM
Jax docked with the emperors slave. He jumped out. He knew that he and Rezillo would be fighting the emperor now so they would have to make it to the bowells of the ship. Rezillo jumped out. And followed Jax to the elevator. They shot down to shaft that lead to the bowells. They would have to coninue on foot. As the elevator stopped. Jax spotted Don. Don turned.
"Oh hey guys, you finished with the emperor already?"
Jax and Rezillo followed Don and Jay. They found the bomb sooner than Jax had expected.
"Ok Jay do yuor stuff"
"hmmmm this bomb....it's weird"
"how so?"
"I don't think you can disarm it..."
"I'll radio Gus...Gus this bomb...it's tech is beyond anything i've ever seen before not even Jay can crack it...wait...somethings happening....it's coutning down....the-" Jax swiped the comm and stepped on it.
"what are you doing"
"err...The comm might interfier with the bomb...we don't want it going off"
"oh...ok...well next time tell me will ya?"
"so we can't defuse it....what do we do?"
"I have an idead" Rezillo said
"well don't keep us in suspense"
"We could move the bomb"
"How will that help?"
Jax suddenlt realized what he meant
"yeah....err Don and Jay you go we can deal with it from here"
"Oh and tell everyone to get out"
"got it"
As don walked away he heard Don radio in
"ok lets go"
"the bridge" Rezillo said simply

(Note: When Don radios Gus he means the Gus from the past not the one thats trying to save Kaitilyn)

Renegade Angel
10-01-2005, 12:41 PM
"No time to explain, cummon!"

10-01-2005, 02:47 PM
Between them Jax and Rezillo carried the bomb to the bridge. Once there Rezillo looked it over to see if there was anything they could do. But no nothing could be done. Rezillo got to the controls and set the dimension jump. They had 10 minutes to get out.
"Gus this is Jax we're ready, you've got ten minutes to get out!"
Jax and Rezillo ran to the door. But the door opened before they could reach it.
A dark Jedi was stadning there...he took of his balaclava. His sleek blonde hair came down over his cold grey eyes. Rezillo looked like he had seen a ghost.
"I was wondering if i would see you here...Master is dead and i just know you had something to do with it..."
"I...yes I killed him....he has lied to us Lars...Open your eyes"
"Jax you better go"
"NO! no one will leave this room!"
"The bomb will go off soon Lars!"
"Then we will die!"
Rezillo force pushed Lars out of the way
"JAX RUN!" He yelled
Jax stood there, Rezillo kicked lars back and pushed jax out of the door. Jax grabbed him and they fell. Jax slammed the door behind them and put on the force shield.
"That should buy us some time"
They ran to the hanger....

Renegade Angel
10-01-2005, 03:02 PM
Gus's comm buzzed "Gus this is Jax we're ready, you've got ten minutes to get out!"
"10 Minuets, let's go!" He and Kaitlyn ran throguh the halls of th hughe ship. 5 minutes later, They found Jax and Rezillo.
"Five minutes guys! Let's go! NOW!"

10-01-2005, 03:12 PM
As they entered the hanger they met Gus and Kaitilyn They all ran to their fighter except...
Rezillo stopped, Jax turned
"I have to stay..."
"Look Rezillo this is no time to act the hero!"
"I'm not acting the hero...it's just..Lars....He.."
Jax looked at him
"Jax you're by best friend but i can not abandon a teenager who was like my brother even if he does not see the light"
"Rezillo...You can't change him...he will kill you"
"Maybe....but I owe him that"
All of a sudden Lars came flying through the wall. He crouched there lightsaber ignited
"We have unfinsihed buisness"
"I know....Jax...GO!"
Jax did not move
"GO!" Rezillo yelled
"I will not leave you"
"Now who's acting the hero?"
Jax smiled faintly. Rezillo sighed and turned
"you coped without me for 3 years...you can do it again"
Rezillo struck Jax around the back of the head rendering him unconcious. He carried him to his ship. And put him in. He set the auto pilot to follow Gus.
"Look after him Gus....Go back through the warp...Kaitilyn must stay here...she will be ok in the other time now....we have righted the wrong"
Rezillo watched as Jax's ship took off
"Good Bye...Boss"
Rezillo turned and his cape billowed out in and impressive way...
"Let's do it"
"Yes..Lets Darth Rezz"
"It's not darth Rezz anymore...It's Viper 2"
He ignited his lightsaber and walked towards Lars....

Renegade Angel
10-01-2005, 05:45 PM
Photos of Me!


Im turning 12 in a week, Is my hair awsome or what?

To view, scroll down and click ''Free'', then scroll down to the bottom of the next page and wait for the pikz to load.

Gus followed Rezillo's orders. "Kailtyn, stay here."
"I wanna know what's going on!"
"Don't worry, Rezillo will explain it to you."
He watched Rezillo attack Lars and he boarded the ship, heading towards the warp hole, he noticed the Emperor's Servant. Just metal and flames... floating, dead, in space. ZIIIIIIIIIP. Gus opened his eyes. He was in the ship, with Jax and Kait. The Emeror's Slave was overturned and lifeless. "What's goin on!?" Kaitlyn glanced at me. Rezillo had told her what had happened, she understood. He sensed Rezillo and Lars, but didn't know where. "Jax, This looks... Different."

10-02-2005, 05:48 AM
Jax looked, yes something was different. He could sense Rezillo and Lars still but they were no longer fighting. Jax went to the viewing window. The wreckage of the rebel fleet met his eyes.
"We're in the wrong place" He said quietly
"We have to find Rezillo and find out what has happened"
Jax went to the only place he thought Rezillo might be...The empeors chamber. The slid open. Jax looked into the dark room towards the chair. There was someone sitting in it. As Jax drew closer the chair turned. Rezillo was sitting there. He looked at Jax and gasped.
"errr...Rezillo whats going on we're not in the right place"
"what? what are you talking about?"
"Don't you remember?"
"I remember you....Lars dispose of him"
"Yes master"
Lars came out of the darkness
"Whats going on? Wheres the emperor?"
"what?" Jax said shocked
"Shall I Kill him now master?"
Jax turned
"Yes, he will be no trouble"
Jax got out his lightsaber and ignited it
"What's this? Jax you're a jedi?"
"KILL HIM!" Rezillo yelled at Lars.
Jax struck at Lars and then ran. He ran until he found Gus and Kaitilyn.
"We....are....In the wrong place" he panted
"We need to get to the bridge and change dimensions"

(If was not where you were going with it just say and i will delete this post)

10-02-2005, 07:25 AM
Stu was flying back to the ghost town, but then he seen the Warped Emperors slave and thought that if he could see it then the rebels would see it! But Stu had to figure out how he would get Kaitlyn to the medical bay.
All of a sudden Kaitlyn woke but she looked terrible....
"Kaitlyn! you should rest your very hurt."
Kaitlyn:"St-Stu, wheres gus?"
"Dont worry he wont be long, hes just gone to sort things out."
Kaitlyn:"Uh ok."
"Now, i need to get you to a medical unit."
Kaitlyn fell back asleep...
Stu docked in the back hangar and got Kaitlyn to a spare medical room, surprisingly without anyone knowing, But to be sure he locked the door once it shut...
Stu carried Kaitlyn into a Bacta tank and connected her. He switched it on...
"Phew, your safe now Kait."

10-02-2005, 09:24 AM
(I aim for this to be the last post. I will start up a new thread soon, Cheers Guys. The Phatom threads will end with this post)

Jax ran to the bridge. He did not care if Gus followed him or not. When Jax arrived at the Bridge no one was there. Jax ran to the controls. Lars must have changed them, he thought to himself. Jax flicked a switch and the ship lurched. Jax looked out the viewing window. It looked like the clone wars. Jax flicked the switch again. He saw the rebel fleet. This must be the right time. The rebel shields were still up. This was it. he was sure. He jumped up. And he set the emperors servant to jump into another dimension in 10 minutes. He radiod Gus. And then he ran to the Hanger. He jumped into his fighter. He looked at the ship for the last time.
"Goodbye Rezillo"
He flew out of the hanger. The ship lurched. It shrunk and then disapeared. Jax flew back to the Ghost Town. He saw Stu's ship which meant he was here. They were back. Jax went to the seperate hanger. Rezillo's ship was still there. Jax stood there for a moment. Rezillo was still out there....the good one. And Jax vowed to find him even if it killed him. Jax yawned. The past few months had been hell. Stu and Gus had gone then came back. Rezillo was found after 3 years and Nekx was dead. Jax turned. Not for the first time had he thought to himself "It's not over yet"....

The End

Renegade Angel
10-02-2005, 09:57 AM

Renegade Angel
10-02-2005, 09:59 AM
So will the next thread be a continuation or a sequal to the Phantom threads? I really don't want to end the entire story, this Phantom thing has been awsome, my favorite thing to do lately was to come here and reply to this thread. Hopefully we can continue on.


10-02-2005, 10:22 AM
yeah i imagine we will continue along the same lines but maybe not call it the phantom but what ever. I'm currently running low on ideas for a new thread so if anyone wants to make one go ahead, my brain hurts.