Migration 17.2

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They ran, their feet sliding on the side of the building.  One misstep meant possibly stepping through a window, slicing a leg open, or falling through.  Making things even more hazardous, the concrete of the building’s exterior was slick with moisture and ice.  Luke was in the front, carrying Noelle.  Twice, Luke lost his footing, but he managed to keep from sliding through a windowpane.

But it was slowing them down.  There were countless reasons why they couldn’t take their time.  The upper half of the apartment building had collapsed, and smoke suggested a fire was spreading somewhere.  There was the fact that Noelle was bleeding, unconscious and might very well be dying as Luke carried her.  And then there was the more immediate threat, the Simurgh.  Krouse cast a nervous glance towards the Endbringer, who was rising into the air.

There was another figure there too, higher in the sky.  A man with a muscular physique, golden skin, golden hair and a pristine white bodysuit.  Krouse recognized him: Scion.  Definitely not someone he’d ever expected to see in person.

Scion and the Simurgh both moved in the same instant.  A beam of golden light turned the road into glowing dust, and the Simurgh evaded by flying to the left, taking cover on the other side of a nearby skyscraper.  Scion followed, turning the beam her way.  The lance of golden light sheared through the building as if it wasn’t there.

As the remains of the skyscraper crumbled to the ground, the already-difficult run across the side of Luke’s toppled apartment building became impossible.  Krouse let himself fall, kicking out with one leg to brace a foot against the corner of a window.  He caught Marissa and stopped her from sliding onto the window and falling through.

“Fuck!”  Luke shouted.  “Fuck, fuck me!”

Third time isn’t a charm for you, Krouse thought.  Luke had put his leg through a window and his leg was slit open from the base of his foot to his knee.  Krouse belatedly realized his friend was wearing socks.  He’d taken off his shoes as he’d stepped inside his apartment.  No wonder he has no traction.


He was interrupted as Scion fired another beam further away, following the Simurgh.  It was surprisingly quiet for a weapon that was obliterating three or four hundred feet of road and felling two or three buildings with each two second burst, but the resulting chaos of falling buildings was deafening.  Krouse was torn between staring and averting his eyes in fear; he went with the former: he wanted to be paying attention in case Scion happened to turn the beam their way.  Not that he’d be able to do much.

“How bad is it?” Krouse finished, glancing at Luke.

“I… I’m not sure.  It doesn’t hurt that much.”

“Can you move your foot?”  Marissa asked.


“Okay,” Krouse said, “Give me Noelle.”

Luke didn’t argue.  Krouse crawled on his hands and feet to get to his friend, helping him up.  Then he got help from Luke and Marissa to rise to his feet with Noelle in a piggyback position.  Marissa tied the sleeves of Noelle’s sweatshirt together so Krouse could hang the loop around his shoulders.  With his hands, he kept her toes from dragging on the ground.

The fight was getting more distant as Scion continued to fire at the retreating shape of the Simurgh.  Krouse could make out her alabaster form, wings spread, as she swooped and darted between buildings to evade Scion’s fire.  The cloud of dust and debris that had followed Scion’s attacks in their immediate area blocked his view as they continued their progress across the city.

We’re safe for the moment.

He turned his attention to their present circumstances.  Luke had no traction, and his leg was hurt, now.  Krouse didn’t trust himself to manage with his burden, which meant someone else had to lead the way.  Someone that wouldn’t slow them down.

“Marissa.”  She used to dance.  She’s the most sure-footed of us.  “Take the lead?  Check our path is clear?”

She nodded.  Her eyes were wide, her gloved hands gripped the zipper-tag of her sweater’s collar, fidgeted.  She’s in shock.  Saw her best friend die.

But she would have to deal.  They didn’t have time to mourn, to tend to their wounds or play it safe.  They had to escape, before the fight came back this way.

We still have to get down from here, and we aren’t well dressed.  The temperature, last he’d looked, was supposed to be fourteen degrees Fahrenheit, or somewhere in that neighborhood, but it felt colder.  If we have to climb

Jess shrieked, and Krouse turned his head to see why.  Jess was pressing her hands over her mouth, as if to keep herself from making any more noise.  He followed her line of sight…

The Simurgh.  She was stepping out of the cloud of dust that Scion’s attack had left.  As though she were light as a feather, the Simurgh took one step forward and lifted into the air.  She floated down the length of the street one block over, the opposite direction they were traversing the building, her wings folding around her as she landed.

Judging by her lack of a response, the Simurgh hadn’t heard Jess, nor had she seen them.

How is she here?  He’d seen her disappearing over the horizon, Scion in hot pursuit.  Did she teleport?

The Simurgh stopped and raised one hand.  Pieces of machinery began to flow out of a gaping hole in the side of the building nearest where she’d landed, stopping when they reached her immediate vicinity.  A massive box that looked like an oversized washing machine, a large engine with blue L.E.D.s lining it, and tendrils of electrical cords with frayed ends still sparking with live current.

Telekinesis.  She’d created a false image of herself out of snow and ice, baiting Scion away.  Judging by the sound of Scion’s continued onslaught, she was still controlling it.  Controlling it even though there was no way she could see what it was doing by eyesight alone.

The screaming in his head hadn’t let up.  If anything, it was worse: too loud to ignore completely, but every time he paid attention to it, it seemed to distort, rising in volume.  Jess’ shriek had brought it into the forefront of his mind, and he couldn’t seem to shake it.

“Go,” Krouse urged Marissa, “Fucking go!”

She moved twice as fast as Luke had, and Krouse tried to follow her footsteps, matching his foot placements to hers to help avoid the spots where there was ice, cracked concrete or snow layered just finely enough to fill the treads of his boots.

Marissa slipped, landing hard, but was climbing to her feet a moment later.  Krouse chanced a look at the Simurgh.  The Endbringer had folded her wings up, forming a protective cocoon around herself, and was relying on telekinesis alone to manipulate the machinery.  She was still calling other things to her, bringing desktop computers through the holes the larger machinery had made, tearing them apart and connecting components.  Insulation stripped itself away from the wiring, exposing metal that moved to entwine and splice into other wires.

Where are the heroes?  He wondered, as he turned his attention back to the task of getting down from the side of the building.

No.  The better question to ask was where is everyone?  The streets were almost empty, only twenty or thirty people running for cover, hurrying away.  As far as Krouse could tell, the area was deserted.  He felt a chill that wasn’t just the cold weather.

They reached the far end of the building, the lowest floors that they could access.  Concrete and rebar jutted out, ragged, where the Simurgh had torn the building free of the ground.

“We’re going to have to climb down,” Krouse said.

“We try that, the concrete’s going to crack and we fall.  And we don’t have gloves,” Luke said.  “If we have to hold on to cold concrete and rebar, we’re going to get frostbite.  Or our hands will go numb.”

“Or we’ll slip on the snow and ice,” Jess said.

Krouse leaned forward as much as he was able with Noelle on his back.  It was a solid hundred-foot drop to the street below; there were areas that would be easy enough to descend, where rebar offered handholds and even ladders.  But other spots… there were areas where the concrete might break away under a person’s weight, other spots where they’d have to move horizontally, hanging by their hands alone.  Doing it with another person’s weight on his back?  With Noelle?

“There’s no way,” Marissa said.

“Do we have another choice?”  Cody asked.

“Yeah,” Krouse said.  Cody gave him a dark look, as if he was being argumentative for the sake of it.  He elaborated, “If we look inside, maybe there’s a place where we can climb through the building.”

“We could get trapped,” Jess said.  “If there’s fire, or a gas leak, or if the building resettles while we’re inside…”

“And if we climb, there’s the possibility of fire, wind, or the building shaking.  Let’s head through the window,” Krouse said.

As his less encumbered friends broke the window and climbed through, Krouse stood on the side of the building, his hands tucked into his armpits, watching the Simurgh as she worked.

Cody stood by, carrying Jess.  Like Krouse, he was waiting for others to make sure the way was safe, and hopefully they’d be able to set up a series of footholds or makeshift ladder.

Krouse glanced at the Simurgh.  She was still threading components together.

“She’s one of those gadget capes, right?  What do you call them?”

“Tinker.  And she’s not a tinker,” Jess said.

Krouse gave her an appraising look. “Right.  You follow that stuff.  If she’s not a tinker then what the hell is she?  I mean, I know the basics, but I never paid that much attention.  Only kind-of, sort-of, following the damage done.”

“She’s an Endbringer, obviously.  When she first showed up, she just appeared and hovered there.  Some place in Switzerland.  They thought she was like Scion.  Maybe someone who got a concentrated dose of whatever gives people powers, maybe someone who was in just the right mental state for a trigger event.”

“Trigger event?” Krouse asked.

“It’d take too long to explain in detail.  The moment when someone gets their powers.  The idea was maybe she and Scion met some specific set of conditions.  So the whole world watched for something like three days, to see if she would be another Scion, or if she’d be something else.   People approached, she even communicated with them some.  Not talking, just gestures, I guess.  Interacting might be a better word.  And when we thought things would be okay, she made a move.  The entire population of the city around her, with all the people who had come to talk with her and research her…”

Jess trailed off, stopped.  Anxiety etched her face.  Marissa was midway through climbing down through the window, looked up at Jess.

“What happened?”  Cody asked.  “I remember hearing something, but I was a toddler then, and I didn’t figure I’d ever actually see her.”

“I don’t want to say,” Jess said.  “It would distract you guys.”

“Hey,” Krouse cut in, “That’s not cool.  Not your call to make.”

Jess glared at him.  “She-”

There was a sudden movement from the Simurgh, tearing sections of wall free from the nearest building, maneuvering them to form a makeshift barrier in mid-air.  Not one second after the barrier was in place, a pair of heroes flew around the corner.  One had a forcefield bubble around him that exploded on contact with the wall, while a woman fired blasts of energy that sent the fragments of concrete plummeting to the ground.

How did she know?  The Simurgh had seen them coming?

The Simurgh flexed her wings, and snow raised around her.  Krouse nearly lost his footing as the snow that had piled on the side of the building began drifting towards the Simurgh, an almost gentle push from behind him.

The snow condensed and pummeled the two heroes.  The bubble-man formed another shield around himself, but he left his companion out of it, choosing to interject himself between the Simurgh and the woman.

A section of concrete from a building to the right of the heroes flew free and caved in the costumed woman’s skull.  She dropped out of the sky, her head a bloody ruin that Krouse couldn’t make out in the midst of the flying snow.

The bubble-man flew forward, aiming not for the Simurgh, but the machinery she’d gathered to one side.  His forcefield swelled, a blue-green that glowed brighter and whiter with every passing second.  Just as he reached the machinery, it reached a critical level and detonated.  The Simurgh was already putting one wing between him and the machinery.  She took more damage than the machine did, and even that was minimal.  Scorched, scattered feathers.

She retaliated, sending rubble, snow and debris in a constant, consistent assault against him.  He raised forcefields to block the attacks, but each was shut down before it could approach critical mass for detonation.  He retreated a hundred feet or so, and the Simurgh began working on the machine once again, giving him only cursory attention.

“Come on,” Marissa called.

Krouse cast one look at the Simurgh and the lone hero, then hurried to the window.  The others had moved a refrigerator so it was directly below the window, and Luke stood on top, ready to accept Noelle as she was handed down.

It took a second to free her sleeves from around his shoulders, another second to work with Cody to lower her down.

As he watched Cody taking hold of Noelle’s arm and waistband, he was struck with the idle recollection that Cody had been one of the people who’d tried to approach Noelle, one of the first to ask her out and be soundly rejected.  He’d nearly forgotten.  It went a ways towards explaining some of Cody’s anger.

He had to shake his head and refocus on the task.  Noelle was being handed down to the others at the base of the refrigerator, and the way was clear for him to make his way inside.  He helped Jess down, then they made their way to the front hall.  He opened the closet door and began handing out coats and gloves.  Luke tried on some boots until he found some rubber ones that were big enough.

“How’s the leg?”

“Hurting more, but I can still walk.”

Krouse nodded.  With Marissa and Luke’s help he got Noelle in position on his back, then opened the door of the apartment and hopped down to the wall beneath.  That left them the task of breaking into another apartment, kicking at the door in an attempt to dislodge it.  Not as easy as it looked in the movies, especially with the threat of falling through and dropping ten or fifteen feet down someone’s front hallway.

“It keeps getting worse.  The music,” Marissa complained.  “It’s like it’s stretching between three notes, and the moment I think there’s a pattern to it, it changes.”

Krouse glanced at Jess.  What does she know?  To Marissa he said, “It gets worse if you pay attention to it.  Focus on what you’re doing.  Distract yourself if you have to.”

Marissa bit her lip.

The door broke, and they had to catch Oliver before he dropped through.  They climbed down using handholds from the closet door and doorframe, then made their way to the lowest point.

“That smell,” Marissa wrinkled her nose.

“Raw sewage,” Luke said.  “Pipes were destroyed when she tore this part of the building free, probably, and they’re spilling out here.”

It isn’t raw sewage, Krouse thought.  It’s the smell of death.  People had shit themselves as they died, somewhere nearby.

Wherever they had been when they died, he didn’t have to see the bodies.  They headed straight out into the sunlight, stepping onto the snow-covered roads.

The Simurgh was fighting a trio of heroes now, including the man with the forcefield bubble.  Using telekinesis, she was fending off the worst of their attacks and either building or rebuilding parts of the construction she’d been working on.  In the ten or fifteen minutes it had taken to get down through the building and break down the one apartment door, she’d nearly finished creating a complete circle of various components, thirty feet wide.  It looked like only a stray attack had slowed her progress, knocking out a piece of the overarching work.

She made the fighting look easy.  Every time an attack was directed her way, there was something already in place to protect herself or her device.  One cape began to launch ice crystals towards the hoop, and the Simurgh caught the shards out of the air with her telekinesis.  The crystals flew into the man with the forcefield bubble, shattering.  The resulting shards and flakes of crystal didn’t fly away, however.  They turned around in the air and condensed in a thick shell around the force field.

The ice-encased sphere slammed into the ground with a speed and force that suggested it was the Simurgh, not the cape, who was controlling his movement.  He skidded and rolled, the ice shattering first, followed by the collapse of the forcefield.  With momentum still carrying him forward, the cape rolled on the ground, his costume tearing from the friction.

When he finally stopped a few paces from Krouse and the rest of the group, the cape managed to stagger to his feet.  He bled from a dozen open wounds, his skin abraded, his costume in tatters.  He had more ice, blood and dirt on him than he had clean skin or costume.

A tide of snow and ice hit him like a truck, driving him into the ragged edge of the building.  Oliver yelped as he threw himself out of the way.  Marissa’s shriek seemed oddly delayed, until Krouse noted what had happened to the man.  The cape, in a bodysuit of velvet blue with gold armor, had been impaled on a tangled mess of rebar, his intestines pushed out the front of his stomach.

It took Krouse a moment to realize the man was actually saying a word, and not just letting out a long, guttural groan, “Fuuuuuck!  Uuuuunh!”

“Grandiose down, Z-D-6,” a mechanical voice blared from the armband that was fixed to the man’s wrist.

“I’m not…” the cape tried to pull himself forward.  “Not… down!”

“Stop!”  Marissa rushed to the man’s side.  “Don’t move!  You’ll bleed out if you move!”

The man seemed to notice them for the first time.  His eyes went wide, “What… doing here?”

“Don’t move!” Marissa said.  She stepped forward, reaching out, and he swung one fist in her direction.  The motion seemed to pull something, because he coughed up a mouthful of blood and folded forward.

“Go,” the cape grunted.  “Evac.  Or you… good as dead.  Might be… late already.”

Grandiose,” a voice sounded over the device on the man’s wrist.  It didn’t quite sound the same as before, “She’s shut down most of our movers, and your time-“

“No!” Grandiose grunted.  “Have… have time!”

I know exactly how fast you fly.  You couldn’t get out of her reach in time, even if you left now.

“I have time!”

I’ll let your wife know you fought bravely.  Do you want me to keep a recording for your son, for when he’s older?

“Dragon!  Damn you!”

I’m sorry.

The armband beeped, then beeped again a second later.  There was a steady repetition, beep, beep, beep.

Grandiose turned his head, “Why are you…”


“…Still here!?  Run!”

Krouse grabbed Marissa and turned to run, barely managing to keep his feet under him with the uneven ground and Noelle’s weight.  He glanced over his shoulder to see the cape pressing the armband against his collarbone.

They weren’t four paces away when the armband detonated, a small, localized blast that didn’t even consume him in entirety.  It did take his head, most of his upper body and his left arm.  The remainder of him was scattered around the surrounding area.

Krouse stared.

“The fuck!?” Cody screamed, staring.

“Go!” Krouse said, “Go, just run!”

They ran, putting distance between themselves, Grandiose’s remains and the fighting with the Simurgh.  One wave of capes was retreating, backed up by another squad.  A woman with a black costume, a heavy cape and straight black hair flowing from the back of her helmet led the charge.  Alexandria.

The heroine dove at the Simurgh, and the Endbringer was quick to fly to one side, reaching out to catch Alexandria with her telekinesis and use her momentum to force her into the street.  The road caved in, sections of pavement with accompanying drifts of snow falling into a sewer or storm drain beneath the street.

The hoop nearly tipped over, and the Simurgh caught it with her power.  There were four other capes in the area, two on the ground and two in the air, and she was forcing each back with pelted ice and fragments of concrete.

Unmolested, the Simurgh spread her wings wide and rose into the air, towing the hoop of exposed computer chips, wires and assorted pieces of technology after her.  Wires trailed from it to nearby buildings.

“That explosion,” Luke was saying, panting as he ran with a lopsided gait.  “They blew up their own person.  Why?”

“Because he’d been here too long,” Krouse said.

He glanced over his shoulder, saw the various components of the circle crackling with current as it rose behind the Simurgh, like a gargantuan halo, wide enough that it nearly exceeded her wingspan.

Alexandria was pulling herself out of the rubble, shouted something.  They were a distance away, but her voice could carry.

The electricity died, the great circle going dim.  They’d cut the city’s power.

“Come on!” Luke urged them.

There weren’t any more people on the streets.  Were they hiding inside, crossing their fingers?  Or had he underestimated how fast people would clear out?

There was a flash behind them.  The hoop was live, with twice the power as before, and the brightness of it made the overcast sky seem dark by contrast.  The snow and dust that the Simurgh and Scion had kicked up weren’t helping on that count, either.

The heroes had cut the power, and the Simurgh was still managing to activate the thing.

The heroes had been working in waves, because apparently too much exposure to her, to this fucking screaming in their heads that never stopped or let up, it was dangerous somehow.  Only a few heroes fighting at a given time, enough to maybe try to disrupt whatever it was she was up to.  Staying for an allotted amount of time.

Except whoever was calling the shots had seen fit to override that battle plan.  The heroes were arriving en masse now, waves of them, in the air and on the ground.

The Simurgh lifted Lucas’ apartment building into the air and tore it into shreds.  The various fragments, the little things, the bodies and pieces of furniture, they became part of a protective maelstrom around the Simurgh, orbiting her and blocking the barrage of long-range fire that the good guys were directing at her.

The screaming was getting worse, fast.  It shifted between a half-dozen different sounds, each only vaguely different from the others, a chant, a pattern.

Krouse was wearing a borrowed hat, gloves and jacket, but the jacket was probably better suited for fall weather than winter.  He was cold, his teeth chattering, the temperature sucking the warmth from his body and legs, making him feel just a little more fatigued, a little more tired.

Yet he was drenched in sweat.  It was freezing cold as it ran down the side of his nose to his chin.  His shivers weren’t entirely the cold, either.  He was terrified, terrified for himself, terrified for Noelle, and for his friends.  Terrified because of the countless little things that didn’t make sense, and because he couldn’t shake the idea that if he paid too much attention to that screaming, that keening song that the Simurgh was singing in his head, it would start to sound like words.

The circle flared with more light than before, and the resulting shockwave threw Krouse and his friends into the air.  Windows shattered and snow was kicked up into clouds as tall as the high rises around them.  The sky visibly darkened with the clouds that had been kicked up, heaping snowbanks dissolved into their constituent snowflakes and water molecules.  The indistinct and distant noises of the heroes firing on the Simurgh had stopped all at once, as the heroes were killed or left reeling from the aftershock of the device’s activation.

The protective wreath of flying objects and debris that surrounded the Simurgh slowed, then stopped circling her entirely.  One thing after another dropped out of the sky, as if the Simurgh was consciously letting go of each individual object.

The first of the heroes were already recovering, pelting the Simurgh with long ranged fire or flying up to her to engage in close-quarters combat.  Her wings shielded the worst hits, her telekinesis let her catch or deflect projectiles and she floated out of the way of a handful more.  For the ones who charged in, the Simurgh used thrown debris to strike them out of the air.  One tried to attack the Simurgh’s halo, but was struck out of the sky by a flash of electricity before they got within fifteen feet.

A low rumble shook the city, and the gate began to bulge with a dark shape that stretched out from within the metal, like a soap bubble emerging from an enclosed loop.

Or a lens, Krouse realized.  It flared bright, rays of light meeting, and things began pouring forth from the point the lines met.   Piles and piles of solid matter flowed down to land at the heart of the city: debris, fragments of architecture, and tiny shapes that were very likely to be people, in a stream as wide across as the Simurgh’s wingspan, lit in high contrast by the light of the halo.

And there were tiny shapes that most definitely weren’t people, but were alive.

It’s a portal.  A door.

“How the fuck is she not a tinker!?” Krouse shouted.

“She isn’t!” Jess called back.  “She’s never done anything like this before!”

The heroes were making an offensive push, and the Simurgh moved her halo out of the way of one series of attacks.  The halo tilted at a right angle as she moved it, continuing to spew its contents forth.   Objects and sections of building were scattered across the city.  More than a few things sailed over the heads of Krouse and his friends as they fled.

One figure landed a city block in front of them, contorting itself in mid-air to land on all fours.  It had the vague shape of a man, but dark gray skin like a tree’s bark and a froglike mouth filled with jagged teeth.  Each finger and toe was tipped with a claw.

A monster.  The thing bristled, muscles visibly tensing beneath its coarse skin as it readied to lunge at them.

Another body landed not too far away, a man with a muscular physique taken to a monstrous extreme, rolling head over heels before he finally stopped.  He might have weighed five hundred pounds, stood eight feet tall, and had an exaggerated bodybuilder’s frame, an underbite and a neanderthal brow.  His limbs had been shattered by the landing.  The frog-mouthed thing leaped onto him and began tearing him to shreds.  Easier prey.

Marissa led the group through a side alley, screamed as an object was flung into one of the buildings they were running between.  A stainless steel bathroom fixture, it punched through a window and part of a windowframe, caused a catastrophic series of crashes as it sailed through the interior of someone’s apartment.

Something nearby screeched, the kind of noise that reverberated through bones and organs, and Krouse could feel his sense of balance dissolve.  His knees turned to rubber and he nearly ran face first into a wall as his vision swam.

Jess threw up over Cody’s shoulder, followed by Cody vomiting as well.  Even as he felt the effects of the sound recede, Krouse couldn’t avoid emptying his own stomach.

Noelle stirred, squirmed.  He struggled to change position so she wouldn’t vomit onto the back of his head.  The remains of her breakfast, a coffee and a donut spattered on the ground just by his right hand.

Was that the Simurgh?  No.  The scream was something else.  Another monster.

“Don’t… no… I’ve tried so hard,” Noelle mumbled, not even lucid.

“Keep trying, Noelle, stay awake and keep at it,” Krouse said, struggling to his feet.  The effect had dissipated.  He wanted to be gone before that frog thing gave chase.

Something heavy struck a tall building in front of them, across the street from the alley’s mouth.  There was an explosion, and within seconds the building was burning, billowing with plumes of smoke.

Krouse led the way through the mouth of the alley, turned to check on the others and saw Luke on the ground.  He’d fallen.  Marissa gave him a hand standing and supported him as he ran.

Come on, we don’t have time to waste.

But Krouse wasn’t willing to go ahead, either.  They had to stay together, especially with the danger posed by the monsters that had been scattered around the city.  The way he was carrying Noelle, he couldn’t check on her, couldn’t make sure she was still breathing.  He needed the others with him.

Stepping out into the middle of the street, Krouse had a view of the fighting: the Simurgh was still airborne, and the halo-gate was still active, spewing more creatures and ruined architecture into the streets.

A flash of golden light signaled Scion’s return to the scene of the fight.  With one attack, he severed the halo in half, but the portal didn’t disappear.  Instead, like watercolor paint, a different perspective began to bleed into the surrounding sky, too bright, too blue a sky, with pale, squat buildings almost glowing in the comparative absence of clouds.  Larger chunks of buildings, massive rocks, and even chunks of earth with several trees rooted in them began to spill out and plunge to the ground.

Scion held back on shooting again, instead charging himself with power.  When he released it, it manifested as a slow radiance, a sphere of light that expanded from him in slow motion.  The tear in reality dissipated, and everything the light touched stopped.  Shifting clouds went still, objects that were flying through the air ceased moving and simply fell, and the ambient noises of destruction, fire and fighting was replaced by an all-too brief silence.  Even the Simurgh’s song, Krouse realized, had momentarily stopped.

The light reached them, swept over them, and he could feel his heart skip a beat.  His entire body hummed with the effect of the stillness, as though he were a tuning fork and for just a moment he’d ceased vibrating.

The Simurgh’s movement was slowed in the wake of the light, and Scion took the opportunity to land one well placed shot.  She was driven into the ground like a nail from a nailgun, somewhere Krouse couldn’t see.

Luke and Marissa had caught up, along with Cody and Oliver.  Krouse turned from the scene.  He had to hike Noelle up so her sleeves wouldn’t pull on his neck, then they ran in the opposite direction from the fighting.

“They’re winning,” Cody said.  “Beating her.”

“She just dumped who knows how many monsters into this city,” Jess said, “And some of them are here.  Near us.  We’re not close to being safe.”

“And Noelle’s hurt pretty bad,” Marissa said.

Krouse grit his teeth.  He didn’t want to think about that, about how he was jostling her, how she might be dying as he ran.  He was carrying her, his legs, back and stomach screaming from the hundred-and-fifteen or hundred-and-twenty pound weight he was carrying piggyback, but he couldn’t check on her, couldn’t see how well or how badly she was doing.

“Luke, are we moving in the right direction?” he asked.

“I don’t know.  Fuck me, this sound in my head-”

“Focus!”  Krouse barked the word.

“It’s… I got turned around.  This isn’t an area of the city I’ve spent any time in.  Did she throw us a few blocks?”

“She couldn’t have,” Jess said.  “The building would have shattered.”

“Then we’re on some side street I’ve never been on,” Luke said, “Sorry.”

Think!  Which direction is the nearest hospital?” Krouse asked.

“I don’t know.  I can barely hear my own thoughts over this noise in my head.”

Krouse growled with inarticulate frustration.

Ease up, Krouse,” Cody said.  “He doesn’t know.”

“Noelle might be dying!”

“-And we’ll get to safety first, then someone can take us to a hospital,” Jess said.  “But we can’t help her if we’re hit by some flying piece of concrete or laser beam.  And… they thought that it was better to kill that guy than to let him live, because he’d been here too long.  He’d heard too much of that sound in our heads.  So his own side killed him.  Think about that.  We’ve been here longer.”

Krouse shook his head.  “But if Noelle-”

“We’ll help her, Krouse!”  Jess said.  “Save your breath for running!”

He grunted affirmation.

They crossed paths with another monster.  A man, pale, with a head twice as large as his torso.  His arms and legs were atrophied, and he crawled, dragging his head along the pavement.  It looked as though he’d sustained some damage in being flung halfway across the city, his head was nearly caved in at the top, a bloody ruin with fragments of skull sticking out.

“Help me,” the thing pleaded.  He reached out with one emaciated hand.

“How?” Marissa asked.

“Mars!”  Krouse shouted, “No stalling!”

She ignored him.  “How can we help?”

“Give me your memories,” the monster said.  Marissa backed away a few steps in alarm.  “Give them!  I want to dream again!  I haven’t dreamed in so long!”

Marissa bolted, the hard heels of her boots clacking on the hard ground.

The ground shuddered with a distant explosion.  One of Scion’s beams speared into the sky, parting clouds in tidy circles as it passed through them.  There was the sound of something howling behind them.  A minute later, it howled again, closer.  Is it chasing us?  

One by one, they each came to a complete stop.  Krouse noted how the screaming in his head seemed quieter.  Were they almost out of her range?

Krouse’s eyes widened as he tried to comprehend what he was seeing. If we are nearly out of danger, then this is some sick joke at our expense.

“No,” Luke whispered.  Louder, he repeated himself.  “No!  Why!?”

A chain link fence barred their way.  It was topped by barbed wire.

In the distance, on the far side of a park, there were squads of men and women in army fatigues, with jeeps and other army vehicles helping to add presence to the already formidable line of defense.  Each of the soldiers was aiming a gun at the fence.

Krouse flinched as a howl sounded, closer than the ones before.  Caught between a rock and a hard place.  Not to mention Noelle’s condition, or even Luke’s.  He winced at the noise in his head.  It was quieter, but his stress here, his alarm and confusion, it was making the screaming spike to a brutally high pitch.

Step away from the fence!”  The voice sounded over a loudspeaker, gruff, authoritarian.  “This area is under quarantine!  Seek shelter and wait for further instructions!  If you approach or touch the fence, you will be shot!

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121 thoughts on “Migration 17.2

  1. Wow, the Simurgh just shot to the top of the Endbringer triumvirate. Telekinesis on an absurd scale, telepathy, amazing tinker abilities, and the ability to tell the future. As well Endbringer endurance and durability. Wow

    As for the quarantine, does she control people’s minds? If she does I’m betting it’s so subtle a form of mind control that the people being controlled don’t even know it. A ‘would you kindly’ kind of thing.

      • Haha. The characters can claim she isn’t supposed to be a tinker all they want, Simurgh doesn’t give a fuck.

      • I get it. She’s really and truly no-fooling not a tinker. What she is however is an extremely — extremely — gifted precognitive. She looks at the phase space of all possible futures (however unlikely) and sees one where she builds that thing by pure blind-watchmaker chance. Then she just follows the instructions from that future to do it in the present.

        Now I’ve scared myself.

        • That is ridiculous. She clearly IS a tinker and just hadn’t displayed it in her attacks yet. Up until this time they didn’t know she is a tinker.

          • Well i know its been months, but these is also my first readtgrough, i think she just extracts knowledge from nearby people, that would explain everything. And also she is a telekinetic

        • The only redeeming thing about that scenario is that she doesn’t actually want to kill as many people as she can, or cause as much suffering as possible, or anything that simple; or it would already be game over.

        • I had an idea for a story with a character whose main power is something similar to what you described. Only problem is it made him too crazy powerful and I couldn’t come up with any good counters to avoid having him be a Marty Stu.

          • Really?I already thought of one.Assume free will.That means that other people’s actions have at least some degree of unpredictability to him.Following future instructions to dodge a high kick ain’t worth shit if the oppomet uses low kick.Following a walkthrough on a boss means nothing if the boss ain’t following it.

            He would still be by no means underpowered,he could act any actions coming from nature,as well as any slow or pre planned actions (unless the oppoment changes his/her plan the last second)but at least he can be countered.

            • See, that might work, but what’s described would be seeing everything that everyone could possibly do, and all the effects of those actions. Everyone still has the free will to do whatever they want, but you’d know beforehand what anyone could do at any given moment, and how to counter anything they do end up doing. So, sure, you wouldn’t know for sure whether someone would go for a high kick or a leg sweep, but you would be prepared to react to either in an instant, knowing exactly what to do no matter what moves your opponent makes. It’s less knowing exactly what will happen in the future and more knowing everything that *could* happen in the future, depending on how people act.

              The only real counter for something like that is crippling character flaws. Make them so lazy they never act on anything, maybe some really bad OCD to stop them from acting on some futures, something like that.

            • The problem is that because of Laplace’s demon you can’t assume free will, just something that a human normally living their life would be unable to distinguish from it.

      • Im thinking that the endbringers might be a trio of the god like figures that keep appearing throughout the story. They can’t die, they create massive destruction, and they just keep coming back for more. And they appear to have powers/ power like things- and the god things that are shown are hinted at giving humanity powers.

      • Even if she’s not technically a parahuman, much like Dragon, if the effect is exactly the same as if she was, she may as well be! Building an alternate dimension portal out of scrap?

    • Whatever her mental attack is it can’t possibly be that subtle once it sets in. If it was Noelle probably wouldn’t have been able to keep her shit together when they were in her room hiding from Crawler.

  2. Anyone else get the feeling Krouse doomed Noelle when he told her to keep trying? She kept trying to interpret the song and got infected with it. Tattle almost certainly knows and I am willing to bet the heroes figure it out shortly after Noelle gets active in Brockton.

    • I actually got the impression that she was bulimic or something and had been trying for a while not to force herself to throw up after eating. It seemed to fit with her being both easy to approach and yet refusing to let anyone in.

  3. This is getting really good.

    “slicing a leg open or falling through.” Dunno whether you decided about oxford commas but that line stuck out.
    “You’re follow that stuff.” ‘You’
    “Luke tried on some boots until he found some rubber boots that were big enough.” Maybe replace one of the instances of ‘boots’?
    “the ill-fitting boots he had borrowed.” Krouse was described before and after as having only borrowed hat, gloves, and jacket.
    “One wave of capes were retreating” Should it be ‘was’ retreating? It is a bit confusing because it is a group of people, but it is a single unit of people.
    “as though he were a tuning fork and for just a moment he’d ceased vibrating.” No typo here, but I loved that line.
    “and the Simurgh took the opportunity to land one well placed shot.” Should be Scion?
    “then they ran away from the fighting.” Double space.
    “twice as large and just as long as his torso.” Should it be twice as wide? With such odd imagery it can be hard to tell quite whether something is a mistake or I’m simply not getting it. Either way, that’s one big freaking head.

      • “The heroine dove the Simurgh, and the Endbringer was quick to fly to one side..”

        Dove ‘at’ the Simurgh?

        And even more terrifying would be the thought-chain that every mind that ‘came under the thrall of the Simurgh’ acted as an amplifier for the alien song. It has been hypothesized for Skitter’s powerset and bugs, but if a million or five million voices all carrying different tones continued to wash out and expand the area of influence/power of the Simurgh… it could be that the best way they’ve discovered to deal with her (based on the quarantine comment) is to simply let the city and all the folks die and hope the Simurgh leaves before accomplishing her objective.

        And given how zero-sum most Endbringer scenarios are, it makes a perverted sort of sense… Tossing nukes would be a mistake as they’d just get tossed back–or the ambient energy used for any of a number of things… or there’d be an irradiated and ANGRY Simurgh visible five minutes later…

        And the timing of this ‘quarantine’ is amazingly convenient. Someone had enough advance warning to get a perimeter in place yet not enough warning to tell people to get out, it would appear.

        • Getting soldiers mobilized takes less time than evacuating a city. Especially when you consider most military bases are probably on alert all the time two months or so after each endbringer attack. Military recruitment is probably also on the rise.

          • I would accept this, however based on the perception of time this has only appears to have been about ten minutes to an hour-ish. That’s kind of pushing it even for elite teams to get into place for something of this sort of scale. If my estimates are off, that could factor in, but any military force is going to need time to load up their vehicles, do a gear-check (even en-route) and deploy in a fully supported quarantine stance. This is not adding in the factor that if quarantine has been indicated, CBR (Chemical, Biological, Radiological) gear needs to be equipped as well, which would slow down response times.

          • @Wageslave: could be Dragon’s influence there. If she’s mobilizing the forces, it’s possible she was able to coordinate a perimeter in time.

          • Well, unlike Leviathan and Behemoth, the Simurgh is under constant observation- I’d not be surprised to learn that there are military forces constantly updated on her probable vector at any given time.

            Of course, the Simurgh can intercept such data- but it is probably subtle enough not to let this become public knowledge.

          • Easier to get an organized force with clear command structure and ever-present communcations moving than it is a city full of people who don’t know what’s going on.

        • My reading of the quarantine was that capes were setting it up. Given their rotating shifts there’s a lot of capepower active at any given time to put to uses besides actively fighting Simurgh.

  4. On the second day of Wormmass, my wildbow gave to me;
    Two cameos,
    And the start of some origin stories.

    (The two cameos being Dragon and Alexandria. I didn’t count Scion because we haven’t seen much interaction with him yet, though I would love for that to change.)

    Also, when all the capes started attacking Simurgh all at once, I like to imagine it’s because Dragon said, in her best GLaDOS voice, “Now the Simurgh is thinking with portals.”

      • *sigh* You went to one of those brothels that Psycho Gecko recommended, didn’t you?

        It’s alright, we all make that mistake at least once. Get to a doctor, show them your… problem. They will prescribe some ceftriaxone. You will be clean in a week and a half or so.

        • I’ve recommended brothels?

          I know that in some part of Nevada, they have legalized prostitution and make sure to check the girls frequently for diseases (including AIDS), enforce mandatory condom use on the guys, and include security in case some guy wants to go too far. It’s almost like it made the industry both safer and taxable.

          I suspect the porn industry has helped to prevent more such areas from popping up around the nation. I’d get to the bottom of that conspiracy, but I’m worried they’d take that turn of phrase seriously.

          I’m more concerned with where the portal is to. The creatures are neither uniform nor on the same side. Potentially an alternate earth, but not one I’ve ever been to. Similar enough humanoids capable of speaking English. In fact, the big head guy reminded me of this old show I saw once. Something where a guy’s head has been made huge and hollowed out so some alien beasty could live in there. Very much Western animation style that I vaguely remember resembling King of the Hill and Beavis and Butthead.

          Upon further searching, the series was called The Head.

        • Though I do hope it’s not one of the drug resistant strains of it. Some of those diseases are down to maybe one antibiotic in the U.S. working due to some people’s overuse of them. Probably a little better off in Canada.

          And it’s in no way the fault of anyone who got shrunk once and had to start a microbial revolution inside a hospital being run by a superhero working on a new form of containment for villains. Viva la drug resistance!…I mean, long live our drug overlords!

          *covers up his poster on the wall of his helmet in red against a black amoeba that is itself against a red backdrop*

          Now might be a good time to move to Madagascar.

  5. I am very interested in where exactly the portal led to and what the things that came out are. Could that be the apocalypse? Many different portals open at the same time? Still teasing on what exactly her signal does, but we know that it is contagious and Dragon killed the guy. Dragon is programmed to value human life, so something really bad was going to happen to him.

      • Stuff like that makes me curious about the laws in the wormverse. Whose job is it to push that button and are they protected from legal persecution? My guess would be military, its always the military that is shooting people trying to flee quarantine in virus movies. But that raises more questions in regards to the military and the heroes. Do they heroes follow military order under martial law, or does the military take orders from Thinker heroes during an attack? It also makes me question again why they don’t let villains in the birdcage fight to reduce their sentences, they need all the help they can get. Now we know what makes the Legend and Alexandria “top” heroes. They have survived multiple fights with the Endbringers. It actually reminds me of Xcom. Try not to get too attached to any new hero until they have survived a few encounters with the Endbringers, as chances are they are just meat for the grinder. No wonder the villains heavily outnumber the heroes, the heroes keep dying. I wonder if there is Endbringer insurance.

        • Endbringer insurance, after a fashion, is mentioned. Not like you’re talking about, though. More on a large scale – international funding devoted to the recovery efforts post-attack.

          • I think all the explanation we really need is that the Simurgh is contagious and clearly infected an entire city when she first showed up. I am willing to bet that is one of the times they tried nuking an endbringer. How else would they clear out its rot?

          • He had a bright costume and a ‘good’ power, so it seems likely he was a hero. Not conclusive though, I admit.

            I imagine the PRT might actually have to be even more careful when executing villains in Endbringer attacks than with heroes: if the villains risk their lives in the fight, then get killed by the people they were helping, how many will turn up next time?

            • I’d say hero because Dragon clearly knew he had a wife and son, so his civilian identity was probably known to her. Thus, more likely a hero than a villain.

              • That seems like solid reasoning to me. If its was a villain, Dragon may not know those details nor make such a civil offer to a dying man.

        • At least with regards to the villains in the Birdcage, there’s literally no way out of it, even if the authorities wanted to let them help fight the Endbringers they probably couldn’t without dismantling the whole facility.

        • Possible idea on the Birdcage…

          They have what may be the largest collection of capes in the world. Almost all of them are completely disposable in the public eye, guilty of serious crimes. They are a collection of unparalleled power that dwarfs even observed Endbringer fighting forces.

          All of them are in a single point of failure, possibly one of the most vulnerable spots…

          What if it’s a trap to kill an Endbringer? Have the Endbringer smash in and then face the strongest army they have all at once.

  6. ‘There was the fact that Noelle was bleeding and unconscious dand might very well be dying as Luke carried her.’ – That’s probably supposed to be ‘and’.

    Also, it’s interesting to hear the Simurgh is the one took out Switzerland, when it was mentioned before, I always figured it was Behemoth since the term ‘nuclear wasteland’ was used (at least I think it was). Makes me wonder what the Simurgh did there to get that kind of result.

    Also, this might just be me but I find it kinda weird that Jess seems to be the only one to know anything about the Endbringers. You’d think with such a great and common threat, their’d be efforts to educate people so they know the differences and how to properly protect themselves or run away unharmed.

    • Things might be worse if everyone knew though. Villains might not be willing to fight and you would probably get an increase in endbringer death cults (you just KNOW they must exist by now).

      • According to prophets, the last 2000 years at least have been the end times, baby.

        Some people just want to watch the world (and everyone in it) burn. The exact length of time and potential tortures are just the details, but at least it’ll show them all who was right, won’t it?

  7. The plot thickens.

    I was somehow under the impression that the armbands used in the fight against Leviathan were a new invention by Armsmaster at that point.

    One thing thought that came to me when the portal was revealed, is that the group of friends calls themselves ‘traveller’ the arc is titled ‘migration’ and there is an interdimensional portal close by. I would not be too surprised if it turned out that the travellers were not originally from the main Worm reality.

    The thing with the heroes killing one of their own seems harsh and to go against the limits of Dragons programming, but we don’t know what would have happened had Grandiose lived.

    As more and more of Simurgh’s power I guess I have scrap my privately held theory about the Endbringers powers being Elemental based, with a fourth Endbringer of Fire still waiting to make its debut. Simurgh’s power don’t look too much like the powers of Air.

    On the plus side, I started caring about the plight of the travellers.

    • I would figure that Fire, being an expression of energy, would be very much Behemoths element, moreso than Earth.

    • The Endbringers aren’t necessarily element-themed as they are themed on the biblical monsters leviathan, behemoth and ziz (also known as the simurgh in persia). There’s no need for a fourth, the symmetry is complete, they are a trinity.

      • Stuff like this makes me deathly terrified of a religious theme suddenly appearing. That would be one of the few things that would actually turn me off to this story.

        • Come now. It’s just a mythological reference. After all, would you be turned off if the references had been to Raktabija and Hiranyakashipu or Kraken and Cerberus?

          • I have nothing against the reference, it just worries me as often biblical references are the precursor to the story using the same tired setting of God, the Devil and so on, though often with edgier names. I have a great deal of trust in Wildbow’s writing but all the same…

            • To my mind, it’s hard to have a supers setting *without* raising questions about religion. When you have people demonstrably violating the known laws of reality on a daily basis, well, you kind of have to look at tales of a guy 2000 years ago who could heal the sick and walk on water in a new light. Or the ones about ‘gods’ who could control storms, half-animal people/deities etc. etc.

              Scion is the first known superhuman of the modern age. That doesn’t mean he was the first *ever*. Gods vs monsters/demons is a theme that reverberates throughout folklore in every culture of the world.

              Personally I quite enjoy a story that covers what ‘really’ was behind historical myths. But it needs to be a good story and it needs to be coherent.

          • Hooo boy…the kraken. Boy, that’s awkward. If he asks about me, you don’t see me here and don’t have my number. And even though he’s got all the seductive tentacles and such a charming placement of barnacles, don’t get any ideas about “Releasing the Kraken!”

  8. Awesome chapter! I was wondering about the monsters that came out of the portal because it reminded me of the Interlude where we got to see Nilbog in action. I’m just wondering if there is a connection there or if this is something completely unrelated?

  9. Well, I dare say we probably know what happened to the people who were around Simurgh the first time she showed up and made a move.

      • Actually, the trick is that to get past all of Simurgh’s abilities, you have to use every one of the Knife applications, and everyone always gets sick of it and gives up by then.

        ….And by ‘give up’ I mean ‘go crazy and have their fashionwear explode’.

  10. Strong Cloverfield vibe here. It’s a band of ordinary people trying to survive and get to safety in the middle of a monster attack. They don’t have a good sense for what’s going on or why.

    Not sure how much weight to put on Jess’s insistence that Simurgh is “not a Tinker”. Based on what, the wikipedia article she read? Though apparently making giant portal generating machines is a new tactic for Simurgh.

    The monsters coming out of the portal are nicely creepy. “Give me your memories”? That’s not any ordinary monster, that’s deeply wrong.

      • Aaah. Ok, so I clearly mis-read the name in the previous post, because I had his character (the one who was pissed about being dropped) as being the one who died.

  11. the endbringers are from another world where the two orbs granted powers they destroyed/conquered it and now are coming to earth to do the same thing the people the simurgh summoned are inhabitants of the destroyed world. Scion is also from here as he escaped unmolested

  12. Actually, the beginning of this chapter had me more terrified of Scion than the Simurgh. He seems to be suffering from a kind of “Dr. Manhattan Syndrome” where’s he’s more than a little disconnected from reality. Except that Dr. Manhattan still cared about the people of the world to a small extent. Scion seems to be saving the world because some schmuck gave him some clothes and told him he could be the best superhero ever, and he doesn’t seem to be all that interested in minimizing the damage he does.

    What do you do when the greatest force for good doesn’t even really understand or care about what “good” actually is?

    Blargh. Hard to put my exact thoughts into words. You know how some books describe creepy people who try to smile but have only ever read about how other people do it? I’m applying that sort of thinking to Scion being a hero. And that’s why he absolutely terrifies me.

    • I think the mistake is assuming he is any more human than the endbringers. I think he came from wherever they are from and just has different priorities.

    • I’m not entirely sure I agree. First, it’s my understanding that almost immediately after being first contacted by the ocean liner, he immediately began working to prevent disasters. That kind of seems to preclude the idea that he needed to be shown what to do. It could still be possible that Scion is simply performing his behavior instinctually. But I don’t believe he’s putting on a false exterior.

      Second, I think it’s more than possible that he views the damage done to the city as an acceptable cost considering the threat posed by the Simurgh. If what we’ve learned so far is any indication, everyone in the city may already be as good as dead if the Simurgh is allowed to continue unrestrained. If that’s the case, any incidental damage inflicted while trying to prevent the Simurgh from achieving it’s ultimate goal could very well be justified.

      • Oh no, I’m not saying he’s putting on some sort of face or false exterior for our benefit while he plots nefariously or anything. I just don’t think he has conventional human morals, and whatever he may think is the “right thing” could be something that ends with lots of dead people. It’s not like anyone can stop him from doing whatsoever the hell he pleases after all.

        Endbringers can be driven off with lots and lots of effort and almost always piles of bodies, but the capes CAN do it themselves. Scion stomps Endbringers like it’s the easiest thing in the world (though Smurfy here does seem to be giving him a lot more trouble than Leviathan, by virtue of dodging).

  13. The halo titled at a right angle….

    I’m thinking you were going for “tilted”. Unless the halo is a legal entity that needs a license at a right angle.

    I am really enjoying this chap Wildbow.

    • It feels more like a Jenova/Sephiroth vibe to me. Five minutes into the bossfight, you realize that “One-Winged Angel” actually has words, and that you’ve been thinking them for a while now. See also: large number of asymmetrically arranged wings on a humanoid figure.

      Obviously, the similarities are only surface level, and there are few references/inspirations I can think of that would be more impressive/terrifying.

    • I was thinking the same thing, but that’s also because I only recently got an X-Box 360 and several games for it. Last night, I finished Mass Effect by a combination of applied sniping and talking. So yeah, Indoctrination was on my mind.

      • Well, The simurgh and disaster dominoes and affecting adjacent worlds might just explain why the Writers of the ending of ME 3 thought it was any bloody good…(at least the epilogue additions are decent)

  14. I’m guessing that Simurgh opened a portal into the pocket dimension (or whatever) where Cauldron is based. That would explain the deformed people, lack of memories, and lack of dreams.

    Deformities: Cauldron test formulas.
    Lack of memories/dreams: We know that Cauldron can wipe memories. The absence of dreams could be because the people spat out by the portal were in the middle of being brainwashed–just because Cauldron’s formula was only a prototype, doesn’t mean they can’t test out new psychic conditioning methods.

    • Possible, but my guess would be that the place she opened up to is someplace where there were people who’d been warped by her song.

      Where that would be, I have no idea.

  15. Still on the side of this balance of power being off. I don’t see how heroes can be fighting this and win later on since they’re doing no damage and dying all the time.

    Also where are the jet planes to come flying by and launch some missiles at her? A tank or two to get some armour piercing shots in, get some tinkered stuff as well with nano tech bullets.

    • They prolly tried,and it prolly failed spectacularly…mass evacuation would be the best way to fight the Simurgh,but he may follow them,so the next best thing is :throw capes at it until Scion comes.

  16. For some reason, when we first met the Travelers, I didn’t ever think of them as having all known each other for a long time. Because they were all so emotionally distant, I envisioned them as being people who had just been thrown together by a common tragedy (whatever the deal with Noelle is), but otherwise never had a very strong bond.

    But the more I think about it, their group dynamic really makes more sense for a group of people whose relationship has been irreparably *damaged* by a common tragedy. They seem almost like a married couple who want to get divorced but are staying together “for the kids”.

  17. Suggestion for the book edit:
    I feel like the description of their escape progress includes a lot about Krouse/ Luke/ Marissa helping with Noelle and nothing about how Cody/ Oliver are doing with Jess, except when Jess speaks about her cape/ Endbringer knowledge. It’s like she catches up out of nowhere.
    I think I love the “a-ha” moments in backstory chapters best!

    • Yep. Pretty sure this arc is following Krouse around as the viewpoint character. It’s only showing what he’s personally aware of.

  18. the travelers were transported from an alternate earth, along with their immediate surroundings (a good-sized chunk of that apartment building) into a city that had already been evacuated and quarantined due to impending endbringer. they have received an incredible amount of radiation, so cauldron offers them the regenerative effects of superpowers in a bottle.

    the music in their heads is just the resonance of many universes interfering and if they had merely stopped to listen they might have found its beauty.

  19. Fuck me.

    Wild speculation. The Endbringers either are one of the creatures people see during trigger events but in a more easy to comprehend form, for this world, or they’re from the same dimension. They’re trapped here and kill loads of people and cause massive amounts of destruction to cause trigger events to try to get the attention of the kaleidoscope beings to take them “home”. Dunno, it’s the only thing that sort of makes sense with the info given up to this point, to me at least.

    Why do I really want to take a spray bottle and spray the Simurgh in the face and go, “Bad Endbringer, BAD!”

    • I quite like the Traveler’s arc. It’s one of my favorite bits of Worm, for the reveal of the Simurgh’s true power and the similarities (and differences) between Krouse and Taylor. You may not enjoy it, but other people do.

    • Yeah, I agree. First we had a whole arc on the Wards, who are basically minor characters in the story. Then we had one for each of the Slaughterhouse Nine. That was sort of relevant, I guess, but it did really disrupt the story’s flow. And now this.

      Interlude chapters are fine, but entire arcs dedicated to minor characters really take me out of the story, and I’m less interested by the time it gets back to the main arc. It’s not the best method of storytelling.

      I really don’t care about the Travelers at all. They seem friendly, then they’re assholes. Rinse, repeat. I’ve long lost interest in what motivates them. If this were to be a relevant bit of storytelling, it should have happened a long time ago in order to explain their hot-cold cycles. Or, y’know, interlace that explanation into the main story arc via conversations. That would have been the best option. As it is, they’re yet another batch of asshole minor characters. I wish that there were at least one likeable character in this entire story.

  20. “The ice-encased sphere slammed into the ground with a speed and force that suggested it was the Simurgh, not the cape, who was controlling his movement.” –> it’s movement?

    god I hate chaps not focusing on the hero and focusing on sth else
    hopiously I like the travellers and Simurgh

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