Reviews for Narra
dferveiro chapter 5 . 8/31/2006
Of course I had to read this too. I really like it! I'm not sure what Nara's mutation is yet-did I miss it, because I thought you said it wasn't her empath power. Maybe I misread. Anyway, I like how this is written and am wondering where it goes from here. If you are still writing it, I'd love to see more. Thanks!
kelso chapter 5 . 5/19/2006
I would really like to know where your going with this so update soon please.
ninja44 chapter 4 . 5/18/2006
Another good chapter bravo! But...where the heck is the solar plexus? You are very detailed, something that is hard to put in a story for a lot of people. But when you say things that detailed it becomes over kill. So if Narra: "drives a blow deep into his sternum" you can say she stabbed the soldier in the chest, and will get the point.
Celtic Spacey chapter 4 . 5/15/2006
This rocks. I love this chapter - it's really descriptive! Update soon!
ninja44 chapter 2 . 5/6/2006
Hi, it's really good at it's cleared up my questions, can't what for the next chapter.
macpw2 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Very good so far, You seem to have Logan's character down pretty well!
ninja44 chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
This is really good. But when dose it take place? Before X2 or is it X3and Jean's back? Try to tell the reader. Also tell how Prof. X knows Narra's dad, unless it'll give something important away. Please update soon.