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The Story Sisters

Chapter 1


Once a year there was a knock at the door. Two times, then nothing.
No one else heard, only me. Even when I was a baby in my cradle. My
mother didn’t hear. My father didn’t hear. My sisters
continued sleeping. But the cat looked up.

When I was old enough I opened the door. There she was. A lady
wearing a gray coat. She had a branch from a hawthorn tree, the one
that grew outside my window. She spoke, but I didn’t know her
language. A big wind had come up and the door slammed shut. When I
opened it again, she was gone.

But I knew what she wanted.


The one word I’d understood was daughter.

I asked my mother to tell me about the day I was born. She
couldn’t remember. I asked my father. He had no idea. My
sisters were too young to know where I’d come from. When the
gray lady next came, I asked the same question. I could tell from
the look on her face. She knew the answer. She went down to the
marsh, where the tall reeds grew, where the river began. I ran to
keep up. She slipped into the water, all gray and murky. She waited
for me to follow. I didn’t think twice. I took off my boots.
The water was cold. I went under fast.

It was April in New York City and from the window of their room at
the Plaza Hotel everything looked bright and green. The Story
sisters were sharing a room on the evening of their
grandparents’ fiftieth anniversary party. Their mother
trusted them completely. They were not the sort of teenagers who
would steal from the minibar only to wind up drunk in the hallway,
sprawled out on the carpet or nodding off in a doorway,
embarrassing themselves and their families. They would never hang
out the window to wave away cigarette smoke or toss water balloons
onto unsuspecting pedestrians below. They were diligent, beautiful
girls, well behaved, thoughtful. Most people were charmed to
discover that the girls had a private, shared language. It was
lovely to hear, musical. When they spoke to each other, they
sounded like birds.

The eldest girl was Elisabeth, called Elv, now fifteen. Meg was
only a year younger, and Claire had just turned twelve. Each had
long dark hair and pale eyes, a startling combination. Elv was a
disciplined dancer, the most beautiful in many people’s
opinions, the one who had invented the Story sisters’ secret
world. Meg was a great reader and was never without a book; while
walking to school she often had one open in her hands, so engrossed
she would sometimes trip while navigating familiar streets. Claire
was diligent, kindhearted, never one to shirk chores. Her bed was
made before her sisters opened their sleepy eyes. She raked the
lawn and watered the garden and always went to sleep on time. All
were self-reliant and practical, honor students any parents would
be proud to claim as their own. But when the girls’ mother
came upon them chattering away in that language no one else could
understand, when she spied maps and graphs that meant nothing to
her, that defined another world, her daughters made her think of
clouds, something far away and inaccessible.

Annie and the girls’ father had divorced four years earlier,
the summer of the gypsy moths when all of the trees in their yard
were bare, the leaves chewed by caterpillars. You could hear
crunching in the night. You could see silvery cocoon webbing in
porch rafters and strung across stop signs. People said there were
bound to be hard times ahead for the Storys. Alan was a high school
principal, his schedule too full for many visits. He’d been
the one who’d wanted out of the marriage, and after the split
he’d all but disappeared. At the age of forty-seven,
he’d become a ladies’ man, or maybe it was simply that
there weren’t many men around at that stage of the game.
Suddenly he was in demand. There was another woman in the
background during the breakup. She’d quickly been replaced by
a second girlfriend the Story sisters had yet to meet. But so far
there had been no great disasters despite the divorce and all of
the possible minefields that accompanied adolescence. Annie and her
daughters still lived in the same house in North Point Harbor,
where a big hawthorn tree grew outside the girls’ bedroom
window. People said it had been there before Long Island was
settled and that it was the oldest tree for miles around. In the
summertime much of the Storys’ yard was taken up with a large
garden filled with rows of tomato plants. There was a stone
birdbath at the center and a latticework trellis that was heavy
with climbing sweet peas and tremulous, prickly cucumber vines. The
Story sisters could have had small separate bedrooms on the first
floor, but they chose to share the attic. They preferred one
another’s company to rooms of their own. When Annie heard
them behind the closed door, whispering conspiratorially to each
other in that secret vocabulary of theirs, she felt left out in
some deep, hurtful way. Her oldest girl sat up in the hawthorn tree
late at night; she said she was looking at stars, but she was there
even on cloudy nights, her black hair even blacker against the sky.
Annie was certain that people who said daughters were easy had
never had girls of their own.

Today the Story sisters were all in blue. Teal and azure and
sapphire. They liked to wear similar clothes and confuse people as
to who was who. Usually they wore jeans and T-shirts, but this was
a special occasion. They adored their grandmother Natalia, whom
they called Ama, a name Elv had bestowed upon her as a toddler.
Their ama was Russian and elegant and wonderful. She’d fallen
in love with their grandfather in France. Although the Rosens lived
on Eighty- ninth Street, they kept their apartment where Natalia
had lived as a young woman in the Marais district of Paris, near
the Place du Marché- Sainte-Catherine, and as far as the Story
sisters were concerned, it was the most wonderful spot in the

Annie and the girls visited once a year. They were infatuated with
Paris. They had dreams of long days filled with creamy light and
meals that lasted long into the hazy blur of evening. They loved
French ice cream and the glasses of blue-white milk. They studied
beautiful women and tried to imitate the way they walked, the way
they tied their scarves so prettily. They always traveled to France
for spring vacation. The chestnut tree in the courtyard was in
bloom then, with its scented white flowers.

The Plaza was probably the second-best place in the world. Annie
went to the girls’ room to find her daughters clustered
around the window, gazing at the horse-drawn carriages down below.
From a certain point of view the sisters looked like women, tall
and beautiful and poised, but they were still children in many
ways, the younger girls especially. Meg said that when she got
married she wanted to ride in one of those carriages. She would
wear a white dress and carry a hundred roses. The girls’
secret world was called Arnelle. Arnish for rose was minta. It was
the single word Annie understood. Alana me sora minta, Meg was
saying. Roses wherever you looked.

“How can you think about that now?” Elv gestured out
the window. She was easily outraged and hated mistreatment of any
sort. “Those carriage horses are malnourished,” she
informed her sister.

Elv had always been an animal fanatic. Years ago she’d found
a rabbit, mortally wounded by a lawn mower’s blades, left to
bleed to death in the velvety grass of the Weinsteins’ lawn.
She’d tried her best to nurse it to health, but in the end
the rabbit had died in a shoebox, covered up with a doll’s
blanket. Afterward she and Meg and Claire had held a funeral,
burying the shoebox beneath the back porch, but Elv had been
inconsolable. If we don’t take care of the creatures who have
no voice, she’d whispered to her sisters, then who will? She
tried to do exactly that. She left out seeds for the mourning
doves, opened cans of tuna fish for stray cats, set out packets of
sugar for the garden moths. She had begged for a dog, but her
mother had neither the time nor the patience for a pet. Annie
wasn’t about to disrupt their home life. She had no desire to
add another personality to the mix, not even that of a terrier or a

Elv was wearing the darkest of the dresses, a deep sapphire, the
one her sisters coveted. They wanted to be everything she was and
traipsed after her faithfully. The younger girls were rapt as she
ranted on about the carriage horses. “They’re made to
ride around without food or water all day long. They’re
worked until they’re nothing but skin and bones.”

“Skin and bones” was a favorite phrase of Elv’s.
It got to the brutal point. The secret universe she had created was
a faery realm where women had wings and it was possible to read
thoughts. Arnelle was everything the human world was not. Speech
was unnecessary, treachery out of the question. It was a world
where no one could take you by surprise or tell you a mouthful of
lies. You could see someone’s heart through his chest and
know if he was a goblin, a mortal, or a true hero. You could divine
a word’s essence by a halo of color—red was false,
white was true, yellow was the foulest of lies. There were no ropes
to tie you, no iron bars, no stale bread, no one to shut and lock
the door.

Elv had begun to whisper Arnelle stories to her sisters during the
bad summer when she was eleven. It was hot that August; the grass
had turned brown. In other years summer had been Elv’s
favorite season—no school, long days, the bay only a bicycle
ride away from their house on Nightingale Lane. But that summer all
she’d wanted was to lock herself away with her sisters. They
hid in their mother’s garden, beneath the trailing pea vines.
The tomato plants were veiled by a glinting canopy of bottle-green
leaves. The younger girls were eight and ten. They didn’t
know there were demons on earth, and Elv didn’t have the
heart to tell them. She brushed the leaves out of her
sisters’ hair. She would never let anyone hurt them. The
worst had already happened, and she was still alive. She
couldn’t even say the words

for what had happened, not even to Claire, who’d been with
her that day, who’d managed to get away because Elv had
implored her to run.

When she first started to tell her sisters stories, she asked for
them to close their eyes and pretend they were in the otherworld.
It was easy, she said. Just let go of this world. They’d been
stolen by mortals, she whispered, given a false family.
They’d been stripped of their magic by the charms humans used
against faeries: bread, metal, rope. The younger girls didn’t
complain when their clothes became dusted with dark earth as they
lay in the garden, although Meg, always so tidy, stood in the
shower afterward and soaped herself clean. In the real world, Elv
confided, there were pins, spindles, beasts, fur, claws. It was a
fairy tale in reverse. The good and the kind lived in the
otherworld, down twisted lanes, in the woods where trout lilies
grew. True evil could be found walking down Nightingale Lane.
That’s where it happened.

They were coming home from the bay. Meg had been sick so
she’d stayed home. It was just the two of them. When the man
in the car told Claire to get in the backseat, she did. She
recognized him from school. He was one of the teachers. She was
wearing her bathing suit. It was about to rain and she thought he
was doing them a favor. But he started driving away before her
sister got into the car. Elv ran alongside and banged on the car
door, yelling for him to let her sister out. He stopped long enough
to grab her and drag her inside, too. He stepped on the gas, still
holding on to Elv. “Reunina lee,” Elv said. It was the
first time she spoke Arnish. The words came to her as if by magic.
By magic, Claire understood. I came to rescue you.

At the next stop sign, Claire opened the door and ran.

Arnelle was so deep under the ground you had to descend more than a
thousand steps. There were three sisters there, Elv had told
Claire. They were beautiful and loyal, with pale eyes and long,
black hair.

“Like us,” Claire always said, delighted.

If they concentrated, if they closed their eyes, they could always
find their way back to the otherworld. It was beneath the tall
hawthorn tree in the yard, beneath the chestnut tree in Paris. Two
doorways no one else could get past. No one could hurt you there or
tear you into pieces. No one could put a curse on you or lock you
away. Once you went down the underground stairs and went through
the gate there were roses even when snow fell in the real world,
when the drifts were three feet deep.

Most people were seized by the urgency of Elv’s stories, and
her sisters were no exception. At school, classmates gathered round
her at lunchtime. She never spoke about Arnelle to anyone but her
dear sisters, but that didn’t mean she didn’t have
stories to tell. For her school friends she had tales of life on
earth, stories of demons she didn’t want her sisters to hear.
A demon usually said three words to put a curse on you. He cut you
three times with a knife. Elv could see what the rest of them never
could. She had “the sight,” she said. She predicted
futures for girls in her history and math classes. She scared the
hell out of some of them and told others exactly what they wanted
to hear. Even in Paris when she went to visit her grandparents, the
city was filled with demons. They prowled the streets and watched
you as you slept. They came in through the window like black
insects drawn to the light. They put a hand over your mouth, kept
your head under water if you screamed. They came to get you if you
ever dared tell and turned you to ash with one touch.

Each day, the number of girls who gathered around Elv in the
cafeteria increased. They circled around to hear her intoxicating
tales, told with utter conviction. Demons wore black coats and
thick- soled boots. The worst sort of goblin was the kind that
could eat you alive. Just a kiss, miss. Just a bite.

Excerpted from THE STORY SISTERS © Copyright 2011 by Alice
Hoffman. Reprinted with permission by Three Rivers Press. All
rights reserved.

The Story Sisters
by by Alice Hoffman

  • Genres: Fiction
  • paperback: 352 pages
  • Publisher: Broadway
  • ISBN-10: 0307405966
  • ISBN-13: 9780307405968