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Sleeping Beauty [7/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (7/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13 (for now)
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF



Chapter 7Collapse )

Your life is a fairytale!!!

Thank you so much for injecting pieces of your reality into this! =D

I don't usually comment on old chapters or often in fics I read, they're few and far inbetween anyway and I prefer to word vomit all of my thoughts at the very end so I don't get repetitive and I can justify my comments when they reach novel size however here I am~

I do love this, the writing to very simply worded and yet it really speaks volumes at the same time and it leaves my imagination wandering- that is a mix I really, really enjoy but I find it so very often which is why I don't read much works by people. Anyway I think the character development is going fine- there is enough description and explanation with a decent pace although in theory its been a short time between Yunho and Jaejoong. They haven't completely jumped the gun yet either, which I find enjoyable.

But if I'm honest what had me commenting now is that note about you and your husband. I find it so very sickeningly cute [I mean this is the best way possible] and I don't consider myself much of a sap either but aaa cute.

woah that such a long looong night for yun n jae, and they kissed FUFUFUUU :**

Ohwmygawd! >.<

The last part just killed me >///<

Though, I can't help to think...if yunho would wake up with a boner...and jae would feel it >.

Awwwww~~~~ ^\\\\^ this was a cute chapter!

i kind of re-read a couple of times at the part when jae soothed yunho from his nightmare and took care of jiyool at the same time. that was so :"D

“Come back to sleep…”



i feel like they already married xD

omg wow, just ten days? and i thought it was incredible to hear a couple get married just three weeks after meeting. you're right, love is different for each person. you're making me smile just imagining this yunjae scene here. <3

the last scene was killing me,,,,it was so sweet
off to the next chapter

Jae's so cuuuuute....
And I like how jae's being manhandled and spooned kekekekke..

Ps: really? You've only know your hubby for 10 days?? Whoah.. I really want to hear the story..

omgg hgsjsysbsksbsgskl this is so beautiful and beautiful and beautiful ;;;_____;;;

Fate! Yes, I too believe in fate. And I believe that Jae's heart is warm enough to melt the ice wall from around Yunho's heart.
From the Yunho's nightmare I have a strong feeling: as they met before.
I like so much how their feelings grow towards a real love.

There is something so strong when u connect with someone that even after 5 minutes u feel right at home, like that other person IS home. You just captured that beautifully in your story.

Nothing is too fast or too slow with love but omg your lovestory is♥♥♥ 10 days? And you're nearing your decade anniversary soon! Some might call it crazy but I find it romantic. Anyway them spooning and linking their fingers while sleeping is so sweet ;___;

I think what's wonderful about this fic is that no matter how fast everything is happening between them, for them it feels like they've been searching for each other for a lifetime...
And seeing how Yunho is at least a little attached to Jaejoong, everything feels like it's falling into place... I just hope that Yunho will never get tired fighting his demons... which I'm sure he won't because he has an angel with him... :)
It's so unusual of Yunho to be clingy and do skinship but with Jaejoong that night, my heart is swelling with joy I feel like I'm Mama Kim cheering for the two of them!!! Lol, I can't really choose which part of the fic is my favorite coz I love every bits of it... <3