Is there a lack of direct logical connection between the premise and the hypothesis? Premise: They, they definitely had a lot of pride in, in the appearance of the studio and how well it was maintained, which was nice. Hypothesis: They spent many hours keeping the studio in order.
They, they definitely had a lot of pride in, in the appearance of the studio and how well it was maintained, which was nice.###They spent many hours keeping the studio in order.