If we start with 'There is no tradition of clothes criticism that includes serious analysis, or even of costume criticism among theater, ballet, and opera critics, who do have an august writerly heritage.', does it make sense to conclude with 'Clothes criticism is not taken seriously by consumers.'
There is no tradition of clothes criticism that includes serious analysis, or even of costume criticism among theater, ballet, and opera critics, who do have an august writerly heritage.###Clothes criticism is not taken seriously by consumers.