From 'My own reading of the passage turns as much on the word pale as on bond , but the word limit set by the essay competition forced me to be rather elliptical.', can we conclude that 'In my essay, I focused parenthetically on the passage's use of the words pale and bond.' is unrelated and maintains neutrality?
My own reading of the passage turns as much on the word pale as on bond , but the word limit set by the essay competition forced me to be rather elliptical.###In my essay, I focused parenthetically on the passage's use of the words pale and bond.