Is there a lack of direct logical connection between the premise and the hypothesis? Premise: They, they definitely had a lot of pride in, in the appearance of the studio and how well it was maintained, which was nice. Hypothesis: The studio looked good and was well-maintained.
They, they definitely had a lot of pride in, in the appearance of the studio and how well it was maintained, which was nice.###The studio looked good and was well-maintained.