Would any brokers here be willing to look over my resume and provide feedback? Any help would be greatly appreciated! (Applying to brokerage positions in NYC)
I'm going to apply to brokerages in my city (NYC), and want to make sure my resume is sufficient. I currently work for a broker in Queens, but am looking to move to another company in a broker or analyst role.

[Resume](https://imgur.com/a/iP5G3)

Thank you!
[{"id": "dwbygul", "text": "I would take out the info about your old jobs as drum instructor and manager/drummer as they are irrelevant to the position you seek. Use that freed-up space to give more detail on your real estate-related experience/qualifications. Good luck! Feel free to PM me for more details.", "replies": [], "depth": 1}, {"id": "dwc0kdo", "text": "Any chance you can put some numbers in there to quantify the deals you've done as an Associate? Brought in $X amount or leased X amount of SF, etc...something like that.", "replies": [{"id": "dwcvjam", "text": "I second this \nThat's what I would look for.", "replies": [], "depth": 2}], "depth": 1}, {"id": "dweaevh", "text": "Good luck with your search! My company is currently hiring pm me if you are interested", "replies": [], "depth": 1}]