user9229: Embedded game was the one which I'd played some months back. As part of analysis, if this steps could get commented,- 1.d4 f5 2.Nf3 d5 3.e3 a5 4.Be2 h5 it will be better for a newbie to pick it up & play well. It gives good picture for one to have some diff. in opening principle.
Queen Loss for Black is blundered & clumsy move which Black had played 12.* Qxg6. I hope its not kind of Swindle. If it is not what it could named as.
And if this blundered move 28.cxd5 not happened, then white would've not lost its Queen. Will it be positive for White to have win or still Black is better in a streak to win.
After 13th move does white had played any other blundered moves, which is after my side Queen's end. What white would've done something precautions as pawns were upfront on castling side.

Particularly comment rather not considering blunders which I had
  mentioned, as the game maybe progressed considering better defense. Is
  I am right, else its not better played rather?

Here is fen for the game,
[FEN ""]
[Event "Live Chess"]
[Site "Chess.com"]
[Date "2017.08.03"]
[White "kingggggggggggggg"]
[Black "bram-stokers"]
[WhiteElo "855"]
[BlackElo "1172"]
[TimeControl "600"]
[ECO "A80"]
[Termination "bram-stokers won by checkmate"]
[Result "0-1"]
[CurrentPosition "rnbqkbnr/pppppppp/8/8/3P4/8/PPP1PPPP/RNBQKBNR b KQkq d3 0 1"]

1.d4 f5 2.Nf3 d5 3.e3 a5 4.Be2 h5 5.O-O e6 6.c3 g5 7.Qc2 Nc6 8.Bd3 g4 9.Ng5 Qxg5 10.e4 f4 11.e5 f3 12.Bg6+ Qxg6 13.Qxg6+ Ke7 14.Qg5+ Kd7 15.Qf5 Be7 16.Qc2 h4 17.Na3 h3 18.gxh3 gxh3 19.Qd3 Nh6 20.Qxf3 Rg8+ 21.Kh1 Nf5 22.Qxh3 Nd8 23.b3 Nf7 24.c4 dxc4 25.bxc4 a4 26.d5 exd5 27.Qxf5+ Ke8 28.cxd5 Bxf5 29.Rg1 Be4+ 30.f3 Bxf3+ 31.Rg2 Rxg2 32.Nc4 Rg8#  0-1


user14202: Lets forget the game is a Dutch as you leave opening theory extremely quickly with amateur moves.  I recommend you learn basic principals which are available for free in many places such as this Susan Polgar video: https://youtu.be/U9cIr7P9gkg

9229: <p>Embedded game was the one which I'd played some months back. As part of analysis, if this steps could get commented,- <code>1.d4 f5 2.Nf3 d5 3.e3 a5 4.Be2 h5</code> it will be better for a newbie to pick it up &amp; play well. It gives good picture for one to have some diff. in opening principle.</p>

<p>Queen Loss for Black is blundered &amp; clumsy move which Black had played <code>12.* Qxg6</code>. I hope its not kind of <code>Swindle</code>. If it is not what it could named as.</p>

<p>And if this blundered move <code>28.cxd5</code> not happened, then white would've not lost its Queen. Will it be positive for White to have win or still Black is better in a streak to win.</p>

<p>After 13th move does white had played any other blundered moves, which is after my side Queen's end. What white would've done something precautions as pawns were upfront on castling side.</p>

<blockquote>
  <p>Particularly comment rather not considering blunders which I had
  mentioned, as the game maybe progressed considering better defense. Is
  I am right, else its not better played rather?</p>
</blockquote>

<p>Here is fen for the game,</p>

<pre><code>[FEN ""]
[Event "Live Chess"]
[Site "Chess.com"]
[Date "2017.08.03"]
[White "kingggggggggggggg"]
[Black "bram-stokers"]
[WhiteElo "855"]
[BlackElo "1172"]
[TimeControl "600"]
[ECO "A80"]
[Termination "bram-stokers won by checkmate"]
[Result "0-1"]
[CurrentPosition "rnbqkbnr/pppppppp/8/8/3P4/8/PPP1PPPP/RNBQKBNR b KQkq d3 0 1"]

1.d4 f5 2.Nf3 d5 3.e3 a5 4.Be2 h5 5.O-O e6 6.c3 g5 7.Qc2 Nc6 8.Bd3 g4 9.Ng5 Qxg5 10.e4 f4 11.e5 f3 12.Bg6+ Qxg6 13.Qxg6+ Ke7 14.Qg5+ Kd7 15.Qf5 Be7 16.Qc2 h4 17.Na3 h3 18.gxh3 gxh3 19.Qd3 Nh6 20.Qxf3 Rg8+ 21.Kh1 Nf5 22.Qxh3 Nd8 23.b3 Nf7 24.c4 dxc4 25.bxc4 a4 26.d5 exd5 27.Qxf5+ Ke8 28.cxd5 Bxf5 29.Rg1 Be4+ 30.f3 Bxf3+ 31.Rg2 Rxg2 32.Nc4 Rg8#  0-1
</code></pre>
 14202: <p>Lets forget the game is a Dutch as you leave opening theory extremely quickly with amateur moves.  I recommend you learn basic principals which are available for free in many places such as this Susan Polgar video: <a href="https://youtu.be/U9cIr7P9gkg" rel="nofollow noreferrer">https://youtu.be/U9cIr7P9gkg</a></p>
