this be a poor caricature of lonesome dove and larry mcmurtry . i love your book and with lonesome dove among the top three . i have admire the way you view yourself and through your character and with such unflinching honesty and balance by never take it all too seriously . i be and therefore and spoil . why have you come to this . comanche moon be not up to your standard . i see that you be credit with the screen write and but this be so unlike you and i prefer to think it be write by someone else . the dialogue make me claustrophobic and wish someone would break out with a naturally state sentence . the part about genius be agonize . mccrae be unrecognizable chiefly because of the inane word come out of his mouth . well and i miss call and too . the most important missing factor be gus and call and the men they be represent their matter of fact courage while the underlie vein comprise of ethic and honesty while their lack of self delusion . hard men lead hard life with a certain undeniable grace . some blame have to attach to the labored direction here and throughout . all of the cast need dialect and dialogue coaching . while i try to imagine robert duvall a mccrae and speaking this same dialogue and it come off well but not much . it try to sound cowboy of few word shy and sly grin witty and but doesn not half succeed . how can it be so different from lonesome dove . can the writer have forget his character . you have fool some of the people and mr. mcmurtry but not this one .