i be look forward to see this film due to the hype i be read on the indieclub web site . this film on many level disappoint me . bad sound represent i have trouble hear several line and the sound bite of the doorbell always sound the same which make it sound like an obvious add on . poor edit represent nearly all scene linger too long . cut a few second off the end of each clip would have really help the pacing . the main story line be weak we have an introduction to the situation at the start of the film but then the story be drop only to return at the very end of the film . plus the character be always talk about thing that have happen it always well to show the audience than to tell . and there be too much unfunny toilet humor in the film which seem to be use a filler . this film be model after the film clerk but take place on a billiards shop . it seem that every character enter the store be retard . many of the joke be take from the old month python routine where a customer come into a bookstore and asks if they sell book . the video quality be generally good but they should have use well light instead of just the ambient light .