not the best short film out there . but definitely not the bad . it have a very amateur look and style to it and and the pacing be rather slow . at the end and you figure out what the concept of the film be and but by then and it a little too late to feel invest in the character and the plot . and while the choice of music at the end be pretty and it really do not fit at all . so and take a look at this film from a learning standpoint . you could learn some do and some don nots . do continue write and shoot and direct and edit and etc . dont get discourage . continue to learn and develop your craft . write and rewrite and rewrite again and shoot and edit and re edit and etc . best of luck with everything in the future .