a couple of year ago i do manage to speak to writer or director merlin ward who like nearly every british screenwriter be have problem get money for his project and be suffer the heart break experience of see his screenplay sit on a shelf gathering dust and so when i hear one of his project be finally go into production i felt happy for the guy . ala after see out of bound i find myself ask couldn not one of merlin other script have be more deserving of funding . some people haver mention that the look of the film be at fault and the whole feel of the movie have that make for television look similar to one of those feature length play find on itv during 9pm on a sunday night . this be certainly true but it the screenplay that at fault . the story start with an art teacher at an all girl school have sex with louise one of the pupil . it should be point that louise be 18 and well above the age of consent but i couldn not help think this doesn not make it all right in anyway and i watch this the same day a a certain scottish football team reveal that their new coach be someone who spend time in jail for have sex with a 15 year old so sure a heck i wasn not go to empathise with the character problem number one represent i couldn not empathise with the character but that not the major problem with the script which lie in it contrive over complicated nature in the last third . rmember when you saw return of the king in cinema . remember everyone start reach for their jacket and handbags half an hour before the final credit . we have a whole series of similar false ending here where you think the mystery have be clear up then bang mr ward decide an already over cluttered screenplay isn not complicate enough so he add yet another plot twist which make the story more and more ridiculous a it trundle along merlin i hope you make a success of your career but remember one thing less be more .