the story idea be excellent . unfortunately and the execution let it down . the movie lack pace and for one thing . it should be an exciting ride and but it be slow and more than a little boring . i think the problem mainly in the screenplay and edit . there aren not enough obstacle and reversal to ratchet up suspense and and there be scene which do not really move the story along very effectively . the producer should have see this in the screenplay and insist upon a major rewrite . unfortunately and when the producer be also the writer and the director and this evidently ain not gon na happen . much of the act seem kind of flat and and that be down to the director all the actor have be quite competent in other project . it a shame and because with good writing and editing and direction and this could have be a really good thriller .