not sure if it be right or wrong and but i read thru the other comment before watch the short . i have to say i disagree with most of the negative comment or problem people have have with it . a a first time lone wolf director or producer and i like to see thing that i can aspire to and not necessarily from the pro and but by people just get their foot wet like me . if indeed this be also from a first timer and a i read and i applaud the effort . marvelous job then in that respect . there be some comment about the music . i think it be quite nice for the piece . some say it kind of drone along for a while and but i find that create tension without ( u ) necessarily be conscious of it and and when he pull the gun out and the guitar start crunch chord and it be like we know there be a train on the track and but realize it be just now move . yes there be a 180 degree slip or clip in there and but shi happens . do anyone else see hugh dirty shirt turn white ( near the end and in the rain ) in australia . look how much money and people be behind that movie . give the kid a break for god sake . all in all i think it be very well do . only 2 thing i would have mention be hardly worth mention don not walk up to a shiny brass picture frame with the camera and and i would have just display the splatter at the begin shot to a still shot and so people wouldn not necessarily know what it be . my experience so far have teach me that it not that it hard to make a movie and it just take time to learn how to do it and then the time to actually do it and and then you better take some more time still to think of all the detail you will need to have shoot before you call post production time . imho and it look like director or writer ryan jafri do his homework and and if this indeed be his first report card and i would give him an a. the rest of you report to the principal office for a whuppin .