amy poehler and rachel dratch be among the funny woman to have be on saturday night live . it unfortunate that they and along with tina fey and maya rudolph and be on snl during the long stretch of unfunny writing and sketch making ( circa 2002 2006 ) the show have ever have . still and these two woman most especially know what funny and and they know how to write a funny movie . you will notice in the credit of this movie that dratch and director ryan shiraki write the story for spring breakdown and but who write the actual screenplay and consisting of dialogue and all the important fill in the blank material that make a story into a multidimensional movie . yep and just shiraki . just one guy write the dialogue for this movie and and no woman apparently write the script with him . the result be a pretty cliché spring break movie that doesn not so much spoof the faux holiday as much a exploit it equally as much a mtv do every year . if dratch and poehler and and even co star parker posey could have contribute their handwriting to the screenplay and it would have be far less cliché . the premise be original and be about three thirty something woman who be unpopular in high school ( and apparently college and too ) who never have the fun spring break trip they allegedly dream about . i say allegedly because you never quite know what fun be to these character . they enter talent show in the past where they sing stale pro woman anthems like true color and and spend their night together hold make your own pizza party . even though none of them be especially unattractive and the outside world appear to treat them like they be . there a scene where a blind student of poehler ( play by poehler real life husband will arnett ) ask her out on a date and only to touch her face and immediately change his mind . if poehler character be suppose to be unattractive and they obviously hire the wrong actress . the movie continue to show promise and even though we have our doubt about the main character and when posey bos and texas senator kay bee hartmann ( jane lynch and funny a always ) hire posey to watch over her unpopular college age daughter ( amber tamblyn and playing yet another woman who attractive in real life and but not in the eye of any character in this movie ) while she go to a laguna beach like vacation spot for spring break . poehler and dratch come along and they reluctantly get booze up and party like they apparently should have when they be in college and and then come the ultimate showdown with the sorority bitch lead by sophie monk . sophie monk be an incredibly attractive woman who have a body both woman and men would kill to have for different reason . unfortunately and her movie career be off to a rough start with the abominably unfunny date movie ( 2006 ) and the disappointing click ( 2006 ) . here and she play a southern belle and although her voice sound like she steal delta burke voice box . she ham it up a little too much and try too hard to play a conniving bitch that she come off as much like a caricature of spoiled college kid a the rest of the extra . spring breakdown be release straight to dvd despite the star power of amy poehler and but rightly so because the story be way too cliché . it may as well have be call national lampoon spring breakdown and and the magazine probably wouldn not have sue for trademark infringement because of the free publicity . if director shiraki have give at least one woman the creative input and especially rachel dratch and this movie would have be great and not nearly a run of the mill a frat house comedies we have see before . i know dratch will come up with another funny concept and and hopefully be allow to fill in the rest of the screenplay herself . she funny enough and and she deserve good than this half baked comedy that would accept stiffler brother with open arm .