Betty , would you please read this letter of application I've just written ? I'd like to have your opinion .   I'd be glad to tell you what I think .   Good ! I'm interested in your advice .   If I were you , I would change the beginning . You should write about your education first because we like to judge a man by his abilities .   Good idea , Betty . What would you think about the second part ?   I think it's too short . You'd better say something about your work experience .   You're right , I'll change it . How about the last part ? 