<prompt> Fana ka mekhoa e meli ea ho fetola moqoqo.nan  <response>: Instruction in English: Give two strategies for revising an essay. . Response in English: 1. Review the Organization and Flow: When revising an essay, a great strategy to begin with is reviewing the organization and flow of the content. Start by creating an outline that lists the main points of the essay, and ensure that each point is arranged logically and progresses smoothly from the previous one. Check if the paragraphs transition well, making sure that each paragraph connects to the following one. Rearrange the structure if needed, to create a clear and logical flow that is easy for the reader to follow.2. Refine the Language: Another effective strategy for revising an essay is refining the language used. This means carefully checking the essay for any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation that can detract from the clarity or credibility of the work. Try reading the essay out loud to catch any awkward phrasings, and use a dictionary or thesaurus to find stronger or more precise words to convey your ideas. Eliminating wordiness, repetition or vague language can also help to make the essay more concise and impactful. . Response in Sesotho: 1. Hlahloba Mokhatlo le Phallo: Ha u hlahloba moqoqo, leano le leholo la ho qala ke ho hlahloba tlhophiso le phallo ea litaba. Qala ka ho etsa kemiso e thathamisang lintlha tsa sehlooho tsa moqoqo, me u tiise hore ntlha ka ngoe e hlophisitsoe ka mokhoa o utloahalang me e tsoela pele hantle ho tloha ho e fetileng. Hlahloba hore na lirapa li tsamaea hantle, u etse bonnete ba hore serapa ka seng se amana le se latelang. Rulaganya sebopego gape fa go tlhokega, go bopa phalelo e e utlwalang sentle le e e utlwalang e mmadi a e latelang motlhofo. 2. Ntlafatsa Puo: Leano le leng le sebetsang la ho nchafatsa moqoqo ke ho ntlafatsa puo e sebelisitsoeng. Sena se bolela ho hlahloba moqoqo ka hloko bakeng sa liphoso leha e le life tsa sebōpeho-puo, mopeleto kapa matšoao a ka sitisang ho hlaka kapa ho tšepahala ha mosebetsi. Leka ho bala moqoqo ka lentsoe le phahameng ho fumana lipoleloana tse sa hlakang, me u sebelise bukantswe kapa thesorase ho fumana mantswe a matla kapa a nepahetseng ho fetisa mehopolo ya hao. Ho felisa mantsoe, ho pheta-pheta kapa puo e sa hlakang le hona ho ka thusa ho etsa hore moqoqo o be makhutšoane le ho ba le tšusumetso. 