[ PI ] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST

Woah, this was pretty awesome. Sure, I was confused, but it was n't the classic `` WTF did you write there?'' confusion but more of a `` WTF is gon na happen next?'' confusion. The whole premise and idea of this novelette is simply magnificent, I love it. The characters are interesting and you managed to put great character development in it. The repetition and familiarity felt just right, never boring and, while I still have no idea what type of world could harbour a gem like the Devil's Eye, I do n't really care. I ca n't say much about it, really, because it is just good. 
 Your story is among my top favourites for the contest.
