[ WP ] You 've been in paradise for 60 years waiting for you brother . When you hear the news , you wait by the gates but he does n't show .

I sat in a beach chair by my pool, the weather was perfect and so far his day was the same as always. He took a drink from the margarita at his side when an angel suddenly appeared in a bright and divine light, she stood about five foot six inches and was beautiful in every way, she used to tell me she had no name but I called her Amanda and while I wanted to be with her, I knew the big man would n't allow it so I smiled and stood, `` Hello Amanda. What have you come to tell me today? `` 
 
 Amanda smiled and gestured in the direction of heaven's gates, `` Your brother has recently died and I have come to inform you just like you asked the lord to do. `` 
 
 My eyes widened and I bolted off towards the gates. My brother dead? Coming here? While I knew his wife would be devastated, I was too happy at the thought to see some direct family that I knew, not that I disliked my great great grandparents but they did n't grow up with me. 
 
 I skidded to a stop and waited by the gates, there were a lot of new arrivals already but I knew my brother was in there somewhere. I watched each person as they came and after a few hours I started to get nervous. `` Should n't he had been here by now?'' I thought. As two angels were switching shifts at gate duty, I stopped the one who should have brought in my brother, `` Um where is my brother? I think I missed him coming in, his name is Josh Picked. `` 
 
 The angel shook his head, `` Never heard the name so if he is n't here.'' He did n't finish the sentence and he did n't need to. My eyes formed tears as I started having a mini party is attack. Hell? My brother was the angel of both of us. He did n't deserve hell! I'm taking this straight to the big guy. 
 
 I began marching down the golden streets with anger in my heart and tears running down my face, I walked through the doors to God's office and although I wanted to yell I simply could n't with the feeling of fear overcoming me. God was emotionless and he did n't move a muscle until I calmed down and then he spoke, `` Your brother committed many deadly sins and never asked for forgiveness or changed his ways. `` 
 
 I considered how god knew this and then remembered that he was all knowing so he would know my response or did he? I spoke as calmly as I could, `` But is n't there anyway for him to be up here with me, lord. For this is the day I have waited sixty years for, to see my brother once more and to have a good time with him. `` 
 
 God simply shook his head and gestured me out as the heavenly sky began to turn dark so we could all sleep, I sighed and turned to make my way home, thinking of what I would do while I waited for another member of the family to arrive. 
 
 Hope you enjoyed this response and as always feedback whether negative or positive is welcome. Also I might do a part two, just because I enjoyed writing this.
