[ OT ] If you had to choose , which of your prompt responses would you say is the best you 've written ?

The beach was beautiful that day. The Sun was blindingly bright, reflecting off of the ocean, but my sunglasses made it manageable. 
 
 As I looked at the cloudless sky above, my furry friend Henry began to bark wildly. This would n't have bothered me had it not been for his tone: this was his alert bark! I quickly jumped up from my place on the sand and began to scan the beach around me. The only thing I could think of was that a body had washed up. I then looked down at Henry, who seemed to be alerting in almost every direction. I petted him in an attempt to calm him down, and it worked a little. He stopped alerting everywhere and began barking towards the dunes behind me. 
 
 I decided to let him follow the smell, so I gave him the command. He took off, me running as fast as I could just to keep up, and ran to the top of a nearby dune. At the summit, he stopped, turned to look at me, and barked once. I arrived at his side, looked around for a moment, and realized that Henry was looking out at the ocean. 
 
 That was when I saw it: the water was pulling away from the beach, racing to meet a rather large wave further out. A tsunami. And the beach was covered with people. 
 
 I began to yell and wave my arms in the air, trying to get the people to notice the watery death coming for them, but nobody paid attention. I wanted to run down and warn them, but my legs would n't work. Henry sat down beside me and fell asleep almost immediately. 
 
 The Tsunami ended up killing over 200 people on that beach alone, and all I could do was watch. As it turns out, Henry was the best corpse-detection dog. Sometimes he just found them a little too soon.
