[ PI ] Big Binoculars - FebContest

Pros: 
 
 It's funny if you can manage to wade through the otherwise big blocks of text. The dialogue's witty and laughably absurd in the best way possible. It has its insightful moments of clarity here and there. The shift between the two protagonists, Bob and Martin is done well enough for a short piece with the journal system going on. 
 
 Cons: 
 
 The narrative just seems awfully weak in my opinion and the overarching aspect seems kinda mangled in. I ca n't really think of any reason to care about Bob or nearly any other characters until near the very end where it's all tied together. 
 
 tl; dr All in all, funny read with somewhat flimsy plot. I died at the ending. There's coffee all over my desktop screen.
