[ PI ] The Phoenix Reborn- FirstChapter-4,924words

Hi Unicornmarauder1776, 
 
 Well done on getting a contest entry completed! 
 
 It looks like you might have written this in a word processing programme and copied it over, as it currently does n't have much in the way of formatting. As such it's going to be extremely hard for anyone to read and I suspect wont help its chances in the competition. 
 
 As you still have some time before the closing date, you might want to take a look over the [ Reddit formatting guide here. ] ( https: //www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/4k7igm/ot_ask_lexi_formatting_for_reddit/ ) and add some paragraphs, as well as take the top section out of the indent style - as it'll make it much more reader friendly. 
 
 Up to you, but I would suggest going over and giving it a good edit before the closing date, so that the people reading it can enjoy the story. 
 
 Well done again on the writing.
