[ PI ] Megafauna - FirstChapter 2344 Words

I like the story so far. Humans are so used to be Apex predators. Kind of crazy to imagine a world where bamboo spears are the only weapon against foxes with car sized paws. 
 
 One thing I had questions about, though, and that you might want to focus on us technology. Starling is making spears but able to create fire mechanically, turn on lights, and has refrigeration. To me, this world seemed post apocalyptic like Horizon Zero Dawn, which made me wonder how her society could be so technologically advanced in many areas while seeming to still be hunter-gatherer in others. If this is intentional, you might want to explain how/why she has suck advanced technology ( is Starling a great scavenger & tinkerer? ). Otherwise, you might want to downgrade some of the tech she has access to so that it fits overall with what her society has to protect and advance itself.
