[ PI ] Based on a prompt here , I have been writing a story over the past three months that I 've been calling `` Letters and Powers . '' Today I finished it !

If you're looking for a critique, I think you let your main character off the hook far too easily. She's one of ten people with super powers, and all but one have to die. She personally only deals with 4 of the other nine. One of them attacks her immediately without much prelude, letting the main character kill in self defense. She teams up with the second, who then gets killed. The last two are, more or less, evil, and easy for her to hate. 
 
 It would have been far more interesting if at least one of those two was likable, and therefore a difficult kill for her. What if the force field guy had burst into tears as soon as he was away from the Pyro, and ranted to himself about hating what the Pyro makes him do. 
 
 Also, what if Martin had survived? What would the mysterious benefactor have done to get them to kill each other? What if they fell in love, and then found out that one of them actually had to die? What if they decided to work together, both of them ascended, then found out they hate each other? 
 
 I think there was a lot of room in here for interesting character development. But it was an entertaining story. 

