[ PI ] You slowly start to realize that all of your friends are undercover agents tasked with keeping you alive . Then , at your birthday party , with every friend surrounding you , the people trying to kill you finally find you .

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 I read the original too, and while I like this one more there is one aspec of the first one that is lost here: the twist. When you approach the whole event from Jason's perspective of security, it's less shocking when he suddenly throws someone in a bathroom and throws a couple rounds in their chest. It also felt like that action scene could have been written to be more fast paced, like in the original. The other thing I liked about the first one was that when you clicked the action switch on, the pace kept going. Throws rounds into her chest, realizes the target is about to die, etc. I feel like this scene could be written to be a great intro for a book or short story or whatever ( maybe after another chapter that kinda foreshadows but does n't obviously let you know about the secret security side of the story ). That little part where you do n't know what's going on when he starts shooting people really keeps it exciting
