[ PI ] The Ghosts of Decisions Past - MarContest - 11,531

Hey, I really liked some of the dialogue in this story. Some very poignant phrases, especially the bit about decisions where Waterson discusses choices. 
 
 My only qualm is that it feels a bit rushed, there's a lot of development going on very quickly, and because of that some character motivation can be a bit unclear. But I still really enjoyed it, some of the lines are really impressive, just a bit more context would be nice. 
 
 Small question, was Harry's dad really a refugee? He was shot by Mastar forces and knew Pat'd dad for some reason, I felt like there was more going on there.
