[ WP ] A serum is invented that brings you closer to God when injected

It was my turn. Finally, I could imagine myself in a spiritual connection with the Creator. I sat in a small abandoned church, on the south side of the town we had created. It was tall, honoring our God so very well. I remember that my father must have built it, before he had been sacrificed to our true Father. 
 
 I had a very simple white dress on, and I patted it down onto my pale legs. It was not like ones that I had seen on other Daughters in the villages around our town. I was excited, but thankfully not excited enough to break the ritual. And so I sat, alone, at the front pew. And there I sat, and waited for the Father. 
 
 He quickly came, and off we went, down the hallway into the back of the church. He led me slowly, carrying his candle. A candle, instead of a torch or a lantern. Had he changed the Ritual? I knew I was being watched, although I knew not from where or who would be observing. The ritual did not allow for the participant to know who would see them before their meeting with the Creator of All Good. 
 
 Father laid me on the bed, locking each of my arms and legs into the loose metal holds, made just for me. They were created for each Daughter for her visit, and each Son. Three months went by before each visit, each one happening on the first day of a new season. 
 
 Father never told me how long the visit would be, and I only realized it now that I looked upon him. He wore his standard black clothing, the same that he preached in. But there was a name for it, and I was n't sure what that was. 
 
 `` A shame, my Daughter.'' The Father said as I closed my eyes. He had broken the ritual, but I was too afraid of being shamed to respond. He readied the syringe and placed his hand on my arm, gripping it as he injected the serum into me. The sound of it running through my veins was the second to last thing I heard. 
 
 `` A true shame.'' 
 
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