[ TT ] As a child your father left on a space voyage , never to return or be heard from again . Now , twenty years later you 've decided to search for him .

OK, I'll give it a shot.; ) 
 
 
 Twenty years. 
 That's how long my father has been gone. I was 5 when he did, so I have no clear memories of him, but his disappearance always intrigued me. I'll tell you why. 
 Every day, I checked the Vitalis-2067 ( a machine that tells the vital signs of anyone who had access, like my father, at any distance in the solar system ). Why did I do this? 
 Because my father's vitals were always up and running. 
 At the age of 25, I was able to legally embark on an expedition to WASP-43D ( the same planet that- you guessed it- my father disappeared on ). I was to go with three other people: Rachel, a fellow expeditioner; Samwise, a medic; and Alex, a pilot. 
 The trip would take about 8 weeks there, 3 on the planet's surface, then another 8 back. We had about 5 month's worth of supplies, should anything happen to us on WASP-43D. 
 After everything was prepared, we set of into the infinite abyss of space towards WASP-43D ( And, as I thought in my head, possibly my father ). 
 After 5 weeks, we passed the awe-inspiring planet that is WASP-29D, a world comprised entirely of fresh water. No land whatsoever. Unfortunately for us, we were n't going to anyplace awe-inspiring. 
 WASP-43D became visible near the end of the 7th week. Its dark clouds coldly beckoned us, the bright blood red rivers on the surface shining through them. The fact that this planet could hold any life is scary enough, but seeing the things will frighten you enough to die. 
 `` Destination reached.'' 
 We put on our space suits ( WASP-43D's atmosphere is 67 % methane, 25 % carbon-dioxide, and 8 % other deadly-to-human fumes. ). We smiled at each other almost ironically, then headed out. 
 I checked the Vitalis-2067 to see how our vitals were doing, then I checked my Father's. 
 Still alive. Good. 
 We ventured out into the wasteland, which looked even worse than the outside of the planet: the blood-red rivers were clearly visible now, the skeletons of native and outside creatures alike littered the landscape, and the ground was a sickly white, deprived from sunlight for the whole of the planet's existence. 
 When week 1 on the planet passed, Rachel became sick from some unknown disease, and Samwise perished trying to surgically remove a parasite from his own stomach. 
 Things, to say the least, were going bad. 
 I checked the Vitalis again. 
 My father was close. 
 I told Rachel and Alex. Rachel vomited. Alex decided he should be with her, and told me to not be gone long. 
 I ventured out into the wasteland. I followed the Vitalis's directions towards my father. 
 Beep. Beep. Beep. It beeped at a constant rate. I ran. 
 Beepbeepbeep. I ended up in a graveyard of wrecked ships. I wanted to turn back, but my father was in there somewhere. I followed the beeps until... 
 beeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-. It became a constant noise. 
 I've found him. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 Sorry if it is n't that good ( I know there's no dialogue ), but I decided to leave it at a `` reader decides the end'' thing. I would like to see what kind of endings people come up with!
