[ CC ] A childhood classmate of yours is deaf . You enjoyed bullying her . Now that you are older , you feel guilty . You meet her in college .

Not really my bag, but I can see the appeal this would have for others. I think there are a few too many needlessly manipulative details that actually take away from the overall effect, and the premise itself feels off. This guy walks up to a girl in broad daylight, makes fun of her, then shoves her into a ravine where she almost dies. Sure, he goes in there to get her out, but if someone pushed you in front of a moving car and then called an ambulance, would you look at him as your hero or, at most, as someone who is n't a complete and total asshole? I just ca n't buy it. But I think, with a few alterations, it could still work. 
 
 On the technical side, there are a few issues. Not a whole lot in terms of blatant grammar problems, but some odd formatting ( which you can just call style if you want because that's obviously the intent ), mixed-up tenses, misplaced sentences, etc could be worked on if you're so inclined. 
 
 I'm just leaving this general feedback because you did n't ask for specifics. If you want, I can go through and give a more detailed critique. 
 

