[ PI ] MADNESS OF BRADBURY 'S OUTPOST - FEB CONTEST

This was an interesting idea. I liked the time period for this story and I liked the setting of this story. I also liked Bradbury's character and his insanity. I even liked that he displayed his madness so readily to Jaron - it really showed to me that he was n't in touch with reality. Somebody with even a little bit of sanity would probably be more hesitant to reveal that he's torturing people. 
 
 I see that you were pretty close to the deadline, so I'm glad you made the word count. Still, if you decide to revisit this story it would be helped by simply being longer. I think talking more about Bradbury's methods ( especially with Jaron ) and his intentions would be interesting. The mass suicide really seemed like the start of something bigger and more important, so I was definitely intrigued to learn more there. 
 
 In any case, I'm no expert - but I certainly enjoyed the story. Good luck!
