Write a story that seems normal on first sight , except for one small detail that makes it extremely creepy on a more careful reading [ WP ]

My shoulder hurts from the seatbelt. Daddy is slumped over the steering wheel. I shout, but he does n't answer. Amy wriggles in her car seat. 
 
 “ Did Daddy crash the car? ” she asks. 
 
 “ Be quiet, ” I tell her. “ I'm older, so you got ta listen. ” 
 
 “ Is there a fire? ” she asks with a cough. 
 
 I crane my neck to look outside, but the smoke is so thick I can ’ t see anything. I try the door but I already know it won ’ t open cause of the child-locks. 
 
 I fumble with my seat belt. Daddy always unclicks it for me cause I can never work it out. I ignore Amy, who ’ s started crying and continue to fumble with the seat belt. 
 
 It clicks. And I tumble forward into the back of Daddy ’ s seat. He groans but does n't wake up. 
 
 I clamber into the front seat and shake him. I think he ’ s hurt bad. His head rises for a moment and then thumps onto the steering wheel. Amy has stopped crying. 
 
 The smoke ’ s getting worse, so I know the fire has to be close. 
 
 I have to save Daddy. And even Amy. 
 
 I climb over to the window press my mouth up to the tiny gap which is open, pushing the hosepipe to the side. 
 
 I feel Daddy ’ s hand on my back. When I turn, he gently pulls me towards him into a deep warm hug. He ’ s okay. I feel safe again. 
 
 I hear a click as he locks all the doors. 

