[ OT ] Sunday Free Write : Leave A Story , Leave A Comment - Sea to Shining Sea Edition !

Hello everyone! It's been a little while! I'm writing a story based on a prompt from here, and I'd like it if you could take the time to read it. I just finished a twelfth chapter. It's a story about a man who does n't feel pain for a day, set in a fantasy world with a city run by gangs of a sort. Check it out if you like that kinda thing. Feedback is welcome and appreciated. 
 
 * [ Chapter One ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/0576b03160cd85645658c02632520740/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Two ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/558a5fe1ac8b6502582b9a8c5b65652b/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Three ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/d99e1a423f91034422af0c7f67cd04fc/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Four ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/43f7b4edbf3c61cf512c3d9b7ab14db3/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Five ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/75a6f18adefb01e2e62afc91ebf5d667/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Six ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/4cd8c7879ab6234658504c427119b6e7/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Seven ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/f1b1cf5aa06b80c7e4f2db1c475b579f/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Eight ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/7c1d9571fb43980d812aff02a0601dde/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Nine ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/3d9c1cf3633ca00d8d84823716a2c35c/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Ten ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/1241ced4166f7040c003acdb0efff788/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Eleven ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/66af0e55dbe7767bd0a12916de521475/ ) 
 * [ Chapter Twelve ] ( http: //chapterfy.com/p/d1ceacd048151ead919fbf3d11b1761f/ )
