[ WP ] It has always been said that when you first see your true love , time will stop . One day as you are watching the morning news , you see the photograph of a young woman who had been murdered the night before . In that instant , time stops ... ..and then it travels backwards .

Hey guys, this is my first time trying something like this and english is not my native tongue, so dont be too hard on me. But good critique is always welcome. Hope you guys like it. 
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 Rain. The sound of rain. It pours down. The whole street is empty. Beside the rain, absolute silence. *klick* I light up my cigarete while im at a remote bus station. 
 *-Damn, im gon na get soaking wet. * 
 While im thinking that, i decide to wait there untill the rain stops. Its not like im in a hurry. Im gon na need some time to heal from that disastrous party anyway. Claire started her drama act again. In the end half the party got dragged into her ego-trip. Thank god nobody saw me leaving. 
 *-Poor Steve, sleeping on the couch is still not far enough from Claire. * 
 *loud screech* 
 I tense up imediately as i hear breaks from a car screeching. As im looking where it came from, my instinct tells me to go low profile. I zip my jacket to cover up my white T-shirt, leave the bus-station and hide in the shadows behind a tree near the station. Still not able to see anything, i throw the cigarete away. 
 A loud metalic sound suddenly breaks the silence again. `` what the hell is that'', i think. 
 Suddenly a black BMW with darkened windows speeds through the street. Just as fast as it came, it also vanished as fast. 
 *-I need to get out of here. * 
 With that last thought, i take my leave and enter a dark alley. Not thinking about the rain anymore, i vanished into the night. Thank god i know these streets better than the back of my hand... 
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 As im laying down, i can see the light comming through the cracks of my door throught the living room window. 
 *-Awww, my head hurts. * 
 I throw in an aspirin and chulk it down with some 3day old juice. 
 *-That was a hell of a party* 
 As i recall claires mental breakdown, an image pops up in my head. 
 *-These teenagers sure as hell floored that BMW. * 
 I laugh at my panicked self from yesterday. I should drink less, anyway im gon na go get some coffee. I make my way through the street to my favourite shop, i stop to take a peek at the frontpages of some popular newspapers in town. 
 `` Dead girl found last night. Police officer says, hes never seen such a brutal murder'' 
 *-The world is getting crazier every d... * 
 *-What the hell!!! * 
 As i grabed a copy, i saw that this happened in the neighborhood, near Winstons house where the party was yesterday. 
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 **The girl was found dead near Ketchum Street, Police still couldnt identify the Victim. The only lead she had in her purse was a foto of herself, she was not carrying any ID. ** 
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 I turn around the page, tense and nervous to read more as i see the picture of the murdered lady. My gaze just stoped there. My nervousness vanished. Time stood still. Not a single sound could be heard. Cars stoped moving, people frozen mid-movement. A dog with a wide open mouth, ready to bark. The cashier still holding my coins in his hand. It was exactly 11:42 A.M. My clock stoped working. But i still could not take my eyes off that girl. 
 *-This was not supposed to happen. * 
 What did i just say? I dont even know that girl. As i think of that my vision gets blurry. I hear a scream. 
 *-Oh? i can hear again? * 
 *-LOOK OUT!!! * 
 As i registered that female voice i look around but time is still standing. People still frozen. 
 *-Who said that? whats happening? * 
 While i search for the woman who yelled, a yellow flash apears. I close my eyes for a second and suddenly, time starts moving again. That instant i see a truck at arms lenght in front of me. I flinch, throw my hands in front of my face and close my eyes. 
 *-SHIT IM GON NA DIE! * 
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 *-F # CK YOU MARIE. You are trying to seduce my Steve again??? And whats with you?? Flirting with that wh # re. * 
 *-Claire calm down honey, you are drunk. * 
 *-You know that me and Steve know each other for 30 years, i have no such intention of seducing him. * 
 *-Stop with these lies you succubus. Paul? You saw her too right? She deffinetly hit on Steve. * 
 *-Oh god Paul tell her she is just drunk. 
 -...... ( `` Whats happening here?'' ) 
 -Paul?? Whats up buddy? 
 -...... 
 -Paul sweetheart? Are you alright? * 
 Slow motion. Im confused. What the hell is happening? Why do i know the outcome of this fight? As i inspect my suroundings, i see the clock. Its 11:42 PM. 
 *-I need to... 
 -Tom, what do you ne... * 
 
 Before he can finish his question i start running to the door and vanish into the night.... 
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 *I need to safe Jennifer... * 
 

