[ WP ] You can hear the Banshee crying . It lets you know when someone is seconds from death . One day while walking , you get close to a person and you hear the Banshee . But this time , She has a maniacal laughter .

I'm new and also I'm no story writer so it's probably shit.: ) Plz correct me where it's a bit weird or tense is wrong. 
 
 The banshee's cry, a sound so horrific and shrilled that it would chill anyone to the bone... except me. For me it's almost a daily occurrence. Usually I hear it in hospitals but also sometimes randomly on the street. The cry signifies that the nearest person only has a few remaining seconds to live. This time though... I was terrified. 
 
 I was simply enjoying the day, every piece of the puzzle which made nature so captivating. The sounds of bird chirping in the oak trees above, the gentle breeze blowing through my untidy, black hair, and the toy boats bobbing across the small pond. This is paradise. Until. 
 
 A strange black clad woman forcefully walks into me and just continues walking without apologising or even acknowledging me. As I open my mouth to call the woman back, instead I cover my ears from the deranged, raving laughter of the banshee. Crumpling to the ground, nearly deaf, I stared at the woman disappear into the crowd. `` Why was the banshee laughing?'' The question lingered around for a second before realising why. `` Oh no! That woman... Oh God no!'' 
 
 `` RUN!!'' I screech as I frantically scramble to my feet sprinting straight to the crowd, flailing my arms, and repeatedly screaming for them to run away. The group just stood there glaring at me as if I was a mad man. 
 
 `` I beg you, please...'' My voice fades as I fall to my knees ready for what was to come. Boom! 
 
 Alternate ending: 
 `` I beg you please...'' My voice fades as I fall to my knees ready for what was to come. Head drooping, eyes closed, I knew I failed them, failed myself, failed God. He should've picked someone more competent for this gift. I wait and wait except nothing happened. Cautiously I lift my head up and open my eyes. I meet the gaze of about 20 people curiously staring at me. `` Wait, where is the explosion? The banshee was laughing... That means she should've done something crazy...'' Suddenly an epiphany hit me. `` The banshee cries when someone is about to die not laugh.'' Flushing with embarrassment I clumsily attempt to stand up and run away at the same time. `` Fuck, I'm stupid.'' 
 

