[ PI ] Departure From E-DoN - FEB CONTEST

I personally thought the `` made up'' words were wonderfully used and not overdone at all! They all clearly had thought put into their creation and use, and I also enjoyed how you used archaic words like `` hale''. Mal and Fem made me chuckle. 
 
 I loved your writing style overall, very slow-paced but not boring at all, just slowing sliding away the veil covering the world you made. This is my favorite piece from the contest that I have read so far. 
 
 Wonderful ending and overall plot as well. It reminded me of one of my favorite movies, children of men.
