[ PI ] The Corpse Shuttle - FEB CONTEST

This gets really good but I think the opening is pretty weak, I was losing interest until they went into cryo. 
 It could do with some more careful proofreading too, there are quite a few mistakes in the grammar and a lot of things that are n't consistent with being in zero gravity. For example; pouring water into a cup, sliding along a floor, tears streaming down faces and lots of other little slips. 
 
 I do think you do an excellent job of portraying the change in Gerald's mental state, there's the core of a great story here but it could use more polish.
