[ CC ] Image Prompt : Lost + Found

Hmm interesting. I would say the story was n't particularly gripping at first, but after the second read i wasnt as lost ( haha ) and thought it was better. 
 
 I'm having a hard time putting to words how I feel about it. I do n't know if this is the case here, but in a lot of writing i see writers describing what characters like, every detail of what they are thinking, and lots of other things that kind of pull me out of the here and now of the story. I dont get enough of a picture painted of what the story is about. Stuff like that makes it hard for me to get sucked in. 
 
 Also the narrative voice felt a little strange at times as well. When im at my computer i can try to actually pick out examples of what i mean. 
 
 Overall i will say i thought that not enough actually happened in the story, which was largely due to the narrator talking about the mental mindsets that drove Lost and herself to be the ways they were. 
 
 If this story was to work better for me, i would have liked to see some real-time replaying of past events that would show why Lost was the way he was and why the narrator was the way she was. That way i get connected to the characters and pulled into their world organically vs you just telling me `` lost is like this'', `` found is like this''.
