[ PI ] Eternal Nature - FEB CONTEST

I liked this one a lot. The setup is really interesting and it's all presented in a clear and concise way, with no confusing techno-babble or convoluted plot to clog things up. Descriptions in general were very effective, making the whole thing very easy to picture. I could easily imagine the super structure at the centre of Mumbai, as well as everything else like the Genes, and the various other surroundings. The action was exciting, and the interactions between Rene and Josh were great. 
 
 There were a few grammatical and editing hiccups here and there, but my only real complaint was that it did n't go on for longer, and that the ending felt a little rushed and abrupt. Regardless, I think this is an excellent piece, and I really enjoyed it.
