[ OT ] Sunday Free Write : Leave A Story , Leave A Comment - Another Call for Moderators Edition

I've just started writing here and would like to hear some opinions about the two prompts I've tried my hand at. 
 
 This first one was to write an exert from the book you have n't written. 
 http: //www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/36sdfi/wp_write_an_exert_from_the_book_you_havent/crh568w 
 The main plot of it has been bouncing around my head for about six years but every time i try to write it out something `` distracts'' me. Every so often I get a new idea that spreads the web even further apart. I have a few scenes but no way of connecting any of them. 
 
 Writing about a dream you had was a bit easier and the one friend I showed it to said he liked it, but he never went into detail about why. 
 http: //www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/36c1sh/wp_describe_to_me_in_the_form_of_a_narrative_the/crcrhol 
 It reads a bit like the middle of a story because it kind of is. I had this dream after a day of reading like it was my job. Apparently my brain decided that eight hours of reading was n't enough and shoved me into a similar situation. If there's any interest I could write the other dream I had as that character as a separate PI post. Though it has nothing to do with this one.
