[ PI ] Alive – MarContest - 7516

Hi, /u/thenextday I just wanted to come here and give you some feedback on your story. 
 
 I really liked the concept of it, and I thought it was executed well. It's always a breath of fresh air whenever we get stories on here that are n't about Batman, or science fiction, or fantasy. I enjoyed the fact that this was a simple story about survival and choices. You really did a great job fleshing out the Prompt and having it apply to the whole story. 
 
 The intro gave me chills, your description of the bodies below calling to the character was haunting. Your writing was poetic, that's very impressive for someone who is n't a native English speaker. Well done!
