Write a short story about a kidnapping from the point of view of the kidnapper

**first time I've contributed here all critiques welcomed** 
 
 Mike waited outside of Molly's school. The elementary had bright yellow walls and a red roof. It was n't that big, the town Samantha had moved to was small, 100,000 people or so. He waited outside by a column, with his hands in his pocket, trying to appear nonchalant. The bell rang and a minute later kids streamed out of the gate, past the teachers and security guards. He was searching the crowd of tiny human beings for Molly. His daughter, a beautiful girl of blond hair locks and green eyes. She had lost her front tooth but her smile was charming as ever. Mike only got to see her every few months, as the custody rules dictated. So he had missed her first day of school, her singing recital, her birthday. That was enough for him to snap. Molly was his daughter, he had every right to her, as Samantha did. More even, Mike had a job and lots of love to give and Samantha had thrown that all away after a few years. He had begged her to stay, but she ignored his pleas and took herself and his only daughter away from him. 
 
 He saw Molly walking to the far right of the incoming stream of children. 
 `` Molly'' he cooed, `` Molly, over here''. Molly turned her head and saw her dad. A smile spread across cheek to cheek, `` Daddy!'' she yelled and made her way through the crowd of kids and ran into him, arms spread wide into a hug. Molly and him had always been close, they loved each other and he was caring, would always play whatever game she wanted to play. He hugged her back. `` Do you want to ride home with me?'' he asked, with a smile on his face. She was with him now and that's all he wanted. 
 
 `` Sure!'' said Molly. 
 
 Mike grabbed her hand and they walked towards the car. He opened the backseat, `` buckle up, all right?''. And he went and sat in the driver's seat. He turned on the car and pulled out of the parking lot. He drove unto the street, checking to see he had not raised any alarms. 
 
 `` Did you learn anything new in school today?'' he asked. 
 
 `` Lots of things Daddy, we learned the earth is really really old, and that it goes around the sun! We learned our multiplication tables today. I got to pet the hamster and give it food, so he'd be big and strong, his name is Waldo. And whenever someone lets him loose, the teacher says `` where's Waldo? where's Waldo? and we all laugh'', giggled Molly. 
 
 `` Say Molly, care for some ice cream on the way home?'' asked Mike. Molly had always loved sweets and the moment he said ice cream, she smiled and nodded. 
 
 So he drove past her house and past the town city limits. They were going home, his home, to have ice cream and be a family again.
