[ CW ] Short film set in a desert

I'm a big horror fan and this....I'm not proud of this but it's nice to submit anyways: D I kinda broke the rule, I had 1 female and 1 male and 1 truck driver lol. But please check the plot out. Not my best but I hope I sent the message. 
 
 Scene: The sun is at its highest peek. A woman is has wounds all over her body, scratches, etc. She is tied with a rope while a man drags her with it. 
 
 `` Help me! Someone!'' 
 
 Jenny shouts on top of her lungs, while trying to break free from the tight ropes she is bound to. Max continues to drag her lying body on rough, blank, dry, dessert sand. 
 
 `` Max, they're coming! You have to let me out!'' 
 
 She continues to plead for freedom. Sadly, her loud cries are ignored by her once great friend. 
 
 She looks from behind. 
 
 What seems like native tribe men are heading their way, holding spears and ritual charms. Faces painted with white chalks, and dark skin, painted with the blood of their dead friends. 
 
 `` Max! Look! They're coming!'' 
 
 Max sobs quietly. He tightens his grip at a big ethnic knife, stained with blood, across its unique carvings. A tribal knife that Jenny found while exploring the outskirts of their camping site. 
 
 `` Max, you have to let me go, they're getting closer. They're gon na kill us, like how they killed Fred and the others!'' 
 
 `` Stop it'' Max whispers to himself 
 
 `` YOU DO N'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE SAYING YOU CRAZY BITCH'' 
 
 Max readies himself to slit Jenny's neck. 
 
 *Bang* 
 
 A shot from behind. 
 
 A truck driver, holding a pump action shotgun, shot Max from behind. 
 
 The driver quickly released Jenny from her ropes. Jenny took one last glimpse at Max's lifeless body, seeing the tribal men surrounding him. The tribal me looked at her, their pupils became bigger, up until their eyes where fully black, they smiled, too big for a normal human being. 
 
 She quickly got into the truck. 
 
 
 `` Thank you!'' She cries to the driver 
 
 
 `` What was that?'' the driver asked, trying to catch his breath from what happened. 
 
 
 `` These spirits came out of nowhere and killed everyone of my friends, it was awful.'' She cries, while trying to stop her bleeding wounds dressed with dessert sand. 
 
 
 `` I'll take you to the hospital, do n't worry'' 
 
 
 Her eyes darken as she tightens her grip to the tribal knife. 
 
 Jenny smiled. 
 

