[ PI ] Departure From E-DoN - FEB CONTEST

Initially, I struggled with the slow, gentle pace of the story, but I eventually became captivated. I thought the language and culture you created was really nice, though I did find it odd when characters, like Lucy, spoke in standard English. 
 
 I suppose it was a little dense of me not to notice the Adam and Eve parallels early on in the story, but when I did get it ( I think about 3/4 of the way through ) it was was one of those'ohhh... cool,' moments. 
 
 This is one of the most original submissions I've read so far, and I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
