[ WP ] Adam and Eve did n't eat the forbidden fruit , humanity lives in a perfect world , its only problem is keeping the forbidden fruit guarded

The dark my eyes were adjusted to was cut by a bright light, blinding me and the other denizens of the realm. I pulled my tattered hood acroos my face, trying my best to cover my eyes from the fire that burned into them. It was a futile attempt, for when He arrived, He liked to make a show of it. 
 
 I waited for my eyes to readjust to this new light, but the eons I had spent here had made me forget what light even was. So instead I waited for Him to speak up. To explain why he had come here, other than to rub in that he had won that mock of a war that had put me here. For the longest there was no response, and temporarily I thought that perhaps He was letting me back in, placing me back in my rightful place! 
 
 He quickly crushed that hope. 
 
 `` You failed me.'' He said. `` You told me you'd make them love me more, but nothing has changed. And instead they've grown. There are more of them than I can account for. And their lives do not end. Eden will sustain them forever, but soon, what need will they have for me. You promised me! You promised me they would always need me!'' 
 
 I scoffed. `` The almighty wants to be needed? Needs to be wanted? How dull. How childish.'' A sharp searing pain in my spine crawled up to my brain stem and sent immense pain throughout my body. `` You'd be wise to hold your traitorous tongue, wretch.'' He said. `` You may have the power to walk among them, but I still have the power over you.'' 
 
 I refused to keep silent. I knew where this was going. `` You want me to fix it, do n't you.'' I said. He shot an angry look at me. `` How can you fix this! You've ruined everything!'' I pulled my hood back, and opened my eyes fully, letting the light sear at my brain. `` If you thought I could n't fix this, Id be dead.'' 
 
 He pondered this. I knew Him well. We were very much a like. I knew that He would not pass up a chance to assert His power, just like He knew I would n't pass up the chance to reclaim what was once mine. For a long moment, He looked at me and then with a wave of His hand, He was gone. And I was n't trapped in the darkness anymore. 
 
 I sat naked on the rooftops of one of the buildings near the Tree. It had grown meme sly tall in the last eight thousand years, reaching high into the heavens. I breathed in the crisp fresh air of Paradise, knowing it might be a long time before I got a chance like this again. It was moments like these that I felt glad that He could n't sense my thoughts. I did n't plan on returning to that deep recess in his mind he hid me away in. No, never again would I go there. I had bigger plans. 
 
 
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 I stood at my post, watching over the wall that guarded the tree. The soft hum of the field generator behind me tried to put me to sleep. But the training I had been through had taught me to fight through any drowsiness. I looked over the ledge if the wall and glanced over Paradise. It was the most technologically advanced city in all of Eden. King Adam, knowing our lives to be exceptionally long and our consumption to be incredibly large, began immediately finding ways to limit our consumption and finding ways to give back to Eden. He tried praying to the creator when the resources became scares, but found that human endurance was something much more real to put one's faith in. 
 
 His wife, Eve, ruled things now a days. Adam was more worried about finding new ways to sustain us. Eve, however, was more concerned with how to rule us. For centuries, she thought the best way to keep us at peace was through intimidation, as the creator had shown her. But soon she learned that the true way to lead the people was through love. She spent most of her time visiting everyone at least once, and with her longevity, it was possible. She was an inspiration, as she proved we were more than what we were created for. She was originally intended to be Adam's wife, a mere tool to keep him happy and bear children. But she had become much, much more than that. 
 
 I had met her once. She wore a scarf of snake skin across her neck. She had held me like I was her own babe, laughing as she tickled my little feet. I was so young then. I had asked her where she got the scarf from. She told me it was a gift. From an old friend. Someone who told he she was more than what she had been made for. She told me she believed the same was true for me. 
 
 She was such an inspiration. 
 
 A second later and I was back in the real world. A figure advanced upon me in quick speed, aiming his hands for an attack. I was able to avoid most of the attack, but he was able to tackle me to the ground. He rolled over me, and kept going. I looked up and saw the man, a dark haired and very handsomely formed man, running towards the generator room. I pulled up my pistol and aimed, firing a couple rounds at the assailant. He dodge most of them with lightening reflexes, but I was able to graze him on the leg with the last shot. He did n't miss a beat though, breaking through the door and into the generator room. 
 
 I kept up to my feet, and began charging towards the door. I screamed into the comm on my wrist. `` RED ALERT! SUSPECT IN GENERATOR ROOM! I NEED BACK UP NOW!'' I entered the generator room cautiously, holding my pistol close to my chest. As I entered, I found the room relatively empty. Just as I began to question my sanity, he came up from behind me, grabbed my arms and my pistol, and placed it barrel right under my chin. 
 
 `` Do n't move darling. I just got out of hell. I do n't need a reason to go back.'' The voice was soothing. I relaxed and he pushed me away, holding the pistol towards me. `` What are you doing?'' I asked. `` You'll never make it to the tree. You wo n't be able to ruin this.'' The man laughed. `` Ruin this? This utopia? Why would I want to ruin it? Especially after all the work I put in to making it?'' I raised an eye brow in confusion. Was he mad? 
 
 `` Look, I'd really like to chat, but I have a tree to burn down. So if you do n't mind, please lead me to the main generator so I can get through.'' 
 
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 I would finish this, but it is 3 in the morning and I am tired. If you'd like more just respond. Critiques alway welcome!
