[ OT ] Sunday Free Write : Leave A Story , Leave A Comment- On Schedule Edition

This is a `` project'' I've started and hit writer's block with very early on. It's called Tube Girl. Hope it's alright if I just post it as comments here: 
 
 **Part 1: Awake** 
 
 He awoke feeling... strong 
 
 But also that something was 
 
 Very, very, *very* 
 
 Wrong. 
 
 Of course he felt clumsy; 
 
 43 % of his body was new 
 
 He picked up the envelope on the tabled 
 
 Labeled:'*You*' 
 
 Inside was a list 
 
 Which he skimmed to get the gist: 
 
 * Bones: Titanium Alloy 
 
 * Tendons & Ligaments: Equally upgraded 
 
 * Right Arm: Replaced what was left at the shoulder. *Not a toy. * 
 
 * Cardio: Replaced. Output increased tenfold. 
 
 * Vascular: Blood not sufficient. New fluid is gold. 
 
 * Vision: Permanently corrected. 
 
 * Payment: Soon to be collected. 
 
 Gold-stained bandageds 
 
 Covered the incision on his chest 
 
 With difficulty, 
 
 He put on the clothes provided 
 
 To cover the rest. 
 
 No doctors anywhere 
 
 Sirens filled the air 
 
 What was going on? 
 
 He needed to know more. 
 
 His serial number caught his eye 
 
 As he reached for the door.
