[ PI ] Color By Numbers

I enjoyed your story, it had an Alice in wonderland feel to it. 
 
 The sentence `` I was outside'' did you mean to imply that your character quickly run out of the building through the orange door or rather the moment the disheveled man entered the room he suddenly found himself outside the building? 
 
 I think you need to work on your punctuation and sentence structures, sometimes I had to read a sentence twice to understand it yet I enjoyed doing that because it reminded me of the writing style of Haruki Murakami. I do n't know if that was the intended effect but I enjoyed it all the same. 
 
 Hope to read more of your works.
