[ OT ] Sunday Free Write : Leave A Story , Leave A Comment - Sea to Shining Sea Edition !

Okay, well... I started writing in English only back in late June, though I had this problem that I was ( and partially still am ) into fanfictions, and to make things `` worse'', I was dealing with a crossover couple that no one else has thought of, apparently. 
 
 I share my very first English writing here in hope that you can tell me your opinion, and maybe even some advices, what do avoid. 
 
 https: //www.fanfiction.net/s/11409617/1/A-different-kind-of-hero 
 
 Seeing from the distance of four months, I think it had several really, *really* lame moments, but the concept has alerady been living in my mind for months if not a year. I'm damn sure I'll rewrite it somehow one day.
