[ CC ] Every time one of your romantic relationships ends , a ghost of the person stays behind , visible only to you .

Good take on the prompt, a more straight forward interpretation to be sure. There were one or two minor spelling errors ( loose instead of lose ) but they were very insignificant. You're voice could use a bit of improvement. A large majority of your sentences are very short, no long descriptions or extended thoughts. This style makes for a very jarring read which tends to separate your audience emotionally from your piece. Personal taste criticism, I thought you're ending would've been perfect if you just stopped at `` She never came home.'' I know you were building each set with the `` Fuck you'' ending, but I thought using that twice and breaking on the third makes the twist feel even harsher. You're writing is enjoyable and clever, a little bit of fine tuning is all you really need. Props for putting yourself out there!
