[ PI ] The Words of the King - Flashback - 2000

I liked the alternation between the past and present which kept the story interesting to read. I also liked how you tied in the flashbacks into the present at the end of the story. The only issues I had were in trying to figure out how exactly his past lead to his present, which is kind of a large part of it. As a result, I felt the story kind of lacked cohesiveness. 
 
 Anyway, if in doubt just blame the word limit. I thought it was otherwise really well done, and I quite enjoyed reading this piece, and hope to read more from you.
