[ CC ] Short fiction I 'd like some feedback on .

I stop reading after I saw the name Macon Bleedswell. You did n't really expect that to suspend my disbelief, did you? 
 
 I know, I know: it was a stylistic choice. This reminds me of that recent movie where Selena Gomez and those Disney girls are robbing people while wearing bikinis, and all the fanboys who defended it with such terms as `` unique'' and `` bold''. Sometimes it's better to write a clone of a classic tale ( I recommend Robinson Crusoe, or any story that focuses on one character ) than a heavily stylized piece. Boondock Saints may have a cult following, but that does n't mean it's high quality cinema. 
 
 Did Hemingway ever write a story about a character named Jackson Powerfist? My point with all of this is that you should n't expect to be Hemingway, but you should at least aim that high.
