Ravyn and Susan left me cold. Their relationship did not even qualify as a romance. Susan is such a wise-guy throughout the whole book that I cannot find myself rooting for her part. She is too irritating. Next item: what is going on with one of the main characters? I hate when a good guy becomes bad. Of course, the author will keep this hateful character a little while longer to torture both Ash and readers alike. If you are a faithful DH follower, please save your money and borrow this from the library. Try Vane and Bride's story in Night Play. It's a much better Were-Hunter story.