I have read books on mysticism and they are not so wordy with long sentences. She includes flowerly adjectives that are unnecessary. I have heard that people give up reading her books because they are too difficult to understand. I think it's because she really doesn't write well. I can understand what she is saying if I take time to translate it simply. Taking out all the unnecessary words as I am reading it takes time and not worth the read. There are a lot easier and better written books that have the same information.