I found the story in this book enjoyable but every time I came across another editing issue, it pulled me right out of the suspension of disbelief. And the editing issues are frequent. I mean, seriously, how hard is it to edit a book and make sure "the" is not spelled "tge"? Ridiculously amateur in the writing and editing.Fun story, not particularly original. I got it free and read it on my kindle. Glad it was free. Won't be reading the next two in the series.Steve Alten: learn how to write man. And hire an editor. Please.