As a fifth grade teacher, I would have given a D to a 10 year old if they wrote this. No descriptions. No characterization. No sense of setting. Plot jumps (jauntes?)around like crazy. No sense of connection to anything or anyone. The dialogue was absolutely choppy and lame! I read the whole thing only because I can't stand to leave things unfinished. I only wish the author had felt the same. Honestly, this was one of the worse things I have ever read!