Good start. The idea of a murdered 14-year-old telling her story as resident in heaven is an attractive idea.However, the story-telling goes down hill rapidly as the characters behave in manners so bizarre, so quickly, that as a reader I find it hard to keep interest. The most ridiculous point (amongst many) is the main character's desire to spend her only time back on earth having sex with a little boy (now grown up) who used to like her. If the girl is raped then brutally murdered at the age of 14, one would think sex is probably not the most important thing on the mind of such a soul.A good story must have a good beginning, a decent middle and an equally good end. The author has failed even at the second hurdle.