I was disappointed with the writing and editing. The whole book seemed rushed and did not at all approach the character development and depth in the Shield of Three Lions and Banners of Gold. I didn't feel connected with the characters as I did in the previous books. I have been waiting since I was fourteen for the conclusion to Alix's story and though I am pleased with the outcome, I was wholly disappointed with the book. In addition, misspelling and typos throughout.