I downloaded this book because I thought the storyline sounded fun. I forced myself to read 4 chapters, hoping that it would improve. Other reviewers thought it read like a D&D Campaign. I've never had the opportunity to play D&D so I can't compare it to that. Personally, I thought it was like one of the old "Choose Your Own Adventure" books without the fun of choosing what happens next. I feel bad for those of you that paid for the book. I downloaded it free for my Kindle and am really glad I didn't pay good money for a bad book.