The writing here is tighter, and the plot is better. I liked the part about Tirla the best. I hope she has the best of luck!The second part I liked was about Dortea playing the grandmother role. The funniest part was where she telepathically fusses at Sascha over the bill that Tirla has acquired over new clothing for herself. *grins*Thumbs up for Daffyd. Who is better suited, ethically speaking, to the role as director for the parapsychic institute.Not quite as good as the others, but better than TRP.