As a writer, I know the complexity involved in writing. I can relate to the countless hours it takes to put a story together, the expense of hiring an editor and the excitement one feels when completing a project only to have it rejected by publishers. This book though it did have some errors (but then what book doesn't), was a very delightful book for young girls. I applaud the author of this book and encourage her to continue writing, shake off the negative criticism and keep pursuing the God given talent she was given.