I believe this is one of Shaun Jeffrey's earlier works and, since I read the three of them (chronologically anyway) out of order (as I understand it, from newest to oldest), the beginning did SEEM to reflect that fact. But, I could be wrong. The novel, overall, after the first chapter for sure, was very satisfying and, in my humble opinion, begging for a sequel. I can happily say it was well worth the purchase!!Sincerely,J.G. Franklin