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@@ -84,7 +84,9 @@ Remarkably, the purges were very effectively hidden or obscured from the young,
 As it was, the War against invading fascists was won; yet, from among those youths, the first young Soviet generation for the sake of whose futurous integrity the Bolsheviks self-annihilated, more than half would perish in it. <br> 
 Future is never built through or from wars. Sometimes it can be very narrowly safeguarded, given low enough casualties. But mostly, it is massacred, no matter who wins. <br> 
 And furthermore, among those survivors left relatively undebilitated physically or/and mentally, many would become profoudly shocked, demoralized unto apathy or apolitization or alcoholism following the 1954/1955 revelation of the true scale and scope of 1930s purges... <br>  
-And though the USSR as such survived for approximately span of their median lifetimes, in many ways its founding hope was by 1956 already largely extinguished. Still, even as these histories unrolled, what remained in their wake had included one of this hope's prime symbols, and a key artistic legacy of the USSR: the monuments designed by Vera Mukhina. <br> 
+And though the USSR as such survived for the approximate span of that first generation's healthiest and luckiest representatives (while the median lifetimes all across the USSR grew nearly two-fold, and population as a whole ballooned post-war); yet, in many ways the founding hope of the USSR was by 1956 already largely extinguished. <br>  
+Now, what had remained, after these histories unrolled, suffocating beneath their wheels a great hope, and so many of whe lives who should have and could have been true foundations for that Revolution's hard-won home? <br>   
+Much had remained! And among it all still stands one of this hope's prime symbols, and a key artistic legacy of the USSR: *"The Worker Man & the Kolkhoz Woman"*, alongside other monuments designed by Vera Mukhina. <br> 
 
 **This Variant of *our Soviet Monuments Style LoRA* was fine-tuned over a De-Distilled Version of FLUX.** <br>